Justin (jpenchtrans) — もらったレビュー

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1. I think there are some good points. As for the ratchet type, you may get sore feet after wearing for a long time. In this case, loosen the ratchet while running.

2. What a good photo! Is it taken by a professional? By the way, I want to try the beard, but I cannot have a beard like you with my thin body hair. It is a pity. Laugh

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1. I think both have some good points. As for the ratchet type, you may get pain in your feet after wearing it for a long time. In this case, you can loosen the ratchet by running.

2. What a good photo! Is it taken by a professional? By the way, I want to grow beards, but I cannot have a beard like yours with my thin body hair. What a pity. Laugh

元の翻訳
On July 3rd, the event production company Seresupo has founded "Sustainable Event Institute", a research institution conducting research and development in the field of sustainability realization.
Since the international standard of "Management System for the Sustainability of Events" had been issued and utilized in London Olympics in 2012, the consideration of sustainability around the international events has been strongly demanded.
For the ideas of the client, the event management in view of sustainability is proposed in the sustainable event Institute.

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On July 3rd, the event production company Seresupo will found the "Sustainable Event Institute", a research institution conducting research and development into sustainability realization in the field of events.
Since the international standard of "Management System for the Sustainability of Events" was issued and utilized at the 2012 London Olympics, the consideration of sustainability around the international events has been strongly demanded.
At the Sustainable Event Institute, event management you can experience, while looking at the client's ideas from the point of view of sustainability, will be proposed.

元の翻訳
From the second half of the project, it is a bit difficult to see his current situation about the development. The difference of language and time may also be the cause.
During his work time as a remote employee, I think he can report the progress of the simple project at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.

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From the second half of the project, it is a bit difficult to see his current situation about the development. The difference of language and time may also be the cause.
During his work time as a remote employee, I think he can report the progress of the simple project at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.
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I think he can report the progress of (the simple project ここおかしい。簡単な、は報告にかかるのでI think he can give me a simple report concerning the project progress とか) ↵
at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.↵
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元の翻訳
Dear AWK,
Thank you for your reply.

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I am Cosmo.

Since I cannot speak English, I use the translation service to send the message↵
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At this time,↵
I have read your work ^ ^↵
and felt that you have a view of the world that is very nice and delicate.

In fact at this time,↵
I was thinking about opening a blog
and looking for someone who could make the avatar.

Although I have seen a lot of works,
I felt that AWk's work precisely matched the image I had in mind.

If it is possible,↵
could you please make the avatar for me?
and the cornerstone for everything?↵
I will pay you.

I'm sorry for the surprise,↵
I will be glad if you can think about it,↵
Thank you!

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Dear AWK,
Thank you for your reply.

My name is Cosmo.

Since I cannot speak English, I am using the translation service to send this message.

I am thinking about writing a blog
and have been looking for someone who would create an avatar for me.

Among the various work I have viewed, Mr. AWK,
I felt that your work precisely matches the image I had in mind.

Would you consider creating an avatar for me?
Of course I will compensate you for your work.

I apologize for this unsolicited request. I hope you would consider it. Thank you!

元の翻訳
Why the visual design is preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want give a strong compact of the idea that "living in Sweden makes one want to know the richness of life".

At Dalarna of Sweden, the birthplace of this client, we filmed the people actually living there and presented the real north European lifestyle. It is not about the show of the functions of home and its inside and outside looks as a commercial product. In Japan, there must be some people who want to see the key vision of real north European lifestyle. We needed to arouse the interest of "users who are longing for north Europe.”

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Why those visuals?
Through our interview with our client, we have extracted the core messages that ought to be delivered. They wish to emphasize "the richness of life that is the base of the life in Sweden."

At Dalarna of Sweden, the place of origin of this client, we filmed the people actually living there and presented the true lifestyle of the Northern Europe. ↵
Instead of showcasing the functions of home and its interior and the exterior as a commercial product, we aimed at appealing to those who long for a life in Northern Europe that is known to exist in Japan by emphasizing its lifestyle as a key visual.

元の翻訳
Introduction of branding performance

Assignment:
In Japan, ● ● has the image of being "colorful", "popular" and "fashionable" . We believe it is very popular among women in the teens and early 20s, yet more mature women also want to use the products. The client has asked us to offer creative ideas to deliver more essential messages.
Why the visual design is preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want give a strong compact of "▲▲" once again.

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Introduction of branding performance

Assignment:
In Japan, ● ● has the image of being "colorful", "popular" and "fashionable" . We believe it is very popular among women in the teens and early 20s, yet more mature women also want to use the products. The client has asked us to offer creative ideas to deliver more essential messages.
Why is the visual design preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want to give a strong compact of "▲▲" once again.

元の翻訳
生日快樂！今年也很期待干邑和尚貴的成長!

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生日快樂！今年也很期待Conyac和尚貴的成長!

元の翻訳
之后，我们乘电车到了距离各自的家都很近的地方喝了一杯。我听她讲了自己的工作，以及在上海留学时候的事情。她讲的留学的事情很有趣，不禁让我也想去上海留学试试。我的酒量不错，但她比我更能喝酒，两个人都喝得酩酊大醉后才回家。

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吃过饭后，我们徒步走到电影院。因为是从公映开始已经过了一段时间的电影，所以馆内很空，我们找到了两个好位置。是塔伦蒂诺导演的电影，动作和音乐都非常棒。↵
之后，我们乘电车到了距离各自的家都很近的地方喝了一杯。我听她讲了自己的工作，以及在上海留学时候的事情。她讲的留学的事情很有趣，不禁让我也想去上海留学试试。我的酒量不错，但她比我更能喝酒，两个人都喝得酩酊大醉后才回家。

元の翻訳
上周的星期天傍晚，虽然约好了和最近相处得不错的朋友们一起看电影，但我后来还是和女朋友一起去看电影了。
我们先在新宿车站的东出口碰面，然后走向电影院。但是我们没赶上播放电影的时间，于是就先吃了饭。
因为女朋友说她想喝葡萄酒，所以就决定点意大利菜。虽然是第一次去的饭店，但那里的匹萨很好吃，店里的气氛也非常好。这是第一次约会，但让我不开心的是在那里吃饭有点贵了。

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上周的星期天傍晚，和最近相处得不错的朋友约好了一起去看电影，所以我和她一起去看电影了。
我们先在新宿车站的东出口碰面，然后走向电影院。但是电影的放映时间不太合适，所以就先去吃饭了。
因为女朋友说她想喝葡萄酒，所以就决定点意大利菜。虽然是第一次去的饭店，但那里的匹萨很好吃，店里的气氛也非常好。这是第一次约会，所以我请客，但稍微有点贵。

元の翻訳
In Japan, for the sake of family members sent away to the Second World War, the names and messages were written on the white background of Japan's national flag to pray the health of the family members. The soldiers cleaned and carried these flags with them.

The one exhibited this time is a banner with illustrations, which is very rare among those flags. Flags only with signatures make one feel depressed.

For the blood relatives in Japan, as the Japanese, being not possible to keep these important flags is really a pity.
We will wait for the bids from those who are willing to offer their important collections.

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In Japan, for the sake of family members sent away to the Second World War, the names and messages were written on the white background of Japan's national flag to pray for the health of the family members. The soldiers carried these flags with them to war.

The one exhibited this time is a banner with illustrations, which is very rare among those flags because they have more than signatures on the surface.

As a Japanese, I think it is pity that their relatives cannot keep them.
We will wait for the bids from those who are willing to offer their important collections.