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I am glad that I had received an e-mail from you after returning to Japan.
Since then I have been hoping to go there again.

I am going to visit USA in July this year, and I will let you know.
I will stay at ABC Hotel in Las Vegas for 4 days, and please let me know
if you know a campaign you can recommend.

I am looking forward to having a good time again.

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I am glad that I had received an e-mail from you after returning to Japan.
Since then I have been hoping to go there again.

I let you know I am going to visit USA again in July this year.
I will stay at ABC Hotel in Las Vegas for 4 nights, and please let me know
if you know a campaign you can recommend.

I am looking forward to having a good time again.

元の翻訳
The problem this time is that the explanation was different from your fact.
If you listed a correct explanation, I did not purchase it.
In other words, the cause of the problem is you.
For this reason, I insist that you should pay the returning shipping charge.

If you do not pay this shipping charge, i propose that you refund part of the price↵
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without returning the item. In case of returning part of the price, it is dollars that is half of the price.

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The problem this time is that the description was different from fact provided by you.
If you listed a correct explanation, I would not have purchased it.
In other words, the cause of the problem is you.
For this reason, I demand that you should pay the returning shipping charge.

If you do not agree to pay this shipping charge, I propose that you give me a partial refund while I keep the item without returning. In case you choose to give me a partial refund, the amount should be XXdollars, which is a half of the total amount that I have paid.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for inquiring. We would like to accept your offer. The page of listing the items is changed to free shipping. We cannot attach a filter. At this lens, we cannot attachthe hood if we attach the filter. The item is very beautiful.

2. We afraid that the item was returned to us. Should we send it to you again? Or should we refund it? We will be waiting for your reply. Thank you.

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1. Thank you for inquiring. We would like to accept your offer. In the page of listing, the items is changed to free shipping. We can not attach a filter. At this lens, we can not attach the hood. if we attach the filter. The item is very beautiful.

2. We are afraid that the item was returned to us. Should we send it to you again? Or should we refund it? We will be waiting for your reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for inquiring. We would like to accept your offer. The page of listing the items is changed to free shipping. We cannot attach a filter. At this lens, we cannot attachthe hood if we attach the filter. The item is very beautiful.

2. We afraid that the item was returned to us. Should we send it to you again? Or should we refund it? We will be waiting for your reply. Thank you.

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1. Thank you for your inquiry. We would like to accept your offer. We just updated the listing page by changing the shipping charges to free shipping. We cannot attach a filter. With this lens, we cannot attach the hood if we attach the filter. The item is very beautiful. We look forward to your purchase.

2. We are afraid that the item was returned to us. Should we send it to you again? Or should we give you a refund? We will be waiting for your reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello.
If you purchase it today, we will send it by EMS. I can send it from 5 to 15 days.

Hello.
We can send it to France.
We don't know if this item is limited or not, but we can explain about this item.
The following is the explanation.

Thank you for ASIN code and URL.
We cannot reduce the shipping charge for this item because the shipping charge is the same regardless of the place to where we send.

However, we are going to send it to USA by air.
Thank you.

The item is made of unwoven cloth.
Thank you.

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Hello.
If you purchase it today, we will send it by EMS. It will be delivered within 5 days at earliest and 15 days at latest.

Hello.
We can send it to France.
We don't know if this item is limited or not, but we can explain about this item.
The following is the explanation.

Thank you for the ASIN code and URL.
We cannot reduce the shipping charge for this item due to the flat-rate price.

However, we are going to send it to USA by air.
Thank you.

The item is made of unwoven cloth.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I inquired to post office in Japan.
They said that the package has already been in Canada and they did not know↵
where it was.
I hate to say, but could you inquire to call center in Canada by telephone?
The telephone number is 1-866-607-6301.
The tracking number of the package is R000000JP.
We regret to say, but this is all we can do in Japan.
The package has already been in Canada, and please inquire by telephone.

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I have made an inquiry regarding the shipment to post office in Japan.
They said that the package has already been in Canada and they did not know the whereabouts of the package.
I'm afraid to ask you but could you make a phone call to the call center in Canada to make an inquiry?
The telephone number is 1-866-607-6301.
The tracking number of the package is R000000JP.
We regret to say, but this is all we can do in Japan.
The package has already been in Canada, and please inquire by telephone.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。メールを再度ありがとうございました。
コンボの値段は、１つ８０円です。
価格はかなり競合的なので、今回、割引できません。

ありがとう。注文を進め、まもなく、詳細をお知らせします。

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こんにちは。メールを再度ありがとうございました。
コンボの値段は以前と同様１つ８０米ドルです。
価格をかなり抑えているので、今回割引をすることはできません。

ありがとうございます。注文を進め、まもなく詳細をお知らせします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for considering the item again.
I am glad to have receive this kind of reply.
I understand. After changing address, I will be waiting for customers who purchase the item again. Thank you.

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Thank you for considering the purchase of the item again.
I am glad to have received such a reply.
I understand. After changing address, I will expect you to purchase the item again. Thank you.

元の翻訳
It was perfect if we could have 1 more hour to see the War Memorial Hall.
However, other than that, I enjoyed it to the fullest.

People tend to think that JSA tour is dangerous because we need a letter of consent
for the tour.
But it is basically safe, and it is a very rare tour where we can feel history by visiting the sightseeing spot.

The activity within JSA area is monitored by South Korean army, and this situation
is the same by all tour companies.

By considering the risk that I might be late for the bus, I wanted to act by having enough time.
I recommend that those who have fun in the previous evening and want to get up late in the next morning shpuld appy to KTB.

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For me, it would be perfect if we could have had 1 more hour to see the War Memorial Hall.
However, other than that, I enjoyed it to the fullest.

People tend to think that JSA tour is dangerous because we need a letter of consent
for the tour.
But it is basically safe, and it is a very rare tour where we can feel history by visiting the sightseeing spot.

The activity within JSA area is monitored by South Korean army, and this situation
is the same by all tour companies.

By considering the risk that I might be late for the bus, I wanted to act by having enough time.
I recommend that those who have fun in the previous evening and want to get up late in the next morning shpuld appy to KTB.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I have not sent yet.

As I will send it together, I will wait until the auction of is completed.
I have already received the money that you transferred for the 3 products a few days ago.
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As for shipping charge, the maximum number of the products you can put into a box↵
made of cardboard is 3 to 4 in terms of security.
I wil let you know if I need addtional shipping charge.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I have not shipped OO yet.

In order to combine the shipment, I will wait until the auction of OO is completed.
I have already received the payment for the 3 products.
As for shipping charge, the maximum number of the products you can put into a cardboard box is 3 to 4 due to the security measures.
I will let you know if I need additional shipping charge.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I have not sent yet.

As I will send it together, I will wait until the auction of is completed.
I have already received the money that you transferred for the 3 products a few days ago.

As for shipping charge, the maximum number of the products you can put into a box↵
made of cardboard is 3 to 4 in terms of security.
I wil let you know if I need addtional shipping charge.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I have not sent◯◯yet.

In order to send it together, I will wait until the auction of is completed.
I have already received the money that you transferred for the 3 products a few days ago.

As for shipping charge, the maximum number of the products you can put into a cardboard box is 3 to 4 in terms of security.
I will let you know if there is additional shipping charge.

元の翻訳
I am sorry, but I cancel this order due to change of schedule.
I appreciate your understanding.

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I am very sorry, but I would like to cancel this order due to change of schedule.
I appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Why don't you take a rest during your long trip and have tea that contains hospitality of Hokkaido.?

I would like those who visit Hokkaido all the way to take a rest
during their long trip.
It is the tea that contains that kind of hospitality.

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Why don't you take a break during your long trip and enjoy the tea filled with the hospitality of Hokkaido.?

We would like those who visit Hokkaido all the way to take a break
during their long trip.
It is the tea that contains that kind of hospitality.

元の翻訳
Regarding scratch of the lens that is the problem this time, we received an answer from repair company that they could not repair at 200 dollars.

The reason is that the scratch, fungus and haze are spread all parts of the element,
and they must analyze each lens and polish them.

In other words, it requires repairing that requires a large volume of work and time.
The repairing expense exceeds the price of the item this time.
For this reason, I would like to not repair but return it to you.
I appreciate your understanding.

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Regarding scratch of the lens that is the problem this time, we received an answer from repair company that they could not repair it for 200 dollars.

The reason is that the scratch, fungus and haze are spread all parts of the element,
and they must analyze each lens and polish them.

In other words, it requires repairing that requires a large volume of work and time.
The repairing expense exceeds the price of the item this time.
For this reason, I would like to not repair but return it to you.
I appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Thank you for cooperation.

My customer would like to purchase the spring set at hammock chair.
Do you have its stock?

Best regards

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Thank you for your cooperation.

My customer would like to purchase springs for a hammock chair.
Do you have them in stock?

Best regards

元の翻訳
Today I received a mouth piece. But regrettably I found that this is not an original one.
I have seen several hundreds of solorists, and found it immediately(I measured it by gauge for confirmation and found that its opening is larger that that of original one).

I purchased this because "no reface!!!Original Tip" was listed.
For this reason, may I return this mouthpiece and refund in full?

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Today I received the mouth piece. But regrettably I found that this is not an original.
I have seen several hundreds of Soloists, and immediately saw it was fake (I measured it by gauge for confirmation and found that its opening is larger than the original).

I purchased this because it said "no reface!!!Original Tip" in the listing.
For this reason, may I return this mouthpiece and get a full refund?

元の翻訳
Good day!

I checked homepage of USPS.
I found the details as follows.

If you do not received a notification of redelivery, you can call USPS and
request them to deliver it again. Please call them once.

I checked telephone number of USPS, and it probably will be this number.

If you do not receive it 15 days later, it will be returned to me.
For this reason, please call as soon as possible.

Thank you for contacting me several times.

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Good day!

I checked the USPS website.
I found the details as follows.

If you do not receive a notification of re-delivery, you can call USPS and
request them to deliver it again. Please call them once.

I checked the telephone number of USPS, and it probably will be this number.

If you do not receive it in 15 days later, it will be returned to me.
For this reason, please call as soon as possible.

Thank you for contacting me many times.

元の翻訳
Good day!

I checked homepage of USPS.↵
I found the details as follows.

If you do not received a notification of redelivery, you can call USPS and
request them to deliver it again. Please call them once.

I checked telephone number of USPS, and it probably will be this number.

If you do not receive it 15 days later, it will be returned to me.
For this reason, please call as soon as possible.

Thank you for contacting me several times.

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Good day!

I checked the homepage of USPS, and found the following details:

If you have not received a notification of redelivery, you can call USPS and
request them to deliver it again. Please call them once.

I checked the telephone number of USPS, and it probably will be this number.

If you do not receive it after 15 days, it will be returned to me.
For this reason, please call them as soon as possible.

Thank you for contacting me many times.

元の翻訳
I apologize that delivery was delayed due to my mistake this time.

Due to trouble of my personal computer, I could not↵
check your orer.

Today I sent a product, and please wait for 4 to 6 days
before you receive it.

Thd post office in USA is tracking the product.↵
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If the product is found, It will be delivered to you.

Usually it takes about 2 weeks to track it,
and please wait for a while.

I requested the post office in japan to track↵
the product again.
Even if the product is not found, I will compensate it
in full, and please do not worry about it.

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I apologize for the delayed delivery that was caused by the fault on my side.

I was not able to check your order, due to some errors occurred on my PC.

I have shipped the item today, so, please wait for 4 to 6 days
before you receive it.

The USPS is currently tracking your parcel (The USPS is currently investigating the whereabouts of your parcelでもいいかなと思います。）↵
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It will be delivered to you as soon as it is found.

Usually it takes about 2 weeks to track it,
so please wait for a while.

I requested Japan Post to track your pacel again.
Even if the product is not found, I will compensate it
in full, so please do not worry about it.

元の翻訳
I apologize to reply you late.
I am sorry that arrival of the package is late unfortunately.

I checked the situation of mail in Singapore.
Even if it is delivered when a person who receives is not at home,
nofice of delivery must be left at the home since it is a registered mail.

You have to go to post office that is indicated in the notice of delivery to pick it up,
or request them to deliver it again.

In this case, due to delay, the package has not been transported to Singapore yet.
What I can do is to ask Japan Post to track the situation, but it seems that it takes
time to track the packages, which have already been sent from Japan.

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I apologize to reply you late.
I am sorry to hear that the belated arrival of the package.

I checked the situation of postal services in Singapore.
Even if it is delivered when a person who receives is not at home,
nofice of delivery must be left at the home since it is a registered mail.

You have to go to post office that is indicated in the notice of delivery to pick it up,
or request them to deliver it again.

In this case, it appears that there was a delay, and the package has not been transported to Singapore yet.
What I can do is to ask Japan Post to track the situation, but it seems that it takes
time to track the packages, which have already been sent from Japan.

元の翻訳
Before 1945, not only in village but also in city, most farmers produced firewood by themselves.
Until the first half of 1950, about 85 percent of total firewood consumed was produced by themselves.

Families in cities used to purchase firewood through merchant.
By difference of charcoal, it is classified into white and black.
The white one is late in catching fire but it lasts long time, so it was used for warming the house.
The black one is fast to catch fire, but its power is weak and it lasted short time, so it was used for cooking.

By researching consumption data of household account that has been carried out since Meiji Era across the nation, we can estimate consumption of energy used at home in history.

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Before 1945, not only in villages but also in cities, most farmers produced firewood by themselves.
Until the first half of 1950, about 85 percent of total firewood consumed was produced by themselves.

Families in cities purchased firewood through a merchant.
As for the difference of charcoal kinds, it is classified into white and black.
The white one is late in catching fire but its power is strong and it lasts a long time, so it was used for warming the house.
The black one is fast to catch fire, but its power is weak and it lasts a short time, so it was used for cooking.

By researching consumption data of household account that has been carried out since Meiji Era across the nation, we can estimate consumption of energy used at home in history.

元の翻訳
Can I change breast of baby doll that Kory to baby doll that breathes?
The other day I found a baby which smells milk.
Was that smell of powder?
It is not the smell of cosmetics such as baby colon and baby powder,
but is truly the smell of milk felt from the baby who drank milk.
The baby doll of Coroller had the smell I was looking for.
I would like to have this smell.
I am sorry to interrupt you while you are busy.
I can ask only Kory whom I trust.
Thank you.

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Kory, could you make the chest of the baby doll to breathe?
The other day I found a baby who smells like milk.
Was that smell of powder?
It is not the smell of cosmetics such as baby colon and baby powder,
but is truly the scent of milk coming from the baby who just finished drinking milk.
The baby doll from Coroller had the scent I was looking for.
I would like to have this scent.
I am sorry to interrupt you while you are busy.
Kory, you are the only one I trust enough to ask questions.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Welcome!
I handle Japanese beautiful antiques.
I will do my best to make your life better.

I will pack the product carefully, and send it by EMS.
I have traded on ebay so far.↵
I am good at feedbacking very much. Please do not worry about it.

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Welcome!
I handle Japanese beautiful antiques.
I will do my best to make your life better.

I will pack the product carefully, and send it by EMS.
I have traded on ebay, and I have been receiving great feedback.↵
So, please do not worry about it.