加藤 仁美 (pen3018) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
The person who thinks that only one's white part is splendid↵
dislike a person showing one's black part.

The person who cannot be pleased with the happiness of the person avoids that oneself finds happiness.
Though one's figure is actually reflected to all things.

You do not need to already dislike oneself whom you have left.
The X-mark that you put is that you added to yourself X-mark.
When you can change the X-mark to a circle mark, your original splendor will glisten.
I want to become like that, too.

修正後
The person who thinks that only one's white part is splendid dislikes a person showing his black part.

The person who cannot be pleased with the happiness of others avoids finding happiness for himself.
Though one's figure is actually reflected to all things.

You do not need to already dislike yourself whom you have left.
The X you marked on others is the other you marked on yourself.
When you can change the X to a circle, your original splendor will glisten.
I want to be like that, too.

元の翻訳
The special delivery starts precedently only for "TeamAyu members" from Wednesday, May 21 ! Please listen to new songs earlier than anyone else at this opportunity !!
Click the following URL or QR cord and access to the TeamAyu member-limited page. You can download the musical piece.

[Target musical pieces]
・ XOXO
・ Terminal
・ Angel
・ Lelio
・ What is forever love
・ NOW & 4EVA

修正後
The special delivery starts precedently only for "TeamAyu members" from Wednesday, May 21 ! Please listen to new songs earlier than anyone else at this opportunity !!
Click the following URL or QR cord to access to the TeamAyu member-only-area. Now, you can download the musical piece.

[Target musical pieces]
・ XOXO
・ Terminal
・ Angel
・ Lelio
・ What is forever love
・ NOW & 4EVA

元の翻訳
The greetings from the stage is decided in commemoration of the release "Gakkou No Kaidan ~ Noroi No Kotodama　(Ghost story of the school with the words execration)" on "Friday, May 23 !
Starring TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE (Ayano Konishi, Miyu Yamabe, Hitomi Arai, Yuri Nakae, Mei Shoji ) talk about the appearance of the screen and unknown episodes about the scenes !

Date and Time: Sunday, May 25, 2014
Cast: TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE
Rate: Flat 2,000 yen
※ The movie admiration ticket is included in a rate, too.

修正後
The greetings from the stage has been decided in commemoration of the release of "Gakkou No Kaidan ~ Noroi No Kotodama　(Ghost story of the school with the words execration)" to be slated on Friday, May 23 !
The leading ladies, TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE (Ayano Konishi, Miyu Yamabe, Hitomi Arai, Yuri Nakae, Mei Shoji ), will talk about their thoughts on appearance in this movie and untold episodes!

Date and Time: Sunday, May 25, 2014
Presenters: TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE
Fee: 2,000 yen (Flat)
※ This fee includes one movie admiration ticket.

元の翻訳
After a debut, the activity in foreign countries has promptly planned. In May, the first overseas lives will be performed as the "good-looking representative from Japan" at "THAILAND COMIC CON 2014". And in June, the live broadcasting will be also performed at nakata.net cafe of Brazil Sao Paulo while 2014 FIFA World Cup of Brazil is holding.

Now, two theme songs of the dramas which are "First class" (affiliated with Fuji Television Network's Saturday drama series) and "My host S" (affiliated with Television Asahi) are participated.

修正後
After a debut, the activity in foreign countries has promptly planned [awkward]. In May, the first overseas live show will be performed [why passive voice?] as the "good-looking representative from Japan" at "THAILAND COMIC CON 2014". And in June, the live broadcasting will be also performed at nakata.net cafe of Brazil Sao Paulo while 2014 FIFA World Cup of Brazil is holding.

Now, two theme songs of dramas which are "First class" (affiliated with Fuji Television Network's Saturday drama series) and "My host S" (affiliated with Television Asahi) are participated [why passive voice?].

元の翻訳
Previously, I send you two invoices and I contacted you .
Because you told me to purchase seven medals.
Have you received two invoices of eBay and paypal ?

The invoice from eBay is for five medals.
And the invoice that was sent from paypal is for two medals.
Content is the medal of 1.2.

If you want to buy seven medals, please complete the payment of two invoices.
If you want to buy only five medals, please complete payment only invoice of eBay.

修正後
Previously, I sent you two invoices and I contacted you.
Tha't because you told me to purchase seven medals.
Have you received two invoices from eBay and paypal ?

The invoice from eBay is for the five medals.
And the invoice that was sent from paypal is for the two medals.
The content is for the medal of 1.2.

If you want to buy the seven medals, please complete the payment of the two invoices.
If you want to buy only the five medals, please complete payment only the invoice of eBay.

元の翻訳
al95001

Ageless beauty! Unbelievable body which was over 40 years old ! Ms. Risa Hirako is charming. It is natural to wish to look good with a bikini even over 40 years old. Check her approach such a natural matter !

Risa Hirako (February 14, 1971 - )
Japanese fashion model and talent.
She produces the fashion brand and the singer business.
She was called "Charismatic Model" and "Stars of the Around forty".

Her body doesn't look like 42 years old. So, Japanese women admire her body !

修正後
al95001

Ageless beauty! Unbelievable body which is over 40 years old ! Ms. Risa Hirako is charming. It is natural for women to wish to look good in a bikini even over 40 years old. Check her who has achieved such a natural matter!

Risa Hirako (February 14, 1971 - )
Japanese fashion model and talent.
She produces the fashion brand and the singer business.
She was called "Charismatic Model" and "the Star of Around forties".

Her body doesn't look like 42 years old. So, Japanese women admire her body !