Naoki Matsuo (naoki19880220) — もらったレビュー

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本文は _________, の写真と指紋がここに採られ、本事務所の印により部分的に補われた事、そして他の詳細事項が下記の通りである事を証明する:

出生地: _________　誕生日: _________　性別: _________　婚姻の有無: _________　髪の色:_________, 顔の特徴: _________はリチャード･Ａ. デイヴィッド　ジュニア長官に署名された第 BSI-12-194の認知制、2012年10月18日に是認、2012年11月13日に第二回是認された’憲法1987、第2段落、第1節、第6項に準ずる。

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本文は _________, の写真と指紋がここに採られ、本事務所の印により部分的に補われた事、そして他の詳細事項が下記の通りである事を証明する:

出生地: _________　誕生日: _________　性別: _________　婚姻の有無: _________　髪の色:_________, 顔の特徴: ↵
_________は憲法1987、第2段落、第1節、第6項に基づき、2012年10月18日付でリチャード･Ａ. デイヴィッド　ジュニア長官に署名された認定命令第 BSI-12-194に従いフィリピン市民として認定され、2012年11月13日付で二度目の承認を得た。

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1. Does this product have a brooch attached to the back of it? I'm looking for the one without a brooch, that can be used as a part of DIY. Can use sell the one without a brooch please?
2. The attached picture is an item released in 90s. It seems the color gold of this item doesn't exist.

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1. Does this product have a brooch pin attached to the back of it? I'm looking for one without a brooch, that can be used for DIY. Can you sell ones without brooches please?
2. The attached picture is an item released in the 90s. It seems like the gold color version of this item doesn't exist.

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① Also, as the condition of listing items, we are asked to submit invoice from the products' sources.
Thus, if ever there is any counterfeit product, it may cause some trouble to your company.
(It also may get the maker involved)
We are totally aware that it would cause some hassles to your company and we feel sorry for that since your company has always provided us a great service, but we are hoping for your corporation.

Also, there will be no trouble if the source of the product is its maker. But in that case we need the invoice from the maker.

②We received a message about the cancellation but the status is still " pending".
I asked to ship. Is there anything I can do about it?

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① Also, as the condition of listing items, we are requested to submit the invoice from the supplier.
Thus, it will be possible to cause some problems if ever there are any counterfeit products.
(Also, the investigation by the maker could be involved.)
We are totally aware that it would cause some hassles to your company, and we are sorry for that since your company has always provided us a great service, but we are hoping for your cooperation.

Also, it will not be a problem if the supplier is its maker, but its invoice will be necessary.

②We received a message about the cancellation but the status has been pending.
I would like you to ship it, but how can I request it?

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我々の完全版のカタログは拝見頂けましたでしょうか。もしまだでしたら、郵便番号をご報告頂けましたらお送りさせて頂きたいと思います。
取り急ぎ、こちらのホームページから我々の商品のセレクションを全てオンラインで観覧いただけます。
www.authenticmodels.com.

ご興味を持って頂きありがとうございます。また何か必要な情報などございましたらご連絡ください。
ご返信をお待ちしております。それでは良い一日をお過ごし下さい。

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我々の完全版のカタログは拝見頂けましたでしょうか。もしまだでしたら、郵便のあて先をご報告頂けましたらお送りさせて頂きたいと思います。
取り急ぎ、こちらのホームページから我々の商品のセレクションを全てオンラインで観覧いただけます。
www.authenticmodels.com.

ご興味を持って頂きありがとうございます。また何か必要な情報などございましたらご連絡ください。
ご返信をお待ちしております。それでは良い一日をお過ごし下さい。

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I'm sorry it's taken some time to reply since the last time I responded.

Regarding ＊＊ that we ordered the last time, many of them were with incipient defects and 40 % of them were returned back.
This particular products have quite many defects compared to other products.
We'd like to order the same products, it's quite a damage to us to have this numbers of returns.

Is it possible to have some type of warranty for ＊＊?
Only ＊＊ particularly have a lot of incipient defects. Is there any major difference from other products?

We'd like to order the products below this time.
Please send the invoice.

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I'm sorry it's taken some time to reply since the last time I responded.

Regarding ＊＊ that we ordered last time, many of them were with incipient defects and 40 % of them were returned back.
This particular products have quite many defects compared to other products.
We'd like to order the same products, but it's quite a damage for us to have these numbers of returns.

Is it possible to have some types of warranty for ＊＊?
Only ＊＊ particularly have a lot of incipient defects. Is there any major difference from other products?

We'd like to order the products below this time.
Please send me the invoice.

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はい。申し訳ございません。注文は受け取っております。しかし現在我々の在庫にのこっているヤカンですが、ステンレス製のボールが噴出口部分に付いておりません。しかしながら、今現在製作中であります。ボール部分が完成次第、ご連絡させて頂き注文書をお送りいたします。

Leachcoの特許品 Snoogleですが、体全体に使える最善の枕ですので、沢山の枕を使う必要が無くなります。 Snoogleは坐骨神経痛や背中下部の痛みを防ぐのに役立ち、膝で挟む事によって背中の痛みを防ぎ、お腹にもあたるので温度調節なども可能です。そして頭を上手く支えるので、健康的な呼吸を可能にし、胸焼けや、妊婦さんが掛かりやすい症状を防げます。

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はい。申し訳ございません。注文は受け取っております。しかし現在在庫のあるヤカンは、ステンレス製のボールが噴出口部分に付いておりません。しかしながら、今現在製作中であります。ボール部分が完成次第、ご連絡させて頂き注文書をお送りいたします。

Leachcoの特許品 Snoogleですが、体全体に使える最善の枕ですので、沢山の枕を使う必要が無くなります。 Snoogleは坐骨神経痛や背中下部の痛みを防ぐのに役立ち、膝で挟む事によって背中の痛みを防ぎ、お腹にもあたるので温度調節なども可能です。そして頭を上手く支えるので、健康的な呼吸を可能にし、胸焼けや、妊婦さんが掛かりやすい症状を防げます。

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Our server stopped yesterday and today.
We still don't know the exact reason for this, but it's been stopping more frequently since we install the ABC system.
I assume the number of access users also also has something to do with this. (Perhaps it consumes too much memory?)

Is there any way to turn of the ABC system itself? Instead of turning the switch off, we'd like to turn the system itself off.

It's bothering us everyday since the server stops a lot. hoping for your replay.

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Our server stopped yesterday and today.
We still don't know the exact cause for this, but it's been stopping more frequently since we install the ABC system.
I assume the number of access users also has something to do with this. (Perhaps it consumes too much memory?)

Is there any way to turn of the ABC function itself? Instead of turning off the display, we'd like to turn off the function itself.

It's bothering us since the server goes down everyday. Your reply would be helpful.

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こんにちは。商品概要を注意深く読んでいて気付いたのですが、レンズの状態に関して何かボンヤリしたものが中にあり、レンズのもやか霧と説明していますが、すこし心配になりました。”レンズにかすみがある”。

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こんにちは。商品概要を注意深く読んでいて気付いたのですが、レンズの状態に関して何かボンヤリしたものが中にあり、レンズのもやか霧と説明していますので、すこし心配になりました。「レンズにかすみがある。」

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「インドの消費者は、何かを選ぶ時、サービスを基準に選択していることに気づきました。そして我々はどこよりもその部分で負けないようにしたいです。」
XiaomiのHugo Barra副社長はインドでの立ち上げの際に語りました。「我々はインドの中華系企業にはなりたくありません。インドで、インド企業として定着したいです。そして最良の第一歩を踏み出しました。サムソンやアップルにとっても脅威になるのではないでしょうか。」

「消費者にとっても、素晴らしい日々の始まりです。インド独立記念日にNarendra Modi総理大臣が国民に告げたように“素晴らしき時代はの始まり”です。

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「インドの消費者は、何かを選ぶ時、サービスを基準に選択していることに気づきました。そして我々はどこよりもその部分で負けないようにしたいです。」
XiaomiのHugo Barra副社長はインドでの立ち上げの際に語りました。「我々はインドの中華系企業にはなりたくありません。インドで、インド企業として定着したいです。そして最良の第一歩を踏み出しました。」サムソンやアップルにとっても脅威になるのではないでしょうか。

消費者にとっても、素晴らしい日々の始まりです。インド独立記念日である今日Narendra Modi総理大臣が国民に告げたように“素晴らしき時代の始まり”です。

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For processing in Japan, We'd like to go ahead and make documents now.　Please inform the birthday of Male & Female. Also, please attach the invoice.

We really appreciate your quick responses.

P.S
Have you followed up on he documents that we inquired to several times?
We are quite in a hurry.
If you haven't received it, just let me know.
I'll apply once again.
It's very important for us.
We are hoping for your quick response.

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For processing in Japan, We'd like to go ahead and make documents now.　Please inform the birthdays of Male & Female. Also, please attach the invoice.

We really appreciate your quick responses.

P.S
Have you followed up on the documents that we inquired to you several times?
We are quite in a hurry.
If you haven't received it, just let me know.
I'll apply once again.
It's very important for us.
We are hoping for your quick response.

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We'd like to ask a couple of questions regarding your health status.
The result of your answers shall be only used for such purposes as screening process, appropriate workplace assigning, and basic information for health management, therefore shall never be passed to the third party.
In our company, We operate in accordance with our company theme 「**」. Thus, not only do our user find a new job or change jobs, but also your employees make the most of their own skills after they have joined our company. In order to conduct the duty, it is crucial to be both physically and mentally healthy. Yet, some people sacrifice their health condition and push themselves in order to adapt to new work environment.

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We'd like to ask a couple of questions regarding your health status.
The result of your answers shall be only used for such purposes as screening process, appropriate workplace assigning, and basic information for health management, therefore shall never be passed to the third party without your permission.
We operate in accordance with our theme "**". Thus, not only do our user find a new job or change jobs, but also your employees make the most of their own skills after they have joined us. In order to conduct the duty, it is crucial to be both physically and mentally healthy. Yet, some people sacrifice their health condition and push themselves in order to adapt to new work environment.

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I did some research on Ovation 1687GT, but this model only exists in blue color.
This model doesn't have beige color as far as it's brand-new.
I listed this item with proper model number and pictures, and shipped it to you as you ordered.

It's nothing to do with me how much this guitar costs in your country.
Tues, I can't accept your request fore refund of $2,191.99.
I will report and consult this matter to eBay and PayPal.

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I did some research on Ovation 1687GT, but this model only exists in this blue color.
This model doesn't have beige color as far as it's brand-new.
I listed this item with proper model number and the pictures, and shipped it quickly to you as you ordered.

It's nothing to do with me for how much this guitar is sold in your country.
Tues, I can never accept your request fore refund of no less than $2,191.99.
I will report and consult this matter to eBay and PayPal.

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Thank you very much for the contract document. I've checked the content and there is no problem on it.

Since ○○ have already been almost sold out, I've replaced ○○ with **.
Can I order as specified in the attached order sheet?

Since you use live tree, I feel like can feel your great energy you poured in it.
Even though I communicating with you via translators since I'm not good at English, I can feel your passion beyond the language barrier. I can really resonate with you.

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Thank you very much for the contract document, too. I've checked the content and could not find any problems on it.

Since ○○ have already been almost sold out, I've replaced ○○ with **.
Can I order as specified in the attached order sheet?

Since you use live trees, I can feel your great energy you poured in it.
Even though I am communicating with you via translators since I'm not good at English, I can feel your passion beyond the language barrier. I can really resonate with you.