Santy Theresia Ambarita (santytha) — もらったレビュー

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I'm member of student association in Japan. At the association, I learn about many poor and refugee issue in the world; I make the document and picture of that issue, and I dispatch it to Japan with video as media. I work at the association and have published 2 books free paper. One of them, I go to India and Myanmar for collecting actual data. I report I look many problem of child labor at there. And once more, I interview 3 Japanese people that working at International Cooperation of global stage, because of that I want the Japanese young people know it, and make the summarize of the thing.

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I'm member of one student association in Japan. At the association, I learn about many poor and refugee issue in the world; I make the document and picture of that issue, and I dispatch it to Japan with video as media. I work at the association and have published 2 books free paper. One of them, I went to India and Myanmar for collecting actual data. I reported what I looked many problem of child labor at there by text and photos. The another one is, I had the interview with 3 Japaneses who is working at International Cooperation of global stage, and summarized what they want the Japanese young people know.

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Actually, 70-300 have selling with different method, after arrived shipping, make you waiting fairly, you can pay the shipping cost from here before, I think immediately, not only have shipping directly. You can refund 20 $, and then pay with re-adding if have need return actual cost any more.
If even less, doesn't matter you still receive 20$. I'm sorry for your inconvenience. Thank you for your understanding.

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Actually, 70-300 have selling with different method, after arrived shipping, make you waiting fairly, you can pay the shipping cost from here before, I think immediately, not only have shipping directly. You can refund 20 $, and then pay with re-adding if have need return actual cost any more.
If even less, doesn't matter you still receive 20$. I'm sorry for your inconvenience. Thank you for your understanding [this is pretty much the only sentence that makes sense in the whole translation].

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We have visited the bank at this afternoon.　
In the beginning at bank, USD check of second mobile for UGANDA.
Have refused the formal acceptance, because of counterfeiting percentage is under on over 90%. and then, the negotiation result have attachment file, and I have accepted check collection formally at this day.
But, the actual, for our monetize and checking at Wells Fargo N.A bank, have been said as have 3 weeks grade.
The company, until check only the monetize, you can note don't prepare the shipping.
And then, our company will deal legally if there is counterfeiting.

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We have visited [tense confusion, use simple past instead] the bank this afternoon.　
At first at bank, USD check of second mobile for UGANDA [fragment].
[Subject missing] Have refused [tense confusion] the formal acceptance, because of counterfeiting percentage is under on over 90% [what does this mean?]. and then, the negotiation result have attachment file [unreadable], and I have accepted check collection formally at this day.
But, the actual, for our monetize and checking at Wells Fargo N.A bank, have been said as have 3 weeks grade.
The company, until check only the monetize, you can note don't prepare the shipping.
And then, our company will deal legally if there is counterfeiting.

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For this time, called SAKAMOTO which have sign up in AMAZING.
Have started the display for AMAZING from tomorrow, It will be come suspend status suddenly, and more especially there is no notice have come.
Have the problem be happen at the some place?
Because of already deal with that if there is some problem, please contact us.

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For this time, called SAKAMOTO which have sign up in AMAZING [seriously?].
Have started the display for AMAZING [seriously?] from tomorrow, It will be come suspend status suddenly, and more especially there is no notice have come [tense?].
Have the problem be happen [tense?] at the some place?
Because of already deal with that if there is some problem, please contact us.

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(Handshake at the meeting when got the decision/ Got deal at the meeting) Odaiba Shintairiku, life's mark.

(Handshake at the meeting when got the decision)
Day: 1 Augutust 2014 (Fryday)
Place: Odaiba Shintairiku Great Summer Stadium on Stage.
Time: 12 - 13

Guest who reservation for purchase Music Card Cheeky Parade member fair which single of SUPER☆GiRLS 11th 「Ahhahha～Roar of laughter of superiority marching song～」,base on day event at special place, lets joint to meeting handshake only for Cheeky Parade Grup.

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(Handshake at the meeting when got the decision/ Got deal at the meeting) Odaiba Shintairiku, life's mark.

(Handshake at the meeting when got the decision)
Day: 1 Augutust [is this an English word?] 2014 (Fryday [seriously?])
Place: Odaiba Shintairiku Great Summer Stadium on Stage.
Time: 12 - 13

Guest who reservation for purchase Music Card Cheeky Parade member fair which single of SUPER☆GiRLS 11th 「Ahhahha～Roar of laughter of superiority marching song～」,base on day event at special place, lets joint to meeting handshake only for Cheeky Parade Grup.

元の翻訳
How much question and test for Japan blue tooth have progressed? Or become passed? Smallest order unit have know as 25000 dollar as 100 pcs. I have understand various method of selling it at Japan market. Now, when we can order 100 pcs to Japan? Can you tell me how much the shipping/ sending cost to Osaka Harbour with CIF? You and your job is very pleasure for me.

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How much question [uncountable?] and test for Japan blue tooth have progressed? Or become passed? Smallest order unit have know [ungrammatical] as 25000 dollar [singular?] as 100 pcs. I have understand [tense confusion] various method [singular vs. plural] of selling it at [article missing] Japan market. Now, when we can order 100 pcs to Japan? Can you tell me how much the shipping/ sending [seriously?] cost to Osaka Harbour [spelling] with CIF? You and your job is [s-v agreement] very pleasure for me [awkward construction].

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Concentration operator of Video equipment.

Japan Video Equipment Rental Association (JVR Association), will be open the meeting of 'Haisei 26Th JVR Association head affairs conference' at Tokyo, Koto, Hotel East 21 at 25 June. The meeting have attended 220 person (thirty two Companies as regular member and 92 person from 18 Companies maker member at the plenary) for social gathering.

Affairs managing director conference is from Association nation rental company, install video equipment to field of all event, gathering the operator, introduction's sample, information of new equipment etc. They will making the meeting in once at every years as communication and information exchange event.

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Concentration operator of Video equipment [What does this mean?].

Japan Video Equipment Rental Association (JVR Association), will be open the meeting of 'Haisei 26Th JVR Association head affairs conference' at Tokyo, Koto, Hotel East 21 at 25 June. The meeting have attended 220 person (thirty two Companies as regular member and 92 person from 18 Companies maker member at the plenary) for social gathering.

Affairs managing director conference is from Association nation rental company, install video equipment to field of all event, gathering the operator, introduction's sample, information of new equipment etc. They will making the meeting in once at every years as communication and information exchange event.

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『CIC17-3』 と『 CSH18-6』は ７/１８ぐらいに再入荷できます。私はこの製品を今日に本当に到着しますが、これは最近連絡があります。 それで、この製品が今日に本当に届きたいんが。

ご発注は派遣できるが、派遣は遅くなって出来るにすみませんが。
これはご両発注の追跡番号： 60292873048, 60292872414.
それはGLSで派遣できた： https://gls-group.eu/DE/de/home

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『CIC17-3』 と『 CSH18-6』は ８/１８ぐらいに再入荷される予定です。私はこの製品を今日に本当に到着しますが、これは最近連絡があります。 それで、この製品が今日に本当に届きたいんが。

ご発注は派遣できるが、派遣は遅くなって出来るにすみませんが。
これはご両発注の追跡番号： 60292873048, 60292872414.
それはGLSで派遣できた： https://gls-group.eu/DE/de/home

元の翻訳
Thank you for your up date.

For reminding PASS WORD, recheck all the PASS WORD, and please verify the page correctly.
I think this is the question will become.

1. You must input the character of current PASS WORD which have encrypted.
2. Don't you encrypted the new setting PASS WORD.

And then, I think, you can modify for mobile version TWITTER button working,

Sorry for auto mistake.

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Thank you for your up date [one word].

For reminding PASS WORD [one word], recheck all the PASS WORD [one word], and please verify the page correctly.
I think this is the question will become [What does this mean?].

1. You must input the character of current PASS WORD [one word] which have encrypted.
2. Don't you encrypted the new setting PASS WORD.

And then, I think, you can modify for mobile version TWITTER button working [?],

Sorry for auto mistake [?].

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We are watch shop in Japan.
If you looking for watches Japan sophisticated, you must be find it at our shop!
The watch made in Japan is 100% guarantee quality, because we input it with purchase by maker authorized dealer.
And then, the watches made in Japan out side is save for used, because we are purchasing it by authorized dealer at japan too.
For visit our shop you can check the explanation at bellow.

『How to use the shop』

Please feel free inquire, if you have any question, before ordering.
It is available in Japanese or English language.

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We are watch shop in Japan.
If you are looking for sophisticated Japanese watches, you can find them at our shop!
The watch made in Japan is 100% guarantee quality, because we input it with purchase by maker's authorized dealer.
And then, the watches other than made in Japan can be safely used, because we are purchasing them by authorized dealer in Japan, too.
For visiting our shop you can check the explanation bellow.

『How to use the shop』

Please feel free inquire, if you have any question, before ordering.
We can communicate in Japanese or English language.

元の翻訳
「URATA NAOYA LIVE TOUR 2014 -UNCHANGED-」will sell, Summery shades UNCHANGE goods is appearance!

URATA NAOYAソロLIVE「UNCHANGED」。URATA NAOYA soloed have been popular in Osaka and Tokyo at January and February.
GOLDEN PIGS RED STAGE will be start in the beginning of 25 July (Friday) Niigata GOLDEN PIGS RED STAGE

Because the goods underlying black and white in tour goods is changing the atmosphere, 「UNCHANGED」design have used the new summery shades goods!!

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「URATA NAOYA LIVE TOUR 2014 -UNCHANGED-」will sell, Summery shades UNCHANGE goods is appearance （意味不明）!

URATA NAOYAソロLIVE「UNCHANGED」。URATA NAOYA soloed have been popular in Osaka and Tokyo at January and February.
GOLDEN PIGS RED STAGE will be start in the beginning of 25 July (Friday) Niigata GOLDEN PIGS RED STAGE

Because the goods underlying black and white in tour goods is changing the atmosphere, 「UNCHANGED」design have used the new summery shades goods!!