翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

ツアー開始前、30分ほどかけて丁寧に操作方法のレクチャーと、練習時間があります。セグウェイは初めてで、あまり運動神経にも自信が無かったのですが、安心してスタートすることができました。
昼食はユダヤ人犠牲者記念館のモニュメントが見えるドイツ料理のカジュアルなレストランでした。安いですがボリュームは満点です。ガイドさん（女性）は終始とてもフレンドリーで、いろいろなところで写真を撮ってくれます。他の参加者の方（ロンドンからのカップルでした）とも楽しい会話をさせていただきました。

英語

Before the tour started, it took a whole thirty minutes for a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time. It was my first time riding a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).

レビュー ( 1 )

mtsk243はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/14 08:01:38

元の翻訳
Before the tour started, it took a whole thirty minutes for a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time. It was my first time riding a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).

修正後
Before the tour started, we had a polite lecture on how to handle the segway ensued, along with practice time for around 30 minutes. It was my first time to ride a segway, and since I wasn't exactly the athletic type, I didn't have much confidence. But once I relaxed, I was able to start.

For lunch, I had some German dishes at a casual restaurant where you could see the Holocaust Memorial. It was cheap, but it was packed to the brim. The female guide was friendly the whole time and took a bunch of photos for me. We had a fun conversation with the other people who went along (a couple from London).

分かりやすい良い訳と思います。1点、「30分かかる」ということより「レクチャーと練習時間がある」ことの方がポイントと思い語順をいじってみました。