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元の翻訳
I'm sorry for inconveniencing for you.

If possible, could you return the item to me?

As I have done it for this time, I'd like to help you out for another time.

I have substitute items.

I have already refunded to you.

I don't mind if you order unrelated items.

I'd prepare any Japanese items for you.

I hope that we'll have a further connecting.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for you causing a trouble for this time.

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I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

If possible, could you return the item to me?

As I have caused you inconvenience this time, I'd like to be of assistance to you in the future.

I have substitute items.

I have already given you a refund.

I don't mind if you order unrelated items.

I will arrange any Japanese items for you.

I am looking forward to working with you in future.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for causing you trouble this time.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for inconveniencing for you.

If possible, could you return the item to me?

As I have done it for this time, I'd like to help you out for another time.

I have substitute items.

I have already refunded to you.

I don't mind if you order unrelated items.

I'd prepare any Japanese items for you.

I hope that we'll have a further connecting.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for you causing a trouble for this time.

修正後
I'm sorry for your inconvenience.

If possible, can you return the item to me?

As I have troubled you this time, I'd like to assist you next time.

I have substitute items also.

I have already refunded to you.

I don't mind if you order other item.

I'd arrange any items from Japan.

I am looking forward to work with you.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for causing you trouble this time.

元の翻訳
It's been while. Thank you for efficient handling and prompt response as always.

Here is our order for this time.
A
B

And there was 2 damaged items in the last order, which were the neon tube of A and B. Please see attached photos.
As same as last order, could you send new parts to replace A and B with current order?

And as for C, I damaged it by mistake when I was trying to attach to the neon tube. So could you send new one as same as before?
I'm paying for the cost of the part C as I have damaged it by myself. Please send me the invoice.

I'm looking forward hearing from you.

修正後
It's been a while. Thank you for efficient handling and prompt response as always.

Here is our orders for this time.
A
B

And there were 2 damaged items in the last order, which were the neon tube of A and B. Please check the attached photos.
As same as last order, could you send new parts to replace A and B with current order?

And as for C, I damaged it by mistake when I was trying to attach to the neon tube. So could you send new one as same as before?
I'm paying for the cost of the part C as I have damaged it by myself. Please send me the invoice.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
When I was young, high-school or university students seemed to have more confident than younger people nowadays. They tended to prefer to keep away from things which most of people preferred to do. The young people tend to follow what other people are doing and they feel nervous if they don't wear things which other people are wearing.Of course anybody can be sensitive to the trend, but I think the trend shouldn't be the one people to follow, but the one people to try to catch up somehow.

修正後
When I was young, high-school or university students seemed to have more confidence than younger people nowadays. They tended to keep away from things which most of people preferred to do. Young people today on the other hand, tend to follow what others are doing and they would feel nervous if they do not wear things which others are wearing. Of course anybody can be sensitive to trends, but I think that trend shouldn't be the one people follow, but rather one that is led by people instead.

元の翻訳
We have almost no sales of A as there are rival companies which sell A on the lower price. Therefore the next order in not fixed.

If we order from you next time, it will be 50 each of size S and size M.

修正後
We have almost no sales of A as there are rival companies which sell A with the lower price. Therefore, the next order is undecided.

If we order in the next time, it will be 50 each of size S and size M.↵