米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — 付けたレビュー

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I finished watching Tour de France, so I'll go to bed. Good night.

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Ａｓ I finished watching Tour de France, I'll go to bed now. Good night.

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I've just watched the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

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As I've just finished watching the Tour de France, I'm going to bed now. Good night.

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First, I want to understand and accept what you have to say.
Also, I give answer to the $ 150 refund you have requested.
As for the cover, a phothograph had been uploaded, the condition described as "EX (Visible sign of use)" and I confirmed that there was no problem regarding this condition.
In the future, I will explain the state of the product with more detail.
I want to be explaining a state in detail a little more in the future.
I am very pleased that the product has reached to a person who really loves and cares abour records.

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First, I want to understand and accept what you have to say.
Also, I accept the $ 150 refund you have requested.
As for the cover, a phothograph had been uploaded, the condition described as "EX (Visible sign of use)" and I confirmed that there was no problem regarding this condition.
In the future, I will explain the state of the product with more detail.
I want to be explaining a state in detail a little more in the future.
I am very pleased that the product has reached to a person who really loves and cares abour records.

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We are the only company who made the playstation video for exhibition in Japan. We suggest that making about 3 minutes of demonstration animation of your playstation product to promote it.
The following is our animation website. The product description of each company could be found.
We send this kind of videos to the potential customers via e-mail. The potential customers includes attendees which had exchanged business cards, the exhibitors, customers on your customer list, and also the related company which we investigated.

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We are the only company who makes exhibition presentation motion video in Japan. ↵
We propose to do sales promotion by making 3-minute-long presentation video of your product on exhibition.
The link below is the web site with video we produce. You can see the explanation of products from our clients.
We send this kind of videos to the potential customers via e-mail. The potential customers includes attendees which had exchanged business cards, the exhibitors, customers on your customer list, and also the related company which we surveyed.

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The prescribed number of arrival of goods is 3 for 〇 and 1 for ☆. About 〇, one customer has already reserved before you so you can reserve only one.
you have bought our goods before and are ◇’s friend so how about $40 in total ( 1 for 〇 and 1 for ☆）？ We offer a $5 discount.

A shipping charge in Japan for ◎ is 412 yen.
Please confirm it to look at the attached note calculated payment of money. ( total:25918 yen, per person:8639yen)
I f you also buy 〇, you need not to pay a commission of 〇(the price is 400yen) and if you are OK for us to pack it with ☆, the shipping charge is also free.

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The prescribed number of arrival of goods is 3 for 〇 and 1 for ☆. Regarding 〇, as one customer has already reserved before you, you can reserve only one.
Since you are returning customer, and are ◇’s friend, I offer you $40 in total ( 1 for 〇 and 1 for ☆） with $5 discount.

A shipping charge in Japan for ◎ is 412 yen.
Please confirm it to look at the attached note calculated payment of money. ( total:25918 yen, per person:8639yen)
I f you also buy 〇, you need not to pay a commission of 〇(the price is 400yen) and if you are OK for us to consolidate it with ☆, the shipping charge is also free.

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RockCorps is working that people can participate a live show of popular artists through 4 hours volunteer activities , which is a social contribution activities where more than 140,000 people from 9 countries in the world participated so far.
As the host nation, this year in Japan, in order to provide reconstruction assistance to the Great East Japan Earthquake ,↵
people will have event of volunteer activities in Iwate, Miyagi, Fukushima, Tokyo metropolitan area from April to September , and↵
Live show will be held at Azuma Gymnasium in Fukushima city on September 6.
May J. also agree to this activity, her participation in the RockCorps is decided !

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RockCorps is the system in which people can participate a live show of popular artists through 4 hours volunteer activities , and is a social contribution activities where more than 140,000 people from 9 countries in the world participated so far.
For the first time being a host by Japan, volunteer activities in Iwate, Miyagi, Fukusiha and Tokyo metropolitan area will take place from April through September to provide reconstruction assistance to the Great East Japan Earthquake, and Live show will be held at Azuma Gymnasium in Fukushima city on September 6.
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As May J. supports this activity, she announced her participation to the RockCorps !

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マイク・ロゴウェイ(2014年3月31日) "Sol Repubric社、オーディオ技術はウィルソンビルのオフィスから創業し、新しい製品とグローパル展開で約27.5億【1ドル＝100円として】の利益を上げた”。ザ オレゴニアン【新聞】。2014年4月1日引用。
^a bへ飛ぶ【？】シアラ・オブライアン(2014年3月27日)"音楽好きへの障害のサウンドトラック"。ザ　アイリッシュタイムス【新聞】。2014年4月2日引用。

Sol Repubric社社長の教訓　彼はインフォーカス社とプラナー社から学んだ-ポートランドビジネスジャーナル

種類：株式非公開企業
産業：家庭用電化製品、オーディオ周辺機器
創立：2010年
本社：オレゴン州ウィルソンビル
重要人物：
ヒックス・スコット（創立者）
コンボス・セス（創立者）
リー・ケビン（創立者）

雇用社：100人


【】は説明です。

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マイク・ロゴウェイ(2014年3月31日) "Sol Repubric社、オーディオ技術はウィルソンビルのオフィスから創業し、新しい製品とグローパル展開で約27.5億【1ドル＝100円として】の利益を上げた”。ザ オレゴニアン【新聞】。2014年4月1日引用。
^a bへ飛ぶ【？】シアラ・オブライアン(2014年3月27日)"音楽好きへの生涯のサウンドトラック"。ザ　アイリッシュタイムス【新聞】。2014年4月2日引用。

Sol Repubric社社長の教訓　彼はインフォーカス社とプラナー社から学んだ-ポートランドビジネスジャーナル

種類：株式非公開企業
産業：家庭用電化製品、オーディオ周辺機器
創立：2010年
本社：オレゴン州ウィルソンビル
重要人物：
ヒックス・スコット（創立者）
コンボス・セス（創立者）
リー・ケビン（創立者）

雇用者：100人


【】は説明です。

元の翻訳
当時、Sol　Republic主な流通チャンネルはApple, RadioShackとBest Buy.

”実体の詳細”。会社の部門。デラウェアの国務長官。
Siemers, Erik (December 16, 2011). ”Sol　Republicは騒音を作ってる”。ポートランド・ビジネス・ジャーナル
Rogoway, Mike (April 26, 2014). ”Sol Republic ”はファッションとテクノロジーをブレンドして、賑やかなAVマーケットに自分の立場を探している。
Siemers, Erik (July 13, 2012)　”Sol Republic ”の売上は22百万ドールを増加した。

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当時、Sol　Republicの主な流通チャンネルはApple, RadioShackとBest Buy.

”実体の詳細”。会社の部門。デラウェアの国務長官。
Siemers, Erik (December 16, 2011). ”Sol　Republicは騒音を作ってる”。ポートランド・ビジネス・ジャーナル
Rogoway, Mike (April 26, 2014). ”Sol Republic ”はファッションとテクノロジーをブレンドして、賑やかなAVマーケットに自分の立場を探している。
Siemers, Erik (July 13, 2012)　”Sol Republic ”の売上は22百万ドールを増加した。

元の翻訳
[Comment]
First part gain favorable receptions, this is part two of the Bacardi collaboration plan. Appropriate for the fall and winter, based with warm colors, includes a slightly classic taste, and a dandy model of adult fragrance. A "champagne gold model" with the image of a delicate taste that's smooth as silk. a band of crocodile leather and the serial number is engraved!!
Don't miss this opportunity!!!

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[Comment]
First part gain favorable receptions, this is part two of the Bacardi collaboration plan. Appropriate for the fall and winter, based with warm colors, includes a slightly classic taste, and a dandy model of adult fragrance. A "champagne gold model" with the image of a delicate taste that's smooth as silk of ”Martini". a band of crocodile leather and the serial number is engraved!!
Don't miss this opportunity!!!

元の翻訳
[Condition]
Unused

[Item name]
Mechanical Bacardi Martini collaboration model

[Case size]
Approximately 44 mm (exclude crown)

[Windshield]
Sapphire glass (super clear coating)

[Movement]
Self-winding

[Waterproof]
Enhanced waterproof for daily use

[Dial]
Silver

[Accessories]
Authentic box (Internal/External), user manual

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[Condition]
Unused

[Item name]
Mechanical Bacardi Martini collaboration model

【Item number】↵
SDGC019↵
↵
[Case size]
Approximately 44 mm (exclude crown)

[Windshield]
Sapphire glass (super clear coating)

[Movement]
Self-winding

[Waterproof]
Enhanced waterproof for daily use

[Face]
Silver

[Accessories]
Authentic box (Internal/External), user manual