スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for ordering.
We checked your inquiry.
We cannot send it to you at free of charge, but can discount by 2 .5 dollars
If you agree to our proposal that the shipping method is changed from expedited to standard, we will give you the discount by 8 dollars.
In case of standard, it takes from 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
In case of expedited, it takes from 3 to 6 days, and the possibility of troubles that occurs during its transportation such as loss is fewer in comparison with the standard.
We ask for you to consider it, and look forward to your reply.

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Thank you for ordering.
We checked your inquiry.
The shipping cost can’t be free, but instead we can give you a $2.5 discount.
If you agree to our proposal that the shipping method is changed from expedited to standard, we will give you the discount by 8 dollars.
In case of standard, it takes from 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
In case of expedited, it takes from 3 to 6 days, and the possibility of troubles that occurs during its transportation such as loss is fewer in comparison with the standard.
We ask you for considering it, and look forward to your reply.

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Thank you for inquiring us.
We are very sorry, but we do not manufacture the black outfits used for work by size XS for me.
We have this outfit for women whose size is large and red color as well as the one with design by size medium or large.
In regard with juban, we are the store which handles "Japanese style outfit.
However, among this type of stores, the "store which sells kimono" tends to handle juban as their specialty, and we do not have any plan to manufacture and sell it.
We apologize that we cannot be of your help, but we hope that you understand us.

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Thank you for inquiring us.
We are very sorry, but we do not manufacture the black outfits used for work by size XS.
We have this outfit for women whose size is large and red color as well as the one with design by size medium or large.
In regard with juban, we are the store which handles "Japanese style outfit.
However, among this type of stores, the "store which sells kimono" tends to handle juban as their specialty, and we do not have any plan to manufacture and sell it.
We apologize that we cannot be of your help, but we hope that you understand us.

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As　for 50 bundles of rose, the growth of the rose has been delayed due to influence of the weather.

We hate to say, but we need 2 weeks until they are grown.

When we find the day to send them to you, we will let you know.
We appreciate your understanding.

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As for a bunch of 50 roses, the growth of the roses has been delayed due to the weather.

We are sorry, but please give us about 2 weeks until they are grown.

When we find out the shipping schedule, we will get back to you again.
We appreciate your understanding.

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Thank you for purchasing this time.
Although we have received your order, your status of the order is under ○　now. The shipping is "on hold" for some reason.

For this problem, we have to check X who is responsible for the shipping.

As we sometimes need important information such as how to settle and address to which it is sent, we would be glad if you cotact .
The URL of is as follows.

Please select ○○.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for purchasing this time.
Although we have received your order, your status of the order is under ○　now. The shipping is "on hold" for some reason.

For this problem, we have to check with X who is responsible for the shipping.

As we sometimes need important information such as how to settle and address to which it is sent, we would be glad if you cotact .
The URL of is as follows.

Please select ○○.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I inquired to the server company, and they said that permission was 600 by default.
They also said that if we changed the script of PHP, it was going to work.

May I ask you the support?

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I inquired the server company, and they said that permission was 600 by default.
They also said that if we changed the script of PHP, it was going to work.

May I ask you for the support?

元の翻訳
I inquired to the server company, and they said that permission was 600 by default.
They also said that if we changed the script of PHP, it was going to work.

May I ask you the support?

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I inquired the server company, and they said that permission was 600 by default.
They also said that if we changed the script of PHP, it was going to work.

May I ask you for the support?

元の翻訳
I place an order of bearing mount and screw of A that I had asked in the last email.
The used one that you had suggested is fine.
The parts that had been used by A and returned is fine.
I ask for you to sell it as inexpensive as possible, and list the sales amount in the invoice.

Have you received B?
If you can, I would like you to send it with the item that I order this time.

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I place an order of bearing mount and screw of A that I had asked in the last email.
The used ones that you had recommended will suffice.
and so will the parts that had been used by A and was returned.
I ask for you to sell them as inexpensive as possible, and list the sales amount in the invoice.

Have you received B?
If you can, I would like you to send it with the item that I order this time.

元の翻訳
Today I heard about the damage compensation from post office in Japan.
Although post office in Japan has already contacted the post office in USA, the Japanese post office said that the post office in USA worked slowly for the damage compensation.
You must go to the post office to make the payment of the compensation faster.

If you compensate for me via Ebay, you will lose 492 dollars as sales amount of the item.
But if the post office compensate for me, you do not lose it.
You will receive a large benefit in this matter, so I ask you to go to the post office and negotiate to make the arrangement of the damage compensation faster.

If this is solved, I would be glad to feed back to you positively.

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Today I heard about the compensation for damages from post office in Japan.
Although post office in Japan has already contacted the post office in USA, the Japanese post office said that the post office in USA is slow in working for the compensation.
You must go to the post office to make the payment of the compensation faster.

If you compensate for me via Ebay, you will lose 492 dollars as sales amount of the item.
But if the post office compensate for me, you do not lose it.
You will receive a large benefit in this matter, so I ask you to go to the post office and negotiate to make the arrangement of the damage compensation faster.

If this is solved, I would be glad to feed back to you positively.

元の翻訳
330rd line in the file below is a part about the copyright. It should be edited.

I would be glad if I can use an affiliate of iTunes.
Recently not many people purchase CD, so it does not sell well via Amazon.

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Around the 330th line in the file below is the part about the copyright. It should be edited.

I would be glad if I can use an affiliate of iTunes.
Recently not many people purchase CDs, so it does not appear to sell well via Amazon.

元の翻訳
330rd line in the file below is a part about the copyright. It should be edited.

I would be glad if I can use an affiliate of iTunes.
Recently not many people purchase CD, so it does not sell well via Amazon.

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330rd line in the file below is a part about the copyright. It should be edited.

I would be glad if I can use an affiliate of iTunes.
Recently not many people purchase CDs, so it does not sell well via Amazon.

元の翻訳
We understand it.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the followings.

You might receive it very late(as it is returned to Japan)
In that case, we might process refunding.
We will trade with you under above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay after the payment day,
we processed in this way.
We request that you understand it.

We will check, and we appreciate your little patience.

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I understand it.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the followings.

You might receive it very late(as it is returned to Japan)
In that case, we might process refunding.
We will have business with you under above conditions.

I also feel sorry for causing you inconvenience this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay if the payment is overdue,
we processed in this way.
We appreciate for your understanding of this matter.

We will check, and we appreciate your little patience.

元の翻訳
We understand it.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,↵
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the followings.

You might receive it very late(as it is returned to Japan)
In that case, we might process refunding.
We will trade with you under above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay after the payment day,↵
we processed in this way.
We request that you understand it.

We will check, and we appreciate your little patience.

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We understand it.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not a PayPal confirmed address, you may not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the following:

You may receive it very late (as it is returned to Japan)
In that case, we may process refunding.
We will trade with you under above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for eBay after the payment day, we processed in this way.
We request that you understand it.

We will check, and we appreciate your patience.

元の翻訳
We understand it.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the followings.

You might receive it very late(as it is returned to Japan)
In that case, we might process refunding.
We will trade with you under above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay after the payment day,
we processed in this way.
We request that you understand it.

We will check, and we appreciate your little patience.

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I understand.
We will send it by registered mail, but as it is not an address that is registered on Paypal,
you might not receive it. Under this situation, we appreciate that you understand the following:

- You might receive it very late (as it is returned to Japan)
-In that case, we might process a refund.
We will trade with you under the above conditions.

I also feel sorry this time.
As we sometimes have to pay the fee for Ebay after the payment day,
we processed in this way.
We ask for your understanding with this matter.

We will check, and we appreciate your patience.

元の翻訳
A. If SAL(with tracking number) is all right, we can send it at low price. However, it takes longer than air. It takes about 2 to 3 weeks.　If you purchase more than 3 As, we will send them at 12 dollars respectively(we will send them by SAL with the tracking number).
After you place an order, we will refund the shipping charge that you had paid additionally.
We hope that you consider it.

B. The attached parts is missing. The claw at top is folded.
You can see the whole parts in the picture. Others are not attached. We could not check the operation.

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A. If SAL (with tracking number) is all right, we can send it at low price. However, it takes longer than air. It takes about 2 to 3 weeks.　If you purchase more than 3 As, we will send them at 12 dollars respectively (we will send them by SAL with the tracking number).
After you place an order, we will refund the shipping charge that you had paid additionally.
We hope that you consider it.

B. The attached parts are missing. The claw at top is folded.
You can see the whole parts in the picture. Others are not attached. We could not check the operation.

元の翻訳
We are planning and carryint out the following control systemto improve the problems above.
Reviewing of price control system
The program that has a problem now has been found, and it is under repairing.rooutinize
We will stop registration of the new items until the program error above is solved and
price of the current inventory is reviewed.

When the CSV file is uploaded newly, routinize checking error to find whether there is a difference between the uploaded data and regulated price of the item.

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We are planning and carrying out the following management system to improve the problems above.
Reviewing of the price control system
We have found some problems in the program, which is currently under repairs.
We will stop registration of the new items until the program error above is solved and
price of the current inventory is reviewed.

When the CSV file is newly uploaded, it will routinize error detection to find whether there are some discrepancy between the uploaded data and regulated price of the item.

元の翻訳
As our store does not occur the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we request that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it takes 1 to 2 months.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Center for returned items

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As our store does not cause the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we would appreciate that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it may take 1 to 2 months until the check is finished.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Center for returned items

元の翻訳
As our store does not occur the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we request that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it takes 1 to 2 months.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Center for returned items

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As our store does not cause initial defects intentionally and a certain number of defects occur rarely in the process of manufacturing by [article] manufacturer, we request that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it takes 1 to 2 months.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day (in this case, you do not have to return the item).

After we process returning the item [?], we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day [?].

Center for returned items

元の翻訳
As our store does not occur the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we request that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it takes 1 to 2 months.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Center for returned items

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As our store does not occur the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we request that you understand it.

We have to have the item back to check the cause of the initial defect and the serial number.

In this case, it takes 1 to 2 months.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Product return center

元の翻訳
Could you show me the screen shot that is being developed?
As 8 months have passed since the last updating, you don't mind
showing it to me, do you?
It is good for you to be responsible for what you say.

As you purchased it without a demonstration screen, you do not have to refund even if a bug is found.
A person who purchases it also has a problem.

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Could you show me the screen shot that is being developed?
As eight months have passed since the last updating, you don't mind
showing it to me, do you?
It is good for you to be responsible for what you were saying.

As it was purchased in the condition of no demonstration screens, you do not have to refund even if a bug is found.
A person who purchases it also has a problem.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
As you said that you have not received the item, we checked it,↵
and found that it had already been delivered to the following address↵
on September 12th.

We hate to ask you, but could you check it again?
If it has not been delivered yet, we would be glad if you↵
call the nearest USPS.
We apologize to have given you an inconvenience this time.

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Thank you for contacting us.
As you said that you have not received the item, we checked it, and found that it had already been delivered to the following address on September 12th.

We hate to ask you, but could you check it again?
If it has not been delivered yet, we would appreciate it if you could call the nearest USPS.
We apologize for the inconvenience this time.

元の翻訳
I have started to play the game of . It also helps me to learn English.

I saw the website of , and it says that the most commonly used language in Singapore is Chinese, which is about 50 percent.
Which is used for more frequently for daily conversation in Singapore, English or Chinese?

As I am learning Chinese in addition to English recently, I am interested in the situation in Singapore.

Could you please tell me the news website that people in Singapore see very often?

In respect with only the news, is a program that is most commonly seen in Japan.

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I have started to play the game of . It also helps me to learn English.

I saw the website of , and it says that the most commonly used language in Singapore is Chinese, which is about 50 percent.
Which is used for more frequently for daily conversation in Singapore, English or Chinese?

As I am learning Chinese in addition to English recently, I am interested in the situation in Singapore.

Could you please tell me the news website that people in Singapore see very often?

In respect to only the news, is a program that is most commonly viewed in Japan.