Santos (mr_santos_822) — もらったレビュー

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There are already a number of offers so that alone is proof that your product is fascinating.
I believe that there are a lot of Japanese people who would want your products.
I was fascinated by this product at the beginning.
I understand that you have not done the Bluetooth test in the US so I will inform you on some inspection agencies in the US.

Please kindly let me know once you are done with the preparations.
I am looking forward for the day to be able to talk to you.

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There are already a number of offers. It proves your product is fascinating.
I believe that there are a lot of Japanese people who would want your products.
I am fascinated by this product even more.
I understand that you have not done the Bluetooth test in the US, so I will inform you of some inspection agencies in the US.

Please kindly let me know once you are done with the preparations.
I am looking forward for the day to be able to talk to you.

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In addition, the best music video work of each department will be determined from the votes of the listeners and the general public which are being accepted in the special website, as well as the total number of music video playback count from the VMAJ official website, VMAJ.JP that is being operated by digital media partner GyaO!.

You can cast your votes with the [Vote] button in the VMAJ 2014 official website (http://vmaj.jp).

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In addition, the best music video from each department will be determined from votes by listeners and the general public, which are being accepted in the special website, as well as the total number count of music video playback from the VMAJ official website, VMAJ.JP, operated by digital media partner GyaO!.

You can cast your votes with the [Vote] button on the VMAJ 2014 official website (http://vmaj.jp).

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After completing the members registration, I will send the member number listed in the registration completion email that is required to log in into the "big knowledge" website.
Please confirm the setting of the receiving terminal that you have registered to be able to receive emails from <support@daichi-miura.jp>.

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After completing the members' registration, I will send the member number listed in the registration completion email that is required to log in the "big knowledge" website.
Please confirm the setting of the receiving terminal that you have registered to be able to receive emails from <support@daichi-miura.jp>.

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I really want a pair of those dishes so I am very happy to have won the bid. It is alright to list the shipping information of my address in English. It is being delivered without any problems as of now. So I am looking forward for it.

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I really want [tense confusion] that pair of dishes, so I am delighted to have won the bid. Please go ahead and write the shipping information such as my address in English. I haven't had any problems so far. I am looking forward to receiving it.

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I really want a pair of those dishes so I am very happy to have won the bid. It is alright to list the shipping information of my address in English. It is being delivered without any problems as of now. So I am looking forward for it.

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I really wanted the pair of those dishes and I am very happy to have won the bid. You can write the shipping information such as my address in English. I never experienced a problem with it. I am looking forward to it, then.

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■ I do not use SAL since there are cases of losses.
I want to be able to deliver securely to the client so I do not use delivery services without a tracking number.
I request for your kind understanding for this.

■ The electrical products support the power voltage of Japan. Due to this, there will be a need for a plug or an transformer for some cases.
You can buy the transformer from me.

■ The user manual only comes in Japanese so please kindly understand this.
Please do not hesitate to contact if you have any questions.

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■ I do not use SAL since parcels sometimes get lost .
I want to be able to deliver the shipments securely to the client so I do not use delivery services without a tracking number.
I request for your kind understanding for this.

■ The electrical appliances support the voltage for Japan. Due to this reason, you may need a plug or a transformer in some cases.
You can buy the transformer from me.

■ Please be aware that there may be some cases where instruction manuals are only available in Japanese.
Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any questions.

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The ordered item has not arrive.

The following email was received 10 days ago.

It has not been refunded into my credit card.
Have you really processed the refund?
Please issue the refund immediately.

Why does the 20% OFF not applicable only to this product?

The 20% OFF are applied to the following products that were ordered with the same conditions.
I think that this is clearly a system error.

Please refund the $30 immediately.

This Rug has not been shipped.
Why is that? I have contacted you multiple time regarding this matter.
Please ship it urgently.

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The ordered item has not arrive [tense confusion].

The following email was received [use active voice] 10 days ago.

It has not been refunded into my credit card.
Have you really processed the refund?
Please issue the refund immediately.

Why does the 20% discount not applicable [parts of speech confusion] only to this product?

The 20% OFF are [subject-verb agreement, tense confusion] applied to the following products that were ordered under the same conditions.
I think that this is clearly a system error.

Please refund $30 immediately.

This rug has not been shipped.
Why is that? I have contacted you multiple time [singular vs. plural] regarding this matter.
Please ship it urgently.

元の翻訳
[Here is the corresponding product]
mu-mo shop
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/1403goodscl03/ (PC/Smartphones/MB)

[Campaign period] March 7 (Fri) 16:00 - March 17 (Mon) noontime

* Product quantities are limited so sales will commence until supplies last. We ask for your kind understanding.

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【對象商品請點擊這裡】
mu-mo商店
http：//sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/1403goodscl03/（PC/智能手機/MB通用）

【促銷活動期間】預定3月7日(週五)16:00～3月17日(週一)中午

※商品數量有限，售完即止。敬請事先諒解。

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Good day.

Thank you very much for responding quickly.

With regards to the materials, I want to receive both the plain glass and glass with weaving.

We are interested with jars, tumblers, bowls and dishes.

Is it possible for you to create aerated recycled products that are slightly thick?

I am sorry to bother you with your busy schedule, but I will be looking forward for your response.

I wish to be able to have a good business relationship with your company in the future.
Thank you and regards.

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Good day.

Thank you very much for responding quickly.

With regards to the materials, I want to receive both the plain glass and glass with weaving.

We are interested in jars, tumblers, bowls, and dishes.

Is it possible for you to create slightly thicker aerated recycled glass?

I am sorry to bother you with your busy schedule, but I will be looking forward for your response.

I wish to be able to have a good business relationship with your company in the future.
Thank you and regards.

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Good day.

Thank you very much for responding quickly.

With regards to the materials, I want to receive both the plain glass and glass with weaving.

We are interested with jars, tumblers, bowls and dishes.

Is it possible for you to create aerated recycled products that are slightly thick?

I am sorry to bother you with your busy schedule, but I will be looking forward for your response.

I wish to be able to have a good business relationship with your company in the future.
Thank you and regards.

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Good day.

Thank you very much for responding quickly.

With regards to the materials, I want to receive both the plain glass and glass with weaving.

We are interested in jars, tumblers, bowls and dishes.

Is it possible for you to create slightly thick, aerated products using recycled glass?

I am sorry to bother you with your busy schedule, but I will be looking forward to your response.

I wish to have a good business relationship with your company in the future.
Thank you and regards.

元の翻訳
Good day.

Thank you very much for responding quickly.

With regards to the materials, I want to receive both the plain glass and glass with weaving.

We are interested with jars, tumblers, bowls and dishes.

Is it possible for you to create aerated recycled products that are slightly thick?

I am sorry to bother you with your busy schedule, but I will be looking forward for your response.

I wish to be able to have a good business relationship with your company in the future.
Thank you and regards.

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Good day.

Thank you very much for responding quickly.

We would like to ask you to send us the materials for both plain glass and glass with weaving.

What we are interested in are jars, tumblers, bowls, and dishes.

Is it possible for you to create aerated recycled glasses that are slightly thick?

I am sorry to bother you with your busy schedule, but I will be looking forward to your response.

I wish to be able to have a good business relationship with your company in the future.
Thank you and regards.

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I am very sorry this time.
I have mistakenly sent out a different product and this was a miss from my end.
I am currently away due to a business trip so I will be shipping the product by tomorrow (April 3).
I am very sorry to have sent out the wrong product.
In addition, I will contact you once again after shipping the product so please kindly wait for a little longer.

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I am very sorry this time.
I have mistakenly sent out a different product and this was a miss from my end.
I am currently away on a business trip so I will be shipping the product by tomorrow (April 3).
I am very sorry to have sent out the wrong product.
In addition, I will contact you once again after shipping the product so please kindly wait for a little longer.

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I am looking for pieces of works with purchasing price range from $15 to $40 and campus works up to $60.
My motto is to sell pieces of works at low prices and I haven't purchased more than those amounts.
I want to try selling pieces of works with high unit price for once.
I have actually purchased pieces of works that I like in the past. Almost all of the purchased works have concluded with a contract (There are those items I like that I am using as decorations in my own home).
Thank you very much for the different proposals. However, I have just made the purchases so it will be difficult for me to make any purchases immediately. Is the URL set item being sold a campus work?

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I am looking for pieces of works with purchasing price range from $15 to $40 and campus works up to $60.
My motto is to sell pieces of works at low prices and I haven't purchased more than those amounts.
I want to try selling pieces of works with high unit price for once.
I have actually purchased pieces of works that I like in the past. Almost all of the purchased works already have a contract (There are those items I like that I am using as decorations in my own home).
Thank you very much for the different proposals. However, I have just made the purchases so it will be difficult for me to make any purchases immediately. Is the set item being sold in the URL a campus work?

元の翻訳
I am looking for pieces of works with purchasing price range from $15 to $40 and campus works up to $60.
My motto is to sell pieces of works at low prices and I haven't purchased more than those amounts.
I want to try selling pieces of works with high unit price for once.
I have actually purchased pieces of works that I like in the past. Almost all of the purchased works have concluded with a contract (There are those items I like that I am using as decorations in my own home).
Thank you very much for the different proposals. However, I have just made the purchases so it will be difficult for me to make any purchases immediately. Is the URL set item being sold a campus work?

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I am looking for pieces of works with price ranges from $15 to $40 and campus works up to $60.
My motto is to sell pieces of works at low prices and I haven't purchased more than those amounts.
I want to try selling pieces of works with high unit price for once.
I have actually purchased pieces of works that I like in the past. Almost all of the purchased works have concluded with a contract (There are those items I like that I am using as decorations in my own home).
Thank you very much for the different proposals. However, I have just made the purchases so it will be difficult for me to make any purchases immediately. Is the URL set item being sold a campus work?

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Thank you very much for sending the invoice.
I have separated the payment into 2.

First payment : 5780 dollars
Second payment : 1708 dollars
Total : 7488 dollars

Please kindly confirm

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Thank you very much for sending me the invoice.
I have payed 2 installments of the payment.

First payment : 5780 dollars
Second payment : 1708 dollars
Total : 7488 dollars

Please kindly confirm.

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I totally agree with the opinion of X. The next update might be more than 2 months or even at a latter time.
The updates until now are mostly for bug fixes.
While looking at the posted contents, the support for responsive design has yet to be done.
I think that the update should suppose to take the priority level, but this author completely rejected the voice of the user.

Well, there is the thought that there will be additional buyers if there is a promise for an update someday.
I think that it will be good to give up or process the refund.

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I totally agree with the opinion of X. The next update might be more than 2 months or even at a latter time.
The updates until now are mostly for bug fixes.
While looking at the posted contents, the support for responsive design has yet to be done.
I think that the update should suppose to take the priority level, but this author completely rejected the voice of the user.

Well, they might have probably thought that there will be additional buyers if there is a promise for an update someday.
I think that it will be good to give up or process the refund.

元の翻訳
"Tightening feeling Love School"
The ever popular "Love school" game characters have became stamps! There are lots of unique characters including a student council president like myself, a talented pianist good in cooking, and a cute idol! Heap up the talk with their cute school life ☆

"Sam and mom. (Daily Edition)"
The pleasant day to day life of the high school student Sam and his mother Mitsuko!
Please enjoy the daily life of unusual characters.

"Naughty Secret Meeting"
〜"I, Professor what!"〜

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"Tightening feeling Love School"
The ever popular "Love school" game characters have became stamps! There are lots of unique characters including a student council president with a huge ego, a talented pianist who is bad in cooking, and a cute idol! Heap up the talk with their cute school life ☆

"Sam and mom. (Daily Edition)"
The pleasant day to day life of the high school student Sam and his mother Mitsuko!
Please enjoy the daily life of unusual characters.

"Naughty Secret Meeting"
〜"I am the professor!"〜