Ismael Franco Alvarez (isuma) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Buenos días.
Hay una tarifa adicional.
En ese caso se debe pagar ese costo.↵
Después envíeme por favor la factura↵
Le haremos la devolución de todo el monto, por lo que no se preocupe.↵
Le deseamos mucha suerte.

修正後
Buenos días,↵

Hay veces en las que se necesita pagar las tasas de aduanas a parte.
En ese caso le ruego atender el pago. Una vez tenga justificante de este pago ( factura), envíemelo, por favor. No se preocupe, le devolveré el importe total pagado en este concepto. Mucha suerte!

元の翻訳
The exhibition of audio home theatre 2013 will be held from october 18th to 20th, during three days in the Tyme venue of Odaiba Tokio. Organized by Nipon Audio Company.

Besides the exhibition of machinery audio and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared sucha as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, in addition to a classroom work, combinating the component lstening association and music bird public recording among others,

修正後
The exhibition of Audio Home Theatre 2013 will be held for three days from October 18th to 20th by Nippon Audio Company in the Time 24 Building of Odaiba Tokyo.

Besides the exhibition of audio machinery and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared sucha as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, music studios, a free stereo audition of digital audio player combination and a public recording of the music bird.

元の翻訳
The exhibition of audio home theatre 2013 will be held from october 18th to 20th, during three days in the Tyme venue of Odaiba Tokio. Organized by Nipon Audio Company.

Besides the exhibition of machinery audio and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared sucha as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, in addition to a classroom work, combinating the component lstening association and music bird public recording among others,

修正後
The exhibition of audio home theatre 2013 will be held from october 18th to 20th, during three days in the Tyme venue of Odaiba Tokio. Organized by Nipon Audio Company.

Besides the exhibition of machinery audio and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared such as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, in addition to a classroom work, combinating the component listening association and music bird public recording among others,

元の翻訳
Thank you for gettig in touch.
It is to small the refund of only 5 dollars .
With the purchase of 6 dollars includying the shipping it will be10 dollars.
also, the description of the item was not clear.
that color in the top of the plate was something that it could not remove by cleaning it.
at first glance has a good impression.
That is why, summirizing all of that I want a 30 dollars refund.

修正後
Thank you for getting in touch.
It is too small the refund of only 5 dollars .
With the purchase of 6 dollars including the shipping it will be 10 dollars.
also, the description of the item was not clear.
that color in the top of the plate was something that it could not be removed by cleaning it.
at first glance has a good impression.
That is why, summarizing all of that I want a 30 dollars refund.

元の翻訳
My age is 40's front already, but my appearence and feelings are like a young man. (It has been many times that people tell me shocked when I meet them "Are you really an engineer?"). I think my co-ordination and communication skills are extremely high. (The type of disseminate ideas and opinions).

I do not have experience yet, but I can handle formal presentations and interact without problems.

修正後
I am almost 40 years old, but I look young and feel young at heart. (People whom I meet often say "Are you really an engineer?" in surprise). I think I work well with the others and my communication skills are excellent. (I am outspoken about my ideas and opinions).

I do not have experience yet, but I can handle formal presentations and interact without problems.