Santos (mr_santos_822) — 付けたレビュー

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Advance reservation of tickets :
4/01 (Tue) FM802 [TACTY IN THE MORNING]
4/03 (Thu)FM802 [802 RADIO MASTERS]
4/05 (Sat) FM802 [SATURDAY AMUSIC ISLANDS -AFTERNOON EDITION-]
4/07 (Mon) - 4/13 (Sun) <802.DJ paying members advance reservation>

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Advance reservation of tickets :
4/01 (Tue) FM802 [TACTY IN THE MORNING]
4/03 (Thu) FM802 [802 RADIO MASTERS]
4/05 (Sat) FM802 [SATURDAY AMUSIC ISLANDS -AFTERNOON EDITION-]
4/07 (Mon) - 4/13 (Sun) <802.DJ paying members advance reservation>

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I am selling these items for making handmade goods as the one on a following address,
Is this against the policy of ●●?Please contact again if there is a problem.

● ● is put up for auction.
This item is brand new and never used.

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I am selling these items for making handmade goods same as the ones on a following address,
Is this against the policy of ●●?Please contact again if there is a problem.

● ● is put up for auction.
This item is brand new and never used.

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It was really a pair of plates that I want so I am really happy to be able bid successfully. There are no issues on listing the shipping information such as my address in English. It is arriving without any problems up until now. I am looking forward for it's arrival.

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It was really a pair of plates that I want so I am really happy to be able bid successfully. There are no issues on listing the shipping information of my address in English. It is arriving without any problems up until now. I am looking forward for it's arrival.

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Thank you very much on doing business with us as always.

This time, I made an order as I want to buy more products than usual.
However, the price is higher than usual so I am currently troubled.

Can you provide it at a cheaper price?

I have been sending emails to A until now,
but there was no reply so I contacted you in this email address.

Thank you and regards.

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Thank you very much for doing business with us as always.

This time, I made an order as I want to buy more products than usual.
However, the price is higher than usual so I am currently troubled.

Can you provide it at a cheaper price?

I have been sending emails to A until now,
but there was no reply so I contacted you in this email address.

Thank you and regards.

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When I thought of those things, I happen to see your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it when I travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept looking on the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and run all over again from the starting point.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lenses in Japan.)

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When I thought of those things, I so happened to have seen your products and was fascinated.

I like bicycles and I bring it with me on my travel.

While travelling, I go biking while looking at a map and a smartphone, but I kept looking on the map over and over again since I am not familiar with the road, and there are a lot of times when I went the wrong way and ended up riding the bike from the starting point once again.

In addition, there are also danger on being hit by a car when I keep looking on the smartphone while running.
(There are no specialize bicycle lanes in Japan.)

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Good day. Thank you very much fo reading the PR documentation.

First of all, please ensure to let me know your thoughts about my profile and this product.

I work as an employee in a company when I graduated college last year.
I cannot live the life that I have always wanted right now and I am also in a lot of stress.

With that, I changed my work and I have decided to be involved in importing good products from abroad to Japan.
Due to this, I am entering into a contract for importing excellent products not available in Japan and I want to start my own business.

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Good day. Thank you very much for reading the PR documentation.

First of all, please ensure to let me know your thoughts about my profile and this product.

I work as an employee in a company when I graduated college last year.
I cannot live the life that I have always wanted right now and I am also in a lot of stress.

With that, I changed my work and I have decided to be involved in importing good products from abroad to Japan.
Due to this, I am entering into a contract for importing excellent products not available in Japan and I want to start my own business.

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As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for the Dortmund era to shine.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
It's a bit concerning for the Bayern game with Mata out.

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As a fan of Japanese people, I honestly was not amused when Kagawa's position disappeared with the addition of Mata.
However, there will be coordination with the addition of Mata so the Man U soccer also became more interesting.

However, they are not physically strong and it is disappointing that they need to go down to the back when doing a corner kick.
I am hoping that they can do the center play which is their specialty.
In addition, I am hoping for them to shine as they did during the Dortmund era.

I am happy that Man U supporters mentioned that they are happy to see Kagawa's play.
I'm a bit concerned for the Bayern game with Mata out.

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The road on the northern part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park where people come to view the cherry blossoms.

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The road on the south part of the mansion where I live is a "Japan and US joint usage area". There are cars that are lined up in the forest park that belongs to the people who come to the park to view the cherry blossoms.

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However, we did not know about the import regulations on crocodile skin.
This has led to a very large arrears and it was due to a lack of confirmation from us.

There is a need for the CITES document when importing crocodile skin and it requires a very complicated process.
Due to this, this watch cannot be delivered to the address in the US by Saturday.

We will shoulder all the expenses as this watch was sent to Canada.
However, we need to confirm if there also import regulations on crocodile skin in Canada.
So we are currently confirming this urgently and we will get back to you soon.

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However, we did not know about the import regulations on crocodile skin.
This has led to a very large arrears and it was due to a lack of confirmation from our end.

There is a need for the CITES document when importing crocodile skin and it requires a very complicated process.
Due to this, this watch cannot be delivered to the address in the US by Saturday.

We will shoulder all the expenses as this watch was sent to Canada.
However, we need to confirm if there are import regulations on crocodile skin in Canada.
So we are currently confirming this urgently and we will get back to you soon.

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I payed it in 2 payments.

1st: 5780 Dollar
2nd: 1708 Dollar
Sum: 7488 Dollar

Please confirm.

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I paid it separately in 2 payments.

1st: 5780 Dollar
2nd: 1708 Dollar
Total: 7488 Dollar

Please confirm.

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The bag for guitar A that was delivered today was a 3 piece and not a 2 piece (The two piece is for guitar B). This guitar normally comes with a 2 piece specification so there was a need to specify 3 piece in the additional option if I want to make it a 3 piece since I thought it will be defaulted to a 2 piece if there are no options. So does the maker decide if it's a 2 piece or a 3 piece? If I want to make it to a 2 piece then is there a need to clearly specify the option to 2 piece?

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The bag for guitar A that was delivered today was a 3 piece and not a 2 piece (The two piece is for guitar B). This guitar normally comes with a 2 piece specification so there was a need to specify that it is a 3 piece in the additional option if I want to make it a 3 piece, since I thought it will be defaulted to a 2 piece if there are no options. So does the maker decide if it's a 2 piece or a 3 piece? If I want to make it to a 2 piece then is there a need to clearly specify the option to 2 piece?