加藤由佳 (mirror1000) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I received the returned item today.
I'll refund 125.03 USD, excluded for 13 USD for shipping fee and another 13 USD for return shipping.
Unfortunately we couldn't make deal, but looking forward to dealing with you again.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
Thank you very much.

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I received the returned item today.
I will refund 125.03 USD, excluded for 13 USD for shipping fee and another 13 USD for return shipping.
Unfortunately we could not make a deal, but we are looking forward to dealing with you again.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Hello. As always thank you very much.
Thank you for attaching EA ''Day Trader'' and EA ''Special MM''.
However, it seems that there was a problem with the back test of EA ''Day Trader''.
We have done back tests on a variety of currency pairs for over 4 years, but it just refuses to trade.
The transaction always ends up as zero. Do you have any idea what the reason could be?
The License Key is set to ●● .
By the way, we didn't have any problems with EA ''Special MM'' and managed to back test it without any problems.

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Hello. As always thank you very much.
Thank you for attaching EA ''Day Trader'' and EA ''Special MM''.
However, it seems that there was a problem with the back test of EA ''Day Trader''.
We have done back tests on a variety of currency pairs for over 4 years, but it just refuses to trade.
The transaction always ends up as zero. Do you have any idea what the reason could be?
The License Key is set to ●● .
By the way, we did not have any problems with EA ''Special MM'' and managed to back test it without any problems.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped using AIR, so it will arrive before July 13.

It will arrive on July 10 at latest.

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Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped using AIR, so it is estimated to be delivered before July 13.

It will be delivered on July 10 at latest.

元の翻訳
★Name
RINO SHIMAZAKI
★Height
157.5cm
★Date of Birth
1996/5/15
★Place of birth
KANAGAWA province
★Nick name
Rinono
★Blood type
O
★Hobby
Watching movie
★Specialty
Recitation, being considerate
★Favorite artist/talent
Perfume

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★Name
RINO SHIMAZAKI
★Height
157.5cm
★Date of Birth
1996/5/15
★Place of Birth
KANAGAWA Prefecture
★Nickname
Rinono
★Blood type
O
★Hobby
Watching movies
★Specialty
Recitation, mindreading
★Favorite Artist/TV Star
Perfume

元の翻訳
★Spelling
Suzuki Mariya
★Height
158cm
★Birthday
1999/9/26
★Origin
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood Type
O
★Hobby
KARAOKE、Exercise
★Specialty
Donald Duck voice imitation
★Favorite talent
Hamasaki Ayumi
★Favorite artist, talent
Michael Jackson, AAA

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★Name
Suzuki Mariya
★Height
158cm
★Birthday
September 26, 1998
★Birth
Tokyo
★Nickname
Marya
★Blood Type
O
★Hobby
KARAOKE、Sports
★Specialty
Donald Duck's voice imitation
★Favorite TV Star
Hamasaki Ayumi
★Favorite artist, TV star
Michael Jackson, AAA

元の翻訳
お元気でお過ごしのことと思います。
あなたの剃刀に付属する箱に施したものをお見せしようと思います。これはとても強力な旅行用保護ケースに仕上がりました。箱は非常によくてきています。私は何層かの桐の油でこの箱をコーティングしました。これで防水/ 防汚に仕上がりました。剃刀を置く「クレードル」 (置き台) は鹿革に赤い杉のラインが施してあります。このような美しい職人技には、刃がどんなことがあっても傷つかず保存できるよう、とても保護性能の高いもの (箱) が必要だと思いました。ところで、剃刀はとてもよくそれます。ずっと大事にします。すばらしい価格で譲ってくださりありがとうございます。

剃刀職人もこの箱を見たいのではないでしょうか。また、剃刀をこうやって保持したいのではないでしょうか。お客さんも気に入ると思います。

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お元気でお過ごしのことと思います。
あなたの剃刀に付属する箱に施したものをお見せしようと思います。これはとても強力な旅行用保護ケースに仕上がりました。箱は非常によくてできています。私は何層かの桐の油でこの箱をコーティングしました。これで防水/ 防汚に仕上がりました。剃刀を置く「クレードル」 (置き台) は鹿革に赤い杉のラインが施してあります。このような美しい職人技には、刃がどんなことがあっても傷つかず保存できるよう、とても保護性能の高いもの (箱) が必要だと思いました。ところで、剃刀はとてもよくそれます。ずっと大事にします。すばらしい価格で譲ってくださりありがとうございます。

剃刀職人もこの箱を見たいのではないでしょうか。また、剃刀をこうやって保持したいのではないでしょうか。お客様も気に入ると思います。

元の翻訳
In particular, □□□ is very popular.

If it is of your interest, would you please send us necessary information regarding your wholesale prices and terms of condition along with the sales agency contract?

As for our major sales distribution channel, we have a wide variety ranging from the wholesales to the individual retail stores across the country to EC sites such as Rakuten, Amazon and the like.
Also, by making the most of our strengths in international trading, you could possibly expand your sales opportunities mainly in Europ and Asia.

We promise to contribute to your company's profits.

List of manufacturers we deal with:

How to apply for the sales agency contract

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In particular, □□□ is very popular.

If it is of your interest, would you please send us necessary information regarding your wholesale prices and terms of condition along with the sales agency contract?

As for our major sales distribution channel, we have a wide variety ranging from the wholesales to the individual retail stores across the country to EC sites such as Rakuten, Amazon and the like.
Also, by making the most of our strengths in international trading, you could possibly expand your sales opportunities mainly in Europe and Asia.

We promise to contribute to your company's profits.

List of manufacturers we deal with:

How to apply for the sales agency contract

元の翻訳
Sorry for my belated replly.
I, too love footbal. Japan seems like loosing the group league matches at the World Cup, but I will continue cheering them up till the end.
Anways, I am going to send you the invoice for two items through PayPal shortly.
I was wondering if you are going to purchase the below items of your interest?
Please let me know, then I could issue you the invoice for additional $○○.

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Sorry for my belated reply.
I, too love footbaｌl. Japan seems like loosing the group league matches at the World Cup, but I will continue cheering them up till the end.
Anyways, I am going to send you the invoice for two items through PayPal shortly.
I was wondering if you are going to purchase the below items of your interest?
Please let me know, then I could issue you the invoice for additional $○○.

元の翻訳
When would this package be reflected on my account?
I would like to proceed with the shipping request COB today.

What a nice surprise to know you are Jon's sister and the same age as me since he has never told me about you before.
Thank you for showing me the pilot model for A. I think it's a wonderful product.
In addition too my previous order with 2 sets, I would like to place an order with 4 sets this time.

The last 2 sets were delivered to the third party company I entrust. However since the package had a wrong shipping address with a wrong name of recipent, it was routed and kept in another warehouse. Please be sure to have the sender to ship with the correct information.

Does B come with an aluminum case?

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When will this package be reflected on my account?
I would like to proceed with the shipping request COB today.

What a nice surprise to know you are Jon's sister and the same age as me since he has never told me about you before.
Thank you for showing me the pilot model for A. I think it's a wonderful product.
In addition to my previous order with 2 sets, I would like to place an order with another 4 sets this time.

The last 2 sets were delivered to the third party company I entrust. However since the package had a wrong shipping address with a wrong name of recipient, it was routed and kept in another warehouse. Please be sure to have the sender to ship with the correct information.

Does B come with an aluminum case?

元の翻訳
When will this package be reflected upon my account?
I would like to make a shipping order today.

You are the sister of Jon and Jon is as old as me make me surprised. I have not heard before.

I had a look at your prototype of A: It was wonderful.
I have made an advanced order of two sets but I wouold like to make an additional oder of four sets.

The goods have reached the company that I entrusted but the address and the name are worng and thus they have been kept in other warehouse.
Please talk to the shipping person.

Is an aluminum case attached to B?

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When will this package be reflected upon my account?
I would like to make a shipping order today.

I'm surprised to know you are Jon's sister, and Jon is as old as I. I have not heard of it before.

I had a look at your prototype of A: It was wonderful.
I have made an advanced order of two sets before, but I would like to make an additional oder of four sets.

The goods have reached the company that I entrusted but the address and the name are wrong and thus they have been kept in a wrong warehouse.
Please talk to the shipping person.

Is an aluminum case attached to B?

元の翻訳
"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade is going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
Tuesday 17th June, 2014
Special Stage at SHIBUYA TSUTAYA B1 Floor

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"Together" Release "Thanksgiving Event" at Kanto area

Very much thanks for your support and encouragement!
Members of Cheeky Parade are going to visit the following record shops to convey our appreciation to you directly!

Event Details
Group Handshake event at each shops

Place/Participant/Appointed time
Tuesday 17th June, 2014
Special Stage at SHIBUYA TSUTAYA B1 Floor