米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — 付けたレビュー

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<BRAVO>
This show has been on my mind for quite sometime, but I had always ended up being swept away with other shows like NANTA. Just as usual, the best position was taken up, which was VELTRA unique, and just to see that part of the show made me feel exited. But once the show was started, in addition to its high artistic quality, mixed were the easy-to-follow commedies that has brought my tension at its height. The unforgettable part of the show was when I was brought up to the stage (got a T-shirt as a thank-you present).
Therer are four teams for respective themes, so next time I would like to try the other ones.

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<BRAVO>
This show has been on my mind for quite sometime, but I had always ended up being swept away with other shows like NANTA. Just as usual, the best position was taken up, which was VELTRA unique, and just to see that part of the show made me feel exited. But once the show was started, in addition to its high artistic quality, mixed were the easy-to-follow commedies that has brought my tension at its heighest. The unforgettable part of the show was when I was brought up to the stage (got a T-shirt as a thank-you present).
There are four teams for respective themes, so next time I would like to try the other ones.

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If it was judged that the item has no problems, customer must pay full shipping fee.
If you want to return the item, please understand that half of the item price will be back as refund and you have to pay full shipping fee.

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If it is judged that the item has no problems, customer must pay full shipping fee.
If you want to return the item, please understand that a half of the item price will be back as refund and you have to pay full shipping fee.

元の翻訳
If the product was considered having no problem at the time, the shipping fee will be paid by the customer.
Please note that if you request for a refund, you have to pay the shipping even though we refund for the price of the product.

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If the product was considered having no problem at the time, the shipping fee will be paid by the customer.
Please note that if you request for a refund, you have to pay the shipping and refund amount will be a half price of the product.

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The modern facilities in the huge conference center in the Shinbashi/Toranomon region, "Toranomon Hills Forum" was revealed to 2000 related people at the private viewing.

"Toranomon Hills Forum" are placed on the fourth and fifth floors in the Toranamon Hills which was opened on June 11th. It has the 2180 square meters and consists of three halls which have no poles and therefore dividable and 4 meeting rooms.
The private viewing included the description of its whole structure and and concepts of each facility from a representative of MORI Building, Keiji Kurahashi who was responsible for the setting for the main hall on the fifth floor.

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The modern facilities in the huge conference center in the Shinbashi/Toranomon region, "Toranomon Hills Forum" was revealed to 2000 related people at the private viewing on June 16 and 17.

"Toranomon Hills Forum" are placed on the fourth and fifth floors in the Toranamon Hills which was opened on June 11th. It has the 2180 square meters and consists of three halls which have no pillars and therefore dividable and 4 meeting rooms.
The private viewing included the description of its whole structure and and concepts of each facility from a representative of MORI Building, Keiji Kurahashi who was responsible for the setting for the main hall on the fifth floor.

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The organizaiton established on April in the last year, Osaka Kankoukyoku which works for improving MICE Osaka will hold the "MICE Osaka Destination Show Case in Tokyo" at the JP Tower Hall & Conference.

"MICE Osaka Destination Show Case" was hold for the first time in Osaka to improve the Osaka MICE industry. It was mainly run by the government, but now both the government and citizens are working for it.

It will be held in Tokyo on August and in Osaka on December to share the good parts of Osaka to related parties.

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Osaka Kankoukyoku、ｔhe organizaiton established on April in the last year, which works for improving MICE Osaka will hold the "MICE Osaka Destination Show Case in Tokyo" at the JP Tower Hall & Conference.

"MICE Osaka Destination Show Case" was hold in the last December for the first time in Osaka to improve the Osaka MICE industry. It was mainly run by the government, but now both the government and private sector are working for it.

It will be held in Tokyo on August and in Osaka on December to share the good parts of Osaka MICE to related parties.

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The video center will participate in the "Sound Festa 2014" which is held at the Grand Cube on June 25th and 26th. It will display the modern mount for muliple displays, "LVS1U" whose brand is CHIEF which is the American brand from which the company imports its supplies.

With the newly invented adjusting function, the product can make a perfect research on joints and work nicely for multiple displays with thin joints. It has a more durable frame structure than other existing products and can stably hold a huge display.

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The video center will participate in the "Sound Festa 2014" which is held at the Grand Cube on June 25th and 26th. It will exhibit the modern mount for multiple displays, "LVS1U" of American brand CHIEF that the company contracts as sole importing distributor.

With the newly invented adjusting function, the product can make a perfect adjustment on joints and work nicely for multiple displays with thin joints. It has a more durable frame structure than other existing products and can stably hold a huge display.

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Is this watches diamond were custom made?↵
or usual design?

http://www.ebay.com/itm/Mens-Audemars-Piguet-Royal-Oak-Offshore-Diamonds-Everywhere-Display-Model-/310973357153

is this new?
Any damage?
オーデマピゲwarranty and box will include this?
please tell me width of belt and face size.

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Is this diamonds on the watch customized or standard design?

http://www.ebay.com/itm/Mens-Audemars-Piguet-Royal-Oak-Offshore-Diamonds-Everywhere-Display-Model-/310973357153

is this new?
Is there any damage?
Warranty and original box from AUDEMARS PIGUET available?
Please let me know the width of belt and the size of face.

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Let's increase the thickness of the wall of meat. Under that idea, we increased the number of meat.
The beacon could not notice blocked by the wall of tough meat.
We found that "for the human body, it can penetrate up to one person, but it is no good with two people."

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As we commented "Let's increase the thickness of the wall of meat", we actually increased the number of meat.
The beacon could not notice blocked by the wall of tough meat.
We found that "for the human body, it can penetrate up to one person, but it is no good with two people."

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To conclude with this investigation, our significant finding has identified that "iBeacon has reached as far as 69 meters to notify!".

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To conclude with our research, the most significant finding is "iBeacon has reached as far as 69 meters to notify!".

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今や全ての人が結果を知っている。これの市場での運用が失敗した後、TencentはオンラインリテーラーのYixunにて運用資金を購入した。ただし、Tencentのゲームの様なオンライン・ビジネスと比べ、このようなオンライン・リテール・ビジネスは利益幅とても少ない。最近、TencentはEコマースの資産のほぼすべてを中国内のオンライン・リテールとB2Cプラットフォーム・プロバイダーであるJDに変更し、今や後者の第二位の株主だ。

JDは数日前WeChatの公式ショッピング・チャンネルとして登録された。中国のオンライン・スーパーマーケットでWaltmartが支配的株数を保有するYihaodianは、同様にWeChatに追加された。

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今や全ての人が結果を知っている。これの市場での運用が失敗した後、TencentはオンラインリテーラーのYixunの経営支配権を獲得した。ただし、Tencentのゲームの様なオンライン・ビジネスと比べ、このようなオンライン・リテール・ビジネスは利益幅とても少ない。最近、TencentはEコマースの資産のほぼすべてを中国内のオンライン・リテールとB2Cプラットフォーム・プロバイダーであるJDに変更し、今や後者の第二位の株主だ。

JDは数日前WeChatの公式ショッピング・チャンネルとして登録された。中国のオンライン・スーパーマーケットでWaltmartが支配的株数を保有するYihaodianは、同様にWeChatに追加された。

元の翻訳
それは、遅かれ早かれ起こると予想される動きである。アリババ、巨大な中国オンライン市場のオーナ、はモバイルコマースにも懸命に取り組んでいる。しばらく前にチャレンジを感知し、昨年WeChat内から、そして独自のマーケットプレースからウェブページをブロックしていた。

しかし、テンセントがアリババの得意分野に入ったのは初めてではない。中国のインスタントメッセージングの巨人は、顧客対顧客と企業対顧客の市場とオンライン決済サービスTenpayへ展開したのは、タオバオのマーケットプレースが強力にけん引し、eBayの中国を破った時であった。

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それは、遅かれ早かれ起こると予想される動きである。アリババ、巨大な中国オンライン市場のオーナー、はモバイルコマースにも懸命に取り組んでいる。しばらく前にチャレンジを感知し、昨年WeChat内から、そして独自のマーケットプレースからウェブページをブロックしていた。

しかし、テンセントがアリババの得意分野に入ったのは初めてではない。中国のインスタントメッセージングの巨人は、顧客対顧客と企業対顧客の市場とオンライン決済サービスTenpayへ展開したのは、タオバオのマーケットプレースが強力にけん引し、eBayの中国を破った時であった。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I understood.
I will send it to the address you specified.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry, but I cannot check it because the order for that item is not finalized yet.

Thank you for your message.
I have refunded.
I appreciate for your understanding.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry, but we cannot set different shipment charges on Amazon.
Currently I'm working on it on my side.

Thank you for your message.
I will tell you the shipping date until the day after tomorrow.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
I understood.
I will send it to the address you specified.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry, but I cannot check it because the order for that item is not finalized yet.

Thank you for your message.
I have refunded.
I appreciate for your understanding.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry, but we cannot set different shipment charges on Amazon.
Currently I'm working on it on my side.

Thank you for your message.
I will ship out by the day after tomorrow.
Thank you.

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2013年6月に設立されたaCommerceは、タイ、シンガポール、インドネシア、フィリピンの4事業所に250人のスタッフがいる。そして、次はマレーシア、ベトナムへの進出を計画している。 Srivorakul氏は言う：

「タイとインドネシアは最も速いスピードで成長している、最も大きく、最も成熟した市場です。私達はちょうど2月にシンガポールでビジネスを開始し、それが地域的なパートナーシップや、HPとの協力会社として売上を支援してきました。私達はちょうどフィリピンでのビジネスも開始し、現在は、いくつかの主要な小売店の閉鎖について取り組んでいます。」

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2013年6月に設立されたaCommerceは、タイ、シンガポール、インドネシア、フィリピンの4事業所に250人のスタッフがいる。そして、次はマレーシア、ベトナムへの進出を計画している。 Srivorakul氏は言う：

「タイとインドネシアは最も速いスピードで成長している、最も大きく、最も成熟した市場です。私達はちょうど2月にシンガポールでビジネスを開始し、それが地域的なパートナーシップや、HPとの協力会社として売上を支援してきました。私達はちょうどフィリピンでのビジネスも開始し、現在は、いくつかの主要な小売店との締結にむけて取り組んでいます。」

元の翻訳
Thanks for your massage.
Please let me answer your question.
The subject item in question is genuine.
It also comes with 1 year warranty issued by the manufacturer.
I will send you the photo accordingly.

Thanks for your message.
We are so happy to hear about your customer satisfaction feedback.
However, we are very sorry but the shipping fee cannot be set per item due to the system configuration.

Thank you for your message.
Yes, we have this item's inventory is available.
It'd be great if you decide to order them.
Should you need additional information on the item, please feel free to contact us.
Best regards,

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Thanks for your massage.
Please let me answer your question.
The subject item in question is genuine.
It also comes with 1 year warranty issued by the manufacturer.
I will send you the photo accordingly.

Thanks for your message.
We are so happy to hear about your customer satisfaction feedback.
However, we are very sorry but the shipping fee cannot be set per item due to the system configuration.

Thank you for your message.
Yes, we have this item's inventory available.
It'd be great if you decide to order them.
Should you need additional information on the item, please feel free to contact us.
Best regards,

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Thanks for your reply. I have just asked to eBay how to handle this issue because I hadn't heard from you. Now that I got your reply, so I will follow your suggestion. I was told that the case should be opened, so can you please do it for me? Thanks for your help in advance.

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Thanks for your reply. I have just asked to eBay how to handle this issue because I hadn't heard from you. Now that I the reply, and I will try following it. As it says that I need to bother you to open the case, can you please do it for me? Thanks for your help in advance.

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Thank you very much for responding. In fact, there was no response so I inquired with eBay on how to handle. There was a response to that today so I will try doing it. This means that the case would need to be open so it's a bit complicated, but can I request you to handle it? Thank you.

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Thank you very much for responding. In fact,　as there was no response, I inquired with eBay on how to handle. Since there was a response today, I will try following it. This means that I need to bother you to open the case. Can you please do so? Thank you.

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Since my HP suddenly stopped being displayed yesterday, I examined and found that DB you are using in this script became an error.
I called the management company of the server and was told that it has been error because the connection was not cut out correctly and there are so many processes that have been "sleep".
I haven't updated the Script to the latest version, so I'm sorry if you have already resolved this problem, but I'm going to report the above issue anyway. ↵
I think it's a fairly critical bug, so please improve.

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Since my HP suddenly stopped being displayed yesterday, I examined and found that DB you are using in this script became an error.
I called the management company of the server and was told that it has been error because the connection was not cut out correctly and there are so many processes that have been "sleep".
I'm going to report the above issue anyway, but as I haven't updated the Script to the latest version, and do not know if you have already resolved this problem, in that case I apologize.↵
As I think it's a fairly critical bug, please improve.

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Thank you for offering me this wonderful opportunity.
I am also very grateful for the business we have done over the years.

With that said, I have listed some products that I would like to have as soon as possible.
I have also added the product's URL, so please confirm it.
If you are able to purchase it, I will let you know the quantity I would like. I will buy at least 4 pieces from you.

I am also interested in products other than the Tour Issue ones, so I might contact you again later.


I understand the matter concerning ARP. Where is the ARP stamp stamped on?

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Thank you for offering me this wonderful opportunity.
I am also very grateful for the business we have done over the years.

With that said, I have listed some products that I would like to have as soon as possible.
Please confirm the products's URL I have added.
If I am able to purchase it, I will let you know the quantity I would like. I will buy at least 4 pieces from you.

As I am also interested in products other than the Tour Issue ones, I might contact you again later.


I understand the matter concerning ARP. Where is the ARP stamp stamped on?