Kyon (kyontan_69) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
[By email]
· No problem with the date and time and meeting place had you presented.
· Do you use some Chat Tool? If possible, I want to contact through LINE etc rather than email.
· I got sudden appointment. Is it possible to change the meeting from 15:00 to 16:00?
· Sorry for all the sudden but is it possible to have lesson tomorrow?

[During lesson]
• Was there any funny part grammatically in my speaking now? How would you say if you were me?
· What do you say in English for Japanese "Ringo"?

修正後
[By email]
· No problem with the date and time and meeting place you presented [word choice].
· Do you use some chat tool? If possible, I want to communicate through LINE etc. rather than email.
· I got [word choice] [article missing] sudden appointment. Is it possible to change the meeting from 15:00 to 16:00?
· Sorry for such short notice, but may I have a lesson tomorrow?

[During lesson]
• Was there any funny part grammatically in my speaking now [a bit too literal]? How would you say if you were me?
· How do you say "ringo" in English?

元の翻訳
Tech in AsiaはTencentと連絡を取り、新たな機能に関するコメントを得た。広報担当者は当面ベータ試験版のままにすると語った。しかし我々の購読登録者を調べてみると、WeChatチームはパブリッシング目的のためアカウント保持者ほとんどすべてのメトリックを実施しているようだ。

修正後
Tech in Asiaは新たな機能に関するコメントを求めてTencentと連絡を取ったが、広報担当者はその機能は当面ベータ試験版のままにすると語った。しかし我々の予約登録簿を調べてみると、WeChatチームは公開の目的のためアプリを使用しているアカウントに関してはほとんど全てに対して計量を実施しているようだ。

元の翻訳
Eastern part of Shizuoka Prefecture Convention Bureau, issued an unique venue PR guide booklet in English recently. In addition to the outline of the facility, it covered necessary information when events are held such as the types of the corresponding events, fees, occupancy, food & beverages and equipment. It will likely to be a powerful tool to appeal overseas MICE (Meeting, Incentive, Convention, Exhibition) planners.

In the guide booklet, it introduced six unique venues such as cycle sports center "Izu Velodrome",circuit "Fuji International Speedway" and Numazu Goyotei and 6 excursions plus Plaza Verde as a one-stop MICE facility.

修正後
Eastern part of Shizuoka Prefecture Convention Bureau, issued an unique venue PR guide booklet in English recently. In addition to the outline of the facility, it covered necessary information when events are held such as the types of the corresponding events, fees, occupancy, food & beverages and equipment. It is likely to be a powerful tool to appeal overseas MICE (Meeting, Incentive, Convention, Exhibition) planners.

In the guide booklet, it introduced six unique venues such as cycle sports center "Izu Velodrome",circuit "Fuji International Speedway" and Numazu Goyotei and 6 excursions plus Plaza Verde as a one-stop MICE facility.