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Thank you for contacting us.

We are sorry that there is a defect at the item.
As we did not find such a defect when we inspected it.↵
we sold it to you. We apologize to have given you an inconvenience.↵
We hate to say, but could you return it to us?↵
As this is the defect in the initial period, we will refund the amount that you had paid ↵
via Paypal as soon as we receive the item.↵
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We give you too much work, but we appreciate your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting us.

We are sorry that a defect was found with the item.
We sold it as it passed the inspection with no such symptom. We apologize for the inconvenience caused. We'd hate to bother you, but could you return the item to us first? Since this is the initial defect, as soon as we receive the returned item, we will issue you a full refund via PayPal for the amount you have paid to us. Sorry for the trouble but your kind understanding is appreciated.

元の翻訳
Thank you all the time.
Today I contacted Federal Express, and they said they have not received an invoice from you yet.
I will send an invoice today to them, and please send an invoice to me by e-mail.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your continued business.
Today, I contacted Federal Express, and they said they have not received an invoice from you yet.
Please send the invoice to me by email, I will forward it to them as soon as I receive it from you.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
thank you for the message.

We will ship it soon, and please wait for a little while before we ship it.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
Could you print out a label of returning the item on Amazon?
If it is possible, please return it to the following address.
After we receive the item, we will process the refunding.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
We are sorry to have kept you waiting.
We will send the item tomorrow.
Thank you.

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thank you for the message.

We will ship it soon, and please wait for a little while till we ship it.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
Could you print out a label of returning the item on Amazon?
If it is not possible, please return it to the following address.
After we receive the item, we will process the refunding.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
We are sorry to have kept you waiting.
We will send the item tomorrow.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I have not known about it.
Thank you for contacting me.
I am so happy for you. Congratulations!

Lisa who holds a cute baby looks so happy.
Congratulatios again!↵
Thank you for such a nice report.

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I had no idea!
Thank you for contacting me.
I am so happy for you. Congratulations!

Lisa looks so happy holding a cute baby.↵
Congratulations again!↵
You made me proud.
Thank you for sharing me such a great news!

元の翻訳
I have not received items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you sent them to me?

Please let me know when you sent them.

Thank you.

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I have not received the items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you already shipped them out to me?

Please let me know when you have shipped them.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I have not received items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you sent them to me?

Please let me know when you sent them.

Thank you.

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I have not received items that I ordered on July 8th and 11th.
Have you sent them to me yet?

Please let me know when you sent them.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending a psot card to me whenever you travel abroad.
As I found while I was traveling, we don't have time to send a post card while we are traveling (
we are busy), and it is difficult to do so.↵
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Taiwan is one of the countries that I would like to visit, so this card is a quite memorative one.

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Thank you for sending me a postcard whenever you travel abroad.
From my personal experiences, it's hard to find time to send a post card while we are traveling (
we are busy). Taiwan is one of the countries that I would like to visit, so this postcard shall serve as a good memory.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I am sorry to be late very much.
The tracking number is as follows.
I sent by EMS, and you will receive the item in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
I have sent it to you for more than a month ago,↵
but haven't you receive it yet?
I will check it here. I apologize to you.

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Thank you for your message.

We sincerely apologize for the delay.
The tracking number is as follows.
Since we have shipped it by EMS, you should expect it to arrive in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
We have shipped it to you over a month ago, but haven't you receive it yet?
We will check the status from our end.↵
Please accept our sincerest apologies for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I am sorry to be late very much.
The tracking number is as follows.
I sent by EMS, and you will receive the item in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
I have sent it to you for more than a month ago,
but haven't you receive it yet?
I will check it here. I apologize to you.

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Thank you for your message.

I am sorry for the delay in my reply very much.

I sent by EMS, and you will receive the item in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
It has passed more than one month from the shipment,
but haven't you received it yet?
I will check it here. I apologize to you.

元の翻訳
The website to see is here→http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/#top

Hirotomo Miura "I'm Fire"
【Youtube】http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Of4bUdLba9g
【iTunes】https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/the-entertainer/id731242104

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To view and listen, here is the website→http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/#top

Hirotomo Miura "I'm Fire"
【Youtube】http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Of4bUdLba9g
【iTunes】https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/the-entertainer/id731242104

元の翻訳
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If you have a question, opinion and request, please inquire by using the following form.

A person in charge will reply you.

We cannot reply due to contents. We request that you understand it.

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Inquiry

If you have a question, concern, and request, please contact us by using the following form.

A person in charge will respond you.

Please note that there may be some cases where we may not be able to respond depending on the details of your question, concern, or request.

元の翻訳
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ご注意：あなたの情報は、現在、確認中です。他の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

元の翻訳
警告：貴方の情報は、現在、有効です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

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注意：貴方の情報は、現在認証中です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

元の翻訳
We will give 16 percent discount for ○○ in the limited period.

How are you?
A large scale typhoon passed Japan, and we are↵
starting the summer.
It is good to have a cold tea in this season.
Please take care of yourself.

By the way, I am going to move at the end of this month.
For this reason, I would like to sell the items I have as much as possible.
It is a heavy work if I have a lot of items.

If you trade the items that I listed at eBay by Paypal directl, I will give you 16 peercent discount.
The due day is July 20th.
If you are interested in some of the items, please let me know.

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We will give a 16 percent discount for ○○ for the limited time period.

How are you?
A large-scale typhoon passed Japan, and it is the beginning of the summer.
It is good to have a cold tea in this season.
Please take care of yourself.

By the way, I am going to move at the end of this month.
For this reason, I would like to sell as much items in stock as possible.
It is a heavy work if I have a lot of items.

If you directly order the items that I listed on eBay with Paypal, I will give you a 16 percent discount.
This limited time offer ends on July 20th.
If you are interested in some of the items, please let me know.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry to give you inconvenience.
it was a mistke of the shipping section that number of your address was missing.
We will reinforce the checking to prevent that it happens again.

Thank you for reporting to us and receiving the item.
We appreciate you.

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We are very sorry for the inconvenience we may have caused you.
it was due to a mistake caused by the shipping section that the number of your address was missing.(→... that a part of your address was missing)
We will reinforce our checking system to prevent the recurrence of the same mistake.

Thank you for contacting us and receiving the item.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We regret to say, but this item might be lost, and thereby we sent it to you again.

We sincerely apologize that we had given to you a trouble.

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Thank you for your message.
We regret to say, but this item might be lost, and thereby we sent it to you again.

We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience we may have caused you.

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I am very glad that you like a model of the airplane.

However, as your son is in the hospital, I am worried about it very much.
I heard that he was burned. How is he?
I hope from the bottom of my heart that he recovers soon.

I am sorry that it took you a lot of troubles at customs inspection.
I will check it here to reduce your troubles there in the future.

It is getting hotter in Japan, and summer is starting.

Please take care of yourself.
I I keep my fingers crossed that your son gets well soon.

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I am very glad that you like the model airplane.

However, as your son is in the hospital, I am worried about it very much.
I heard that he was burned. How is he?
I hope, from the bottom of my heart, that he recovers soon.

I am sorry that it took you a lot of troubles with regard to customs inspection.
I will check it here to reduce your troubles there in the future.

It is getting hotter in Japan, and summer is starting.

Please take care of yourself.
I keep my fingers crossed for your son's quick recovery.