Naoko Adachi (sunflower804) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
When a contract concerning a completed structure of right holders is going to be made, it is usually handled legally from the beginning in Japan. For a matter like this in Japan, a company lawyer is joined in for initial negotiation such as email exchange. I think there is anoher meeting today, but it will be very complecated if the focus is what has been said or not. It is usual in Japan to conduct tradings of real estate and rights very carefully. It will be very tiring for Mr DI to stand against all of them.

修正後
When a contract concerning a completed structure of right holders is going to be made, it is usually handled legally from the beginning in Japan. For a matter like this in Japan, a company lawyer is joined in for initial negotiation such as email exchange. I think there is another meeting today, but it will be very complecated if the focus is what has been said or not. It is usual in Japan to conduct tradings of real estate and rights very carefully. It will be very tiring for Mr DI to stand against all of them.

元の翻訳
From now on, you should have a company lawyer who can be involved in the negotiation from the beginning as a Taiwan group. Needless to say, the legal measure is our precaution. I believe that these matters should be dealt with by a professional.

Regarding Komamoto, it is unclear whether this will remain as an issue. Because the purchasing document and the agreement are submitted to the counterparty, renegotiation table will be possibly set when all conditions can be fulfilled, or there may be purchasing demand.

修正後
From now on, you should have a company lawyer who can be involved in the negotiation from the beginning as a Taiwan group. Needless to say, the legal measure is our precaution. I believe that these matters should be dealt with by a professional.

Regarding Kumamoto, it is unclear whether this will remain as an issue. Because the purchasing document and the agreement are submitted to the counter party, renegotiation table will be possibly set when all conditions can be fulfilled, or there may be purchasing demand.

元の翻訳
アップルはアイフォンの画面を大きくしないことを批判されています。去年は、画面を３．５インチから４インチに長くしましたが、十分ではありませんでした。サムソンの５インチやHTCの４．７インチの電話機に比べると、アイフォンはとても小さく感じます。

それが良いという人もいますが、ほとんどの人は大きいアイフォンがあれば良いのにと思っています。

ホワイトは言います。「つまりは、アイフォンの発売につき一つのサイズというのは万人受けせず、消費者に選択しを与えることで、会社のマーケットシェアを拡大できる可能性があるだろう、という現実にアップルは直面していると考えます。」

修正後
アップルはアイフォンの画面を大きくしないことを批判されています。去年は、画面を３．５インチから４インチに長くしましたが、十分ではありませんでした。サムソンの５インチやHTCの４．７インチの電話機に比べると、アイフォンはとても小さく感じます。

それが良いという人もいますが、ほとんどの人は大きいアイフォンがあれば良いのにと思っています。

ホワイトは言います。「つまりは、アイフォンの発売につき一つのサイズというのは万人受けせず、消費者に選択肢を与えることで、会社のマーケットシェアを拡大できる可能性がある、という現実にアップルは直面していると考えます。」