スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Good day!
I have the questions regarding the item below.
I appreciate your cooperation.

If I purchase 100 pieces, will 1 piece be xx dollars?
How long will it take that the items are delivered to Japan after purchasing?
As I would like to obtain them immediately, could you send them by express mail (express)?
If you can, what is the additional shipping charge?
How many days will it take that they are delivered to Japan?

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Good day!
I have questions regarding the item below.
I appreciate your cooperation.

If I purchase 100 pieces, will 1 piece be xx dollars?
How long will it take for the items to be delivered to Japan after purchasing?
As I would like to obtain them immediately, could you send them by express mail (express)?
If you can, what is the additional shipping charge?
How many days will it take to have them delivered to Japan?

元の翻訳
Good day!
I purchased a long cardigan for myself this time.
I saw other items and found a variety of items which ↵
have a good looks.
I sell the items in Japan.
Do we have an exhibition of the brand that is going to be held in Japan↵
and abroad?

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Good day!
I purchased a long cardigan for myself this time.
I saw other items and found a wide range of great items.
I sell some items in Japan.
Do you have any plan of organizing an exhibition of your brand in Japan and abroad?

元の翻訳
I sent a purchase order to Ryan yesterday.
If he has not received it yet, I would like to cancel it.
I added part of the item in the purchase order of B that I sent just now.

I understand the reason why the item is delayed in sending.
I would like to receive it in Japan in the next week at the latest.

I appreciate that I do not have to pay the 30 pounds as the feel.
As I am going to add 1 item today, I would also like you to send it without the fee.
We are waiting for the arrival of the following item, and could you check its content?

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I sent a purchase order to Ryan yesterday.
If he has not received it yet, I would like to cancel it.
I added part of the item in the purchase order of B that I sent just now.

I understand the reason why the item is delayed in shipment.
I would like to receive it in Japan by the next week at the latest.

I appreciate that I do not have to pay the 30 pounds as the handling fee.
As I am going to add 1 item today, I would also like you to send it without the handling fee.
We are waiting for the arrival of the following item, and could you check the details?

元の翻訳
How may days are required to be sent to Japan by air?
How can I find that you had sent a package to me?
If you prove that you had sent the package to me, I will
arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to process it as early as you like.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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How may days are required for the air shipment to Japan?
How can I know you shipped my order?
If you prove that you shipped the package to me, I will
arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to process it immediately as you do.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
How may days are required to be sent to Japan by air?
How can I find that you had sent a package to me?
If you prove that you had sent the package to me, I will ↵
arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to process it as early as you like.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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How may days are required to be sent to Japan by air?
How can I know that you have sent a package to me?
If you can prove to me that you have sent the package to me, I will arrange for payment immediately.

I would like to get this done as early as possible too.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission, we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

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Have you received the e-mail?
As I have not heard from you, I am writing to you.
If you have not received it yet, I will send it again.
As I would like to reply to 00, I appreciate your understanding.
Regarding the makeup box, if you give me a permission we can manufacture it in Japan.
I will be looking forward to your reply.

Could you agree to 00 for the payment, which is the same as the last time?
You said that you were going to take a picture of the model of the new item in February.
After you complete it, would you send it to me immediately?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your e-mail.
I succeeded in contacting with the office in China and received the estimate.
I received the estimate not only for 640i series but also for the model number that you suggested.
Thank you for your kindness.
I appreciate you again.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
I was successful in contacting the office in China and received another estimate.
I received an estimate not only for 640i series, but also for the model number that you suggested.
I appreciate your kindness.
Once again, thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt reply.
I was in time for the estimate.
Thank you for taking your time while you are busy.
I appreciate you again.

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Thank you for your prompt reply.
I was in time for the deadline of the estimate.
Thank you for taking your time while you are busy.
I appreciate your support again.

元の翻訳
We can load the following page only by the small screen such as note personal computer.
It must be due to a bug caused by Java script.
We wish that it could be compatible to Multilanguage.
I tried it in Chinese, but there appeared an error.

What is a difference between PRO user and PLUS user?
Is the reason that we cannot see the following page after we log in
the specification?

We would be glad if we can line the songs, reproduce the loop (go back to the first song after the end of the song) and obtain the cover pictures automatically (thumbnail at the first song).

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We can load the following page only by the small screen such as a laptop computer.
It must be due to a bug caused by Java script.
We wish that it could be compatible to Multilanguage.
I tried it in Chinese, but there appeared an error.

What is a difference between PRO user and PLUS user?
Is the reason that we cannot see the following page after we log in
the specification?

We would be glad if we can line the songs, reproduce the loop (go back to the first song after the end of the song) and obtain the cover pictures automatically (thumbnail at the first song).

元の翻訳
The item that has been stored for a long time
Tape has been attached at the box and
the box has not been opened.

The number of the piece is about xx (it might be different more or less)
The content of the box has not been checked.
Some cards might be folded.

A purchaser contacted regarding returning of the item,
but the tracking number that was registered at the item is not effective.
It means that there is no evidence that the purchaser has not sent the item.
If the item does not arrive, I might not be able to refund.
Is the purchaser going to rate me low by this fact?
I can neither refund as the item has not been returned nor am convinced
that I might be rated low.
I do not know how I should handle it.

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The item that has been stored for a long time
Tape has been attached at the box and
the box has not been opened.

The number of the piece is about xx (it might be different more or less)
The content of the box has not been checked.
Some cards might be folded.

A purchaser contacted regarding returning of the item,
but the tracking number that was registered at the item is not effective.
It means that there is no evidence that the purchaser has sent the item.
If the item does not arrive, I might not be able to refund.
Is the purchaser going to rate me low by this fact?
I can neither refund as the item has not been returned nor am convinced
that I might be rated low.
I do not know how I should handle it.

元の翻訳
I received the tracking number of this item today.
I checked it and found that the multiple packages are listed as "3".
I ordered 5 pieces of this rug.
Would you check the vendor if they sent 5 pieces to me?
I had received fewer pieces of the rugs than the number I ordered twice.

I cancelled this order 5 days ago.
Why was the item sent today?
Could you contact UPS and return it?
In case where the item arrives, please tell me how to return it without↵
paying for the shipping charge.

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I received the tracking number of this item today.
I checked it and found that the multiple packages are listed as "3".
I ordered 5 pieces of this rug.
Would you check with the vendor if they sent 5 pieces to me?
I had received fewer pieces of the rugs than the number I ordered twice.

I cancelled this order 5 days ago.
Why was the item sent today?
Could you contact UPS and request them to return it to you?
In case the item arrives, please tell me how to return it without paying for the shipping charge.

元の翻訳
Good day.
Thank you for your inquiry.
If you order 2 pieces of this item, we can sell them at71.45 dollars.
We will send them with a tracking, and you will get 10 percent bargain
compared with what we usually sell .
We appreciate your consideration.

We understand it.
As we will list afterwards, please order at eBay.
As it is a special listing, we will delete the page a few days later.
We hope that you understand t.
Thank you for selecting our shop this time.

Thank you for ordering this time.
We will prepare the shipment.
May we ask you a little patience until we ship?

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Good day.
Thank you for your inquiry.
If you order 2 pieces of this item, we can sell them at 71.45 dollars.
We will send them with a tracking, and you will get 10 percent bargain
compared with what we usually sell.
We appreciate your consideration.

We understand it.
As we will list afterwards, please order at eBay.
As it is a special listing, we will delete the page a few days later.
We hope that you understand it.
Thank you for selecting our shop this time.

Thank you for ordering this time.
We will prepare the shipment.
May we ask you a little patience until we ship?

元の翻訳
手ごろな値段にしていただければ幸甚です。
支払いの要件をお送りください（請求書、パイパル）。
ロシアのモスクワと日本の関の送料の明記をお願いします（有利な発送先を選択します）。

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手ごろな値段にしていただければ幸甚です。
支払いの要件をお送りください（請求書、ペイパル）。
ロシアのモスクワと日本の関の送料の明記をお願いします（有利な発送先を選択します）。

元の翻訳
手ごろな値段にしていただければ幸甚です。
支払いの要件をお送りください（請求書、パイパル）。
ロシアのモスクワと日本の関の送料の明記をお願いします（有利な発送先を選択します）。

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手ごろな値段にしていただければ幸甚です。
支払いの要件をお送りください（請求書、ぺイパル）。
ロシアのモスクワと日本の関の送料の明記をお願いします（有利な発送先を選択します）。

元の翻訳
How do you do?
I hope that you do not mind my sudden contacting.
I am contacting you regarding the price negotiation.

As for the item that your company sells,
may I purchase by xx dollars in total including the shipping charge?
If you can give me a discount, I will pay via Paypal within 24 hours.

If I can negotiate the price, I am considering purchasing continuously.
I hate to ask you while you are busy, but I appreciate if you consider it. ↵
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How do you do?
I hope that you do not mind my sudden contacting.
I am contacting you regarding the price negotiation.

As for the item that your company sells,
may I purchase at xx dollars in total including the shipping charge?
If you can give me a discount, I will pay via Paypal within 24 hours.

If I can negotiate the price, I am considering purchasing continuously.
I hate to ask you while you are busy, but I appreciate if you consider it.

元の翻訳
The value of the comments on the demonstration website refers to the value of the views.
URL of each category page is by category name.
It is good if we have an option that we can designate to Post ID, etc. (as we cannot use in non-English speaking area).

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The value of the comments on the demonstration website refers to the value of the views.
URL of each category page is by category name.
It is good if we have an option that we can designate to Post ID, etc. (as we cannot use in non-English speaking areas).

元の翻訳
Although h you surveyed the website, I am concerned
that the information might not be developed.
I have to check the information to create the estimate.
If I do not do so, you have to work on it.
The deadline of the estimate is tomorrow. Thank you.

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Although you surveyed the website, I am concerned
that the information might not be developed.
I have to check the information to create the estimate.
If I do not do so, you have to work on it.
The deadline of the estimate is tomorrow. Thank you.

元の翻訳
貴方の口座の確認のサポートにおいて、購入者へ手軽なリマインダーを送り、↵
フィードバックを貴口座へ残すようご教示ください。
１注文につき１つ以上のフィードバックを送らないでください。
購入者への連絡についての詳細は、セラーセントラルのヘルプ
に掲載された「購入者ー販売者のメッセージサービス」を検索してください。
貴口座の確認終了後、メールにてお知らせします。
お時間とご協力に感謝します。
同口座の確認はまだ終了しておりません。
購入者たちが注文を確認、同口座へフィードバックを残しますので
お待ちください。
現時点において、本確認が終了するまで、詳細の提示及び
本件についてのこれ以上の質問に返答することができません。

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こちらがお客様のアカウント評価ができるよう、お客様の方から購入者へ、フィードバックをお客様のアカウントへ残すよう、親しみをこめてお知らせいただけるようお願いします。
１注文につきフィードバックは２つ以上送らないでください。
購入者への連絡についての詳細は、セラーセントラルのヘルプ
に掲載された「購入者ー販売者のメッセージサービス」で検索してください。
貴アカウントの確認終了後、メールにてお知らせします。
お時間とご協力に感謝します。
同アカウントの確認はまだ終了しておりません。
購入者たちが注文を確認、同アカウントへフィードバックを残しますので
お待ちください。
現時点において、本確認が終了するまで、詳細の提示及び
本件についてのこれ以上の質問に返答することができません。