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日本語

先日注文した商品は今日送ってくれますか？

今日あなたに聞いた〇〇と〇〇は月曜に送って下さい。

訂正しますが、〇〇は２個ありますか？

あれば２個ほしい。

それと今日までに以前注文した商品はどれを送ったか追跡番号を教えて下さい。

私のお客さんから問い合わせがあるので

何を送ってくれたか確認したい。

いつもありがとう。

英語

Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have ◯◯ and ◯◯ that I ask about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order, do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

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kanon84はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/01 03:20:19

元の翻訳
Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have ◯◯ and ◯◯ that I ask about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order, do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

修正後
Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have the ◯◯ and the ◯◯ that I asked you about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order; do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so, I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

GJ

[sophia24]

Thank you for the review! I'd like to try using ";" next time.