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元の翻訳
It's been a while since I last wrote you.
Today, I would like to sell 100 stocks of the Waterworks Bureau that you take care of on my behalf. Kindly advise the steps.
Also, would it be possible to receive the fund after sales in US$?
If it does not work, Riel would do.
Kindly find the attached statement you sent me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,

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It's been a while since I last wrote you.
Today, I would like to sell 100 stocks of the Waterworks Bureau. Would the following procedures be permissible?
And, would it be possible to receive the fund after sales in US$?
If it does not work, Riel would do.
Kindly find the attached statement you sent me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
Regarding 1 and 2, a Japan made server and FTP client are employed.
As for 2, FileZilla is incorporated, too. FileZilla is welknown at overseas, isn't it?
Today, I have tested to display under the different environment. Found was <a class="abc"> on the internet shown as <a class="xyz"> when confirmed through the source with the downloaded abc.phtml via FileZilla.
Perhaps there is a higher possibility of my fundamental miss and misunderstanding on a simple terms. Let me try to work on it again.

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Regarding 1 and 2, I use a Japan made server and FTP client.
As for 2, I use FileZilla too. FileZilla is well known overseas, isn't it?
Today, I have tested displaying under the different environment. When I checked the internet, it was <a class="abc">, but when I checked the source of the abc.phtml downloaded by FileZilla, it was <a class="xyz">.
There is a high possibility that I have made a fundamental mistake or misunderstanding. Let me try to work on it again.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We are sorry for taking long to update the tracking number information due to the delivery trouble at our end.
It should be reflected in the next few days. Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
This item has already been shipped by air.
We apologize the incoinvenience caused for this delivery delay.
One possibility may be that the item is currently going through the customs. Please check to see if you have received the absense notice.

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Thank you for your message.
We are sorry for taking long to update the tracking number information due to the delivery trouble at our end.
It should be reflected in the next few days. Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
This item has already been shipped by air.
We apologize the inconvenience caused for this delivery delay.
One possibility may be that the item may be currently going through the customs. Please also check to see if you have received the absence notice.

元の翻訳
The olive scwaran is now approved to be compound with quasi drugs effective March 2014.
Please be informed that it is now available for developmental examination as quasi drugs together with its existing cosmetic development.

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The olive squalane is now approved to be compounded with quasi-drugs effective March 2014.
Please be informed that it is now available for developmental examination as quasi-drugs together with its existing cosmetic development.

元の翻訳
I would like to revise the Group page html (i.e. replacing H4 tag to H1). Kindly advise if the following html is the correct one for the replacement?
I am having trouble with this, because nothing happened after changed the source and uploaded the FTP.
Additionaly, the deletion of abc.html itself via FTP did not get recognized as an error (I also deleted cache as I thought the problem was about the cache, but the result was the same).
Sorry to ask you for a primary question as such. If any of you know the cause, kindly advise.

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I would like to revise the Group page html (i.e. replacing H4 tag to H1). Kindly advise if the following html is the correct one for the replacement?
I am having trouble with this, because nothing happened after changing the source and uploaded the FTP.
Additionaly, the deletion of abc.html itself via FTP did not get recognized as an error (I also deleted the cache as I thought the problem was about it, but the result was the same).
Sorry to ask you for a primary question as such. If any of you know the cause, kindly advise.

元の翻訳
Since your feedback may negatively impact to our future business, we would like you to delete it if possible.

Many NZ customers were pleased with our Japanese products. Let alone you, as our dear customer, we would like to support NZ customers to buy those Japanese products. It's not too late to re-ship the correct item to you. If you need any help, please do let us know. We would do anything for you to the best of our knowledge and expertise.

If you would delete the comment, please follow the below steps. Thank you for your kind understanding and best regards,

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Since your feedback may negatively impact to our future business, we would like you to delete it if possible.

Many NZ customers were pleased with our Japanese products. Let alone you, as our dear customer, we would like to support NZ customers to buy those Japanese products in the future too. It's not too late to re-ship the correct item to you. If you need any help, please do let us know. We would do anything for you to the best of our knowledge and expertise.

If you would delete the comment, please follow the below steps. Thank you for your kind understanding and best regards,

元の翻訳
Since your feedback may negatively impact to our future business, we would like you to delete it if possible.

Many NZ customers were pleased with our Japanese products. Let alone you, as our dear customer, we would like to support NZ customers to buy those Japanese products. It's not too late to re-ship the correct item to you. If you need any help, please do let us know. We would do anything for you to the best of our knowledge and expertise.

If you would delete the comment, please follow the below steps. Thank you for your kind understanding and best regards,

修正後
Since your feedback may negatively impact on our future business, we would like you to delete it if possible.

Many NZ customers were pleased with our Japanese products. Let alone you, as our dear customers, we would like to support NZ customers to buy those Japanese products. It's not too late to re-ship the correct item to you. If you need any help, please do let us know. We would do anything for you to the best of our knowledge and expertise.

If you would delete the comment, please follow the below steps. Thank you for your kind understanding and best regards,

元の翻訳
この件に対応してくださる御社の意欲に感謝します。100％ポジティブなフィードバック評価を達成できる隠れた努力がこういうところにあるのだということがわかりました。商品は損の申し立てを明日にでも行います。明日以降は旅行に出ているため、それ以降はこの件に対して参加することができません。7/17には戻りますので、もしそういうことになった場合は予めご了承下さい。ちょっと遅すぎでしょうか？代替案としてそのカメラを地元で修理することは可能でしょうか？

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この件に対応してくださる御社の意欲に感謝します。100％ポジティブなフィードバック評価を達成できる隠れた努力がこういうところにあるのだということがわかりました。商品破損の申し立てを明日にでも行います。明日以降は旅行に出ているため、それ以降はこの件に対応することができません。7/17には戻りますので、もしそういうことになった場合は予めご了承下さい。ちょっと遅すぎでしょうか？代替案としてそのカメラを地元で修理することは可能でしょうか？

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message. I have checked inside the package over and over to see if I could find the knob just in case. I couldn't find it after all. I am in a major situation. If the knob had come off during the transportaion, it should still remain somewhere in the package but it wasn't there. How could I do when an item is lost on its way?

If not found, could I guy the knob only?

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Thank you for the message. I have checked inside the package over and over to see if I could find the knob just in case. I couldn't find it after all. I am in trouble very much. If the knob had come off during the transportation , it should still remain somewhere in the package but it wasn't there. How could I do when the knob is lost on its way?

If not found, could I buy the knob only?

元の翻訳
We purchase these kettles based upon the understanding they were made in Japan, however it is difficult to prove so.
If you prefer the dragon design, we would recommend you with ○○.
This one looks more classic, with its detailed work.
Nevertheless, it is totally up to you upon taking a look at the photo.

Please refer to the below for how to enjoy using ○○ for a long time.

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I purchase these kettles based upon the understanding they were made in Japan, however it is difficult to prove so.
If you prefer the dragon design, I would recommend you with ○○.
This one looks more classic, with its detailed work.
Nevertheless, it is totally up to you upon taking a look at the photo.

Please refer to the below for how to enjoy using ○○ for a long time.

元の翻訳
Did you manage figuring out where the item is at? Tracking the item may be time-consuming as there are so many post offices in NY.
Regarding the possibility of re-delivery from Japan, I have checked with the person in charge of EMS at Japan Post. However he told me there is nothing we could do from our end once the item has gone through the central office.

You don't need to buy ◯ for me since I have already got one.
I obtained the new issue of your favourite ☆, so I will send it to you with ◯'s book that includes his autograph.
Count down on days until I send it to you by the middle of next month.
The time I used to play ◇ was when I was a junior high school student, so I couldn't buy the guide book to figure out the divergence.

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Did you manage to figure out where the item is at? Tracking the item may be time-consuming as there are so many post offices in NY.
Regarding the possibility of re-delivery from Japan, I have checked with the person in charge of EMS at Japan Post. However, he told me there is nothing we could do from our end once the item has gone through the central office.

You don't need to buy ◯ for me since I have already got one.
I obtained the new issue of your favourite ☆, so I will send it to you with ◯'s book that includes his autograph.
Countdown of days until I send it to you by the middle of next month.
The time I used to play ◇ was when I was a junior high school student, so I couldn't buy the guide book to figure out the divergence.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We could adjust the price range to a certain degree.
Thank you and best regards,

Thank you for your message.
We are glad to hear that you received the item.
We are sorry.
We do not have an English instruction manual since the item was made in Japan.
Will double-check, but please excuse us if not available.


Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you, but could you please email us the item cancellation notice?

We have acknowledged your request.
Kindly return the item upon arrival at your end.
Please refer to the return policy stated on our website.

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Thank you for your message.
We could adjust the price range to a certain degree.
Thank you and best regards,

Thank you for your message.
We are glad to hear that you received the item.
We are sorry.
We do not have an English instruction manual since the item was made in Japan.
We will double-check, but please excuse us if one is not available.


Thank you for your message.
Sorry to bother you, but could you please email us the item cancellation notice?

We have acknowledged your request.
Kindly return the item upon arrival at your end.
Please refer to the return policy stated on our website.