Michał (mikethenun) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I am very interested in this product.
I would be grateful if you could send me a few pictures of it.

Best regards.

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I am very interested in this product.
I would be grateful if you could send me a few pictures of it so I can get a better feel for the product.

Best regards.

元の翻訳
In case you haven't read the previous mail, from now on I will be using this e-mail address.
Please, respond to this address next time .
My PayPal account hasn't changed.
I would like to keep cooperating with you.

This is a re-sent message.

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In case you haven't read the previous mail, from now on I will be using this e-mail address.
Kindly direct all future correspondences to this email from now on.
My PayPal account hasn't changed.
Looking forward to our future dealings.

This is a re-sent message.

元の翻訳
Have you still got the "Tour Issue R11s V2 10.5 Head"? I would like to order 10 of them.
In 1 or 2 weeks I would also like an additional order on "V3 Head". Would it be possible?
I tried to get them some time ago, but it seems like there are many requests for them in Japan.
I would be thankful if you informed me if you had any heads from "Tour Van". If the desired products were available in Japan, maybe I would order more than 10 of them.

Understood. Please inform me also about the shipping time.

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Would it be possible for you to stock up on "Tour Issue R11s V2 10.5 Head"? If so, I would like to order 10 of them.
In one or two weeks I would also like to place an order for "V3 Head". Would it be possible?
As I mentioned, there is a high demand for your products in Japan.
I would be thankful if you would check with me next time you place an order for any Head from "Tour Van" to see if I am interested in making additional purchase. If the product in question is something I know has a high demand in Japan, I would be happy to place an order of ten or more.

Understood. Please be sure to check with me when ordering.