Mitsuaki (mtsk243) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I hope you are fine.
I must apologize you.
The goods you ordered is temporarily out of stock and on back order.
The day it will come is expected to be August 20th. I am so sorry, but we cannot ship it to you now.
Therefore, we might ask you to accept the cancellation of this goods.
We sincerely apologize you for this trouble. I would appreciate it if you would understand.

修正後
We hope you are fine.
We must apologize to you.
The item you ordered was temporarily out of stock and on back order.
It will be arrived on August 20th. So we are sorry but we cannot ship it to you now.
Therefore, we might ask you to accept the cancellation of the order.
We sincerely apologize you for this trouble. I would appreciate it if you would understand.

元の翻訳
Her appearance in "a-nation stadium fes." was decided!!

Her appearance in "a-nation stadium fes." was decided for the first time in two years!
She will appear in the performance at the Osaka venue on Aug. 22, and at Tokyo venue on Aug. 29.
We will be able to accept Yahoo! premium member's preceding order!!
A reservation for the preceding order is as follows:

修正後
Her appearance in "a-nation stadium fes." was decided!!

She will return to "a-nation stadium fes." after two years absence!
She will appear in the performance at the Osaka venue on Aug. 22, and at Tokyo venue on Aug. 29.
We will be able to accept Yahoo! premium member's preceding order!!
A reservation for the preceding order is as follows:

元の翻訳
Before the tour started, it took a whole thirty minutes for a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time. It was my first time riding a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).

修正後
Before the tour started, we had a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time for around 30 minutes. It was my first time to ride a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).