Sophia24 (sophia24) — もらったレビュー

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1. The weight of the package was 1,000g. Could you please refund the excess shipping fee that I paid? Also, I ordered 10 of the A, but there were only 2. I also ordered 30 of the B, but none were inside. Could you please ship again?

2. I am relieved that the products arrived safely. I was shocked at the state of the box, but the inside was just fine. As for item C, I can get it if you want but it's a little expensive. It would be $88 if I were to sell it to you. If that's okay with you, please let me know. I will inform you if I can get it at a cheaper price.

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1. The weight of the package was 1,000g. Could you please refund the excess shipping fee that I paid? Also, I ordered 10 of the A, but there were only 2. I also ordered 30 of the B, but none were inside. Could you please ship again?

2. I am relieved that the products arrived safely. I was shocked at the state of the box, but the inside was just fine. As for item C, I can get it if you want but it's a little expensive. It would be $88 if I were to sell it to you. If that's okay with you, please let me know. I will inform you if I can get it at a cheaper price.

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Hello, my name is Yamada, and I sell jackets for riding motorcycles in Japan. I am interested in the racing suits. If I order custom made ones, would it be possible to order different sizes like the attached file?
Also, is it possible to make suits with punching mesh process, or make it as one piece or two pieces?
Please tell me the price for each of the cases.

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Hello, my name is Yamada of Ragna Online, and I sell jackets for riding motorcycles in Japan. I am interested in the racing suits. If I order custom made ones, would it be possible to order different sizes like the attached file?
Also, is it possible to make suits with punching mesh process, or make it as one piece or two pieces?
Please tell me the price for each of the cases.

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Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

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Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management team.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

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You can download and enjoy the music contents immediately after entering the gift code on the back of the music card!

Precautions for use:
This is a product to be used on smartphones and PC. (You cannot use it on feature phones.)
Smartphone users will need to download the mu-mo application (free of charge) after downloading the contents.

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You can download and enjoy the music contents immediately after entering the gift code on the back of the music card!

Precautions for use:
This is a product to be used on smartphones and PC. (You cannot use it on feature phones.)
Smartphone users will need to download the mu-mo application (free of charge) for downloading contents.

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<Recommended environment>
Smartphone OS: iOS6 or over, Android 2.2 or over
PC OS: Windows Vista, Windows 7, Macintosh OS10.4 or over
*See here for supported models: http://sp-m.mu-mo.net/pub/supportPhone/

<How to download>
1. Access download site http://mu-ca.net/ (by entering address directly or 2D barcode)
2. Enter the PIN code written on the product.

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<Recommended environment>
Smartphone OS: iOS6 or later, Android 2.2 or later
PC OS: Windows Vista, Windows 7, Macintosh OS10.4 or later
*See here for supported models: http://sp-m.mu-mo.net/pub/supportPhone/

<How to download>
1. Access download site http://mu-ca.net/ (by entering address directly or by using 2D bar code)
2. Enter the PIN code printed on the product.

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*In case the LIVE is cancelled, we will not be able to compensate for the travel expense etc. Furthermore, this LIVE will not be held at a postponed date.
*In case the LIVE is cancelled due to Force Majeure, we will send you some goods equal to the total ticket price (1,561JPY). Please be notified that we cannot give refunds.

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*In case the LIVE is cancelled, we will not be able to compensate for the travel expense etc. Furthermore, this LIVE will not be held at a postponed date.
*In case the LIVE is cancelled due to Force Majeure, we will send you some goods equal to the total ticket price (1,561JPY). Please be notified that we cannot give refunds.

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There were several items I wanted to purchase, but I accidentally ordered them separately. Would it be possible to send them together?

I accidentally paid the shipping fee twice also, so please give me a refund for the second one.

I would like to add that I am in a hurry to receive these products.

Please give me a prompt reply during your busy schedule.

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There were several items I wanted to purchase, but I accidentally ordered them separately. Would it be possible to send them together?

I accidentally paid the shipping fee twice also, so please give me a refund for the second one.

I would like to add that I am in a hurry to receive these products.

I understand you are busy, but I would appreciate a prompt reply.

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I am sending you the bills for this month.
I will contact you about October's payment that was delayed as soon as I confirm.

Please feel free to contact me should you have any questions.
Thank you.

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I am sending you the invoice for this month.
I will contact you about October's payment that was delayed as soon as I confirm.

Please feel free to contact me should you have any questions.
Thank you.

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Please note that we will not be able to sell any items to a person without a ticket even if you come to the site.

*Please note that we may stop sales temporarily, depending on the situation of the site.
*We strongly forbid actions that may disturb nearby facilities or citizens, such as waiting up all night around the site.
Please do not meet up within the queue (which would result in queue jumping) as it will annoy other participants. We will not be able to take any responsibility for trouble within the participants.

[About the handshake event for those who purchased products]

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Please note that we will not be able to sell any items to a person without a ticket even if you come to the site.

*Please note that we may stop sales temporarily, depending on the situation of the site.
*We strongly forbid actions that may disturb nearby facilities or citizens, such as waiting up all night around the site.
Please do not meet up within the queue (which would result in queue jumping) as it will annoy other participants. We will not be able to take any responsibility for trouble within the participants.

[About the handshake event for those who purchased products]

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We could not identify order # 102-4414052-0085818 ordered on February 19th at our shop.

I believe you bought it at another shop.

There are many shops on Amazon's product page.

I do not know anything besides what is written on he manual.

If you cannot get the watch to work by looking at the manual, I recommend that you return it.

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We could not identify order # 102-4414052-0085818 ordered on February 19 at our shop.

I believe you bought it at another shop.

There are many shops on Amazon's product page.

I do not know anything besides what is written on the manual.

If you cannot get the watch to work by following the manual, I recommend that you return it to the seller.

I am sorry I could not be of more help.

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Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have ◯◯ and ◯◯ that I ask about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order, do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

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Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have the ◯◯ and the ◯◯ that I asked you about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order; do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so, I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

I checked your order and as you pointed out there was a shipment mistake.
We are deeply sorry.

We can either ship the missing products to you, or we can give you a refund for the missing products.
Which would you prefer?

I am sorry for the trouble, but please give me your reply.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

I checked your order and as you pointed out there was a shipment mistake.
We are deeply sorry.

We can either ship the missing products to you, or we can give you a refund for the missing products.
Which would you prefer?

I am sorry for the trouble, but please give me your reply.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for your response. I have ordered it. Please set up this product so that it will sound.

2. Thank you for your response. I would like a refund for the shipment fee only. Thank you for your support always.

3. The product was secondhand, so I would like to return the product and get a refund.
I will send it back to you.

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1. Thank you for your response. I have ordered it. Please set up this product so that it will sound.

2. Thank you for your response. I would like a refund for the shipment fee only. Thank you for your support always.

3. The product was secondhand, so I would like to return the product and get a refund.
I will send it back to you.

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*mu-mo shop / E shop original bonus*
•original postcard booklet(7 postcards in one set)

*Advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for mu-mo shop♪
(PC) http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX
(MB) http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1?artist_id=AAAXX

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*mu-mo shop / E shop original bonus*
•original postcard booklet (7 postcards in one set)

*Advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for mu-mo shop♪
(PC) http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX
(MB) http://m-shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1?artist_id=AAAXX

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The new piece "SHOWTIME" has new encounters, building bonds, and beginning as the theme and it's a dance upper tune song especially for people who are stepping into new stages of life. This is a must-see single that you can't miss, scheduled before the arena tour "AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-" shifting into full swing from May.
In the newsletter special edition, in addition to this single's production scenes and member interviews, off shots from end of last year "NHK KOHAKU UTAGASSEN" and "KAKAYAKU!NIHONREKODOTAISYO" will be released!

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The new tune "SHOWTIME" has the themes of new encounters, building bonds, and beginning, and it's an upper dance tune especially for people who are stepping into new stages of life. This is a must-have single that you can't miss, before the arena tour "AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-" shifting into a full swing from May.
In the newsletter special edition, in addition to this single's production scenes and member interviews, off shots from the end of last year's "NHK KOHAKU UTAGASSEN" and "KAKAYAKU!NIHONREKODOTAISYO" will be released!

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*AAA Party/mu-mo shop unified bonus(for customers who purchase 3 types at one time)*
(For those who purchase below 3 types at one time: CD+DVD, CD only, and mu-mo shop limited edition)
•B2 sized poster (1 piece)

Until February 25th(Tues), 2014 11:59PM at the longest
*advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for mu-mo shop♪ (accessible from both PC and mobile)
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX

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*AAA Party/mu-mo shop common bonus (for customers who purchase 3 types at one time)*
(For those who purchase below 3 types at one time: CD+DVD, CD only, and mu-mo shop limited edition)
•B2 sized poster (1 piece)

Until February 25th(Tues), 2014 11:59PM at the longest
*advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for mu-mo shop♪ (accessible from both PC and mobile)
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/list1/?artist_id=AAAXX

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Until February 25th(Tues), 2014 11:59PM at the longest
*by selecting convenience store payment and becoming a member(make payment) by February 19th(Wed), 2014 11:50PM, you can purchase the one with AAA Party limited bonus.
*advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for AAA Party official shop♪ (accessible from both PC and mobile)
http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/APY.html

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Until February 25th(Tues), 2014 11:59PM at the longest
*by selecting a convenience store payment and becoming a member (make payment) by February 19th(Wed), 2014 11:50PM, you can purchase the one with an AAA Party limited bonus.
*advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for AAA Party official shop♪ (accessible from both PC and mobile)
http://shop.mu-mo.net/st/fc/APY.html

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Driving MIX

Mainly featuring upper tunes and party tunes that show AAA's true value, A nonstop mix album will be released!

This will definitely be the piece to warm up the mood while driving this winter♪
Perfect for AAA introductory piece as it includes a lot of hit songs!
LIVE audio carefully selected from latest tour in 2013, "Eighth Wonder," and original goods will be included in the two CD deluxe edition!

•Title: "Driving MIX"
•On sale from: December 25th, 2013

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Driving MIX

Mainly featuring upper tunes and party tunes that show AAA's true value, a nonstop mix album will be released!

This will definitely be the piece to warm up the mood while driving this winter♪
Perfect for AAA introductory piece as it includes a lot of hit songs!
LIVE audio carefully selected from latest tour in 2013, "Eighth Wonder," and original goods will be included in the two CD deluxe edition!

•Title: "Driving MIX"
•On sale from: December 25th, 2013

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Recorded in the album are, of course, popular songs broadcasted monthly from February this year and well talked about. Also, "ANATANO KISS WO KAZOEMASYO ~You were mine~" and one other piece will be covered and recorded newly in the album.
As a bonus track, the long-awaited original piece written by NAOYA URATA himself will be recorded!
This will be a solo album with songs of "unchanged" feelings, such as the feelings for singing, things we like, things we want to do...

•Title: "UNCHANGED"

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Recorded in the album includes, of course, popular songs broadcasted monthly from February this year and well talked about. Also, "ANATANO KISS WO KAZOEMASYO ~You were mine~" and one other piece will be covered and recorded newly in the album.
As a bonus track, the long-awaited original piece written by NAOYA URATA himself will be included!
This will be a solo album with songs of "unchanged" feelings, such as the feelings for singing, things we like, things we want to do...

•Title: "UNCHANGED"

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NAOYA URATA Cover album "UNCHANGED"

Finally, album release for NAOYA URATA's cover series, after so many requests!

A cover series that NAOYA URATA, leader and lead vocal of AAA, goes back to original as a singer and covers songs that made an influence on him.

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NAOYA URATA Cover Album "UNCHANGED"

Finally, album release for NAOYA URATA's cover series, after so many demands!

A cover series that NAOYA URATA, a leader and a lead vocal of AAA, goes back to the origin as a singer and cover songs that made an influence on him.

元の翻訳
Until September 17th(Tues), 2013 11:59PM at the longest
*by selecting convenience store payment and becoming a member(make payment) by September 11th(Wed), 2014 11:50PM, you can purchase the one with AAA Party limited bonus.
*advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for AAA Party official shop♪(accessible from both PC and mobile)

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Until September 17th(Tues), 2013 11:59PM at the longest
*by selecting a convenience store payment and becoming a member (make payment) by September 11th(Wed), 2013 11:50PM, you can purchase the one with an AAA Party limited bonus.
*advance sale will finish once the bonus/product runs out.

See here for AAA Party official shop♪ (accessible from both PC and mobile)

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* The advance sale will finish as soon as the amenity and the product runs out.


-TOWER RECORDS: handwritten lyric sheet(RULE ver.) *copied
*includes tower online
URL：http://tower.jp/artist/1956804/SKY-HI

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* The advance sale will finish as soon as the benefit and the product runs out.


-TOWER RECORDS: handwritten lyric sheet (RULE ver.) *printed
*includes Tower Records Online
URL：http://tower.jp/artist/1956804/SKY-HI

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I am sorry.

I made a mistake when writing the card number and account number.
The account number: 0030867033 that I attached before is my correct account number.

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I am sorry.

I put wrong card number and account number.
The account number: 0030867033 that I attached before is my correct account number.

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Thank you for delivering the product.
Could you send the invoice to me by email?

Right now as I'm typing this email, PK still has not closed down their account.
I will check once again with PK.

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Thank you for delivering the product.
Could you send the invoice to me by email?

Right now as I'm typing this email, PK still has not closed down their account.
I will check once again with PK.