Moe Shimana (m117) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
中国のiOSデバイスの数々は同じAndroidのデバイスを今後も超えられないと思われているが、 China Mobileによる iPhone 5Cなどよりも安い 4G対応のiPhoneの導入によってiOSデバイスの販売は急激に伸びるであろう。中国のiOSデバイスの12%を占めるiPhone 5Sの販売実績は、中国での以前のモデルよりもかなり良いと思われる。

修正後
中国のiOSデバイスの数はAndroidのデバイスの数を今後も超えられないと思われているが、 China Mobileによる 4G対応のiPhoneの導入や低価格のiPhone 5CなどによってiOSデバイスの販売は急激に伸びるであろう。中国の現在のiOSデバイスの12%を占めるiPhone 5Sの販売実績は、中国での以前のモデルよりもかなり良いと思われる。

元の翻訳
ACC Attache case is the metal case maker which was established by Paul Burbidge, an British, in 1996 in the U.K.

It's superb items are carefully manifactured by British skilledcraftmen by their hands and with machines made in 1950s to 1960s one at a time. The products possess both unequaled overwhelming beauty and practical functionality.

Their products are mostly sold responding to the order-made offers from global racing teams, companies, professional photographers and so on. In Japan, they extend their business mainly providing the attache cases.

修正後
ACC Attache case is the metal case maker which was established by Paul Burbidge, an British, in 1996 in the U.K.

It's superb items are carefully manifactured by British skilledcraftmen by their hands and with machines made in 1950s to 1960s one by one. The products possess both unequaled overwhelming beauty and practical functionality.

Their products are mostly sold responding to the order-made offers from global racing teams, companies, professional photographers and so on. In Japan, they extend their business mainly providing the attache cases.

元の翻訳
Being printed double-side with different colour and patterns on each side, this wrapper look nice when you use it folding back.
You can use it freely as a wrapper to wrap something, a bandanna or a scarf!

修正後
Printed double-sided with different colors and patterns on each side, it looks great when you fold it back and forth.
You can use it freely in various ways such as wrapping it to use as a bathtub cover, or even a bandanna or a scarf!

元の翻訳
Being printed double-side with different colour and patterns on each side, this wrapper look nice when you use it folding back.
You can use it freely as a wrapper to wrap something, a bandanna or a scarf!

修正後
Double-sided prints with different colours and patterns on each side makes this wrapper look nice when you use it folding back.
You can use it freely as a furoshiki wrapper to wrap something, or a bandanna or a scarf!