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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/07/14 19:13:39

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lebron_2014 52 I am a part time translator during ni...
日本語

【コメント】
第一弾が好評だった、バカルディコラボ企画第二弾。秋冬にふさわしく、暖かみのある暖色系を基調とした、ほんのりクラシックテイストを含んだ、大人の雰囲気が薫るダンディモデル。こちらは「マルティーニ」のシルクのようになめらかで繊細な味わいをイメージした「シャンパンゴールド モデル」。クロコダイルを使用したレザーの換えバンド付きで、シリアルナンバー刻印入り!!
この機会に是非!!!

英語

[Comment]
First part gain favorable receptions, this is part two of the Bacardi collaboration plan. Appropriate for the fall and winter, based with warm colors, includes a slightly classic taste, and a dandy model of adult fragrance. A "champagne gold model" with the image of a delicate taste that's smooth as silk. a band of crocodile leather and the serial number is engraved!!
Don't miss this opportunity!!!

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ryojiyono 52 英検1級。 TOEFL623。 TOEIC 975。
ryojiyonoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/15 12:07:35

元の翻訳
[Comment]
First part gain favorable receptions, this is part two of the Bacardi collaboration plan. Appropriate for the fall and winter, based with warm colors, includes a slightly classic taste, and a dandy model of adult fragrance. A "champagne gold model" with the image of a delicate taste that's smooth as silk. a band of crocodile leather and the serial number is engraved!!
Don't miss this opportunity!!!

修正後
[Comment]
First part gain favorable receptions, this is part two of the Bacardi collaboration plan. Appropriate for the fall and winter, based with warm colors, includes a slightly classic taste, and a dandy model of adult fragrance. A "champagne gold model" with the image of a delicate taste that's smooth as silk of ”Martini". a band of crocodile leather and the serial number is engraved!!
Don't miss this opportunity!!!

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