＠Trans (ilad) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
We want to confirm the situation of the product with you.
Is only the lid broken while the body of the teapot remaining intact?
We want to save postage because of little benefit we have in this transaction; therfore, we need your opinion about delivering a new lid to you while receiving your e-mail asking for a new set.
We wait for your reply.
Thank you for your understanding.

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We want to confirm the situation of the product with you.
We sent you an email, in which we said we would send you a new teapot, but↵
Is only the lid broken while the body of the teapot remaining intact?
We want to save postage because of little benefit we have in this transaction; therfore, we need your opinion about delivering a new lid to you while receiving your e-mail asking for a new set.
We wait for your reply.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
11/5（wed） iTunes Store release in advance!

• Sound source
• Ring tone
• Music video

and so on.

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11/5（wed） iTunes Store will release in advance!

• Sound source
• Ring tone
• Music video

and so on.

元の翻訳
1. May I cancel 2014-3320 once.
Plese accept the order placed this time as formal order.
2. Naoya Azima is the final customer of us.
I am sorry to trouble you, but, thank you.

We are in a hurry. So,please dispatch as soon as possible and inform the tracking number after shipping.

Very truly yours,

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1. May I cancel 2014-3320 once.
Please accept the order placed this time as formal order.
2. Naoya Azima is the final customer of us.
I am sorry to trouble you, but, thank you.

We are in a hurry. So,please dispatch as soon as possible and inform me of the tracking number after shipping.

Very truly yours,

元の翻訳
We apologize to have sent a wrong item.
You sent a picture of the broken lid, but I misunderstood it as a cup.
To solve this problem, we are going to send a new tea pot.
We will prepare it as soon as possible, but it takes 4 days until we send it.
We will send it by EMS. Are you all right about it?
We are very sorry that we gave an inconvenience to you.
We apologize to you from the bottom of the heart.

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We apologize to have sent a wrong item.
You sent a picture of the broken lid, but I misunderstood it as a cup.
To solve this problem, we are going to send a new tea pot.
We will prepare it as soon as possible, but it takes 4 days until we send it.
We will send it by EMS. Are you all right about it?
We apologize for the inconvenience we have caused you.
We apologize to you from the bottom of the heart.

元の翻訳
Sorry, I am living in Japan and I can't speak English. I will give you the card details by email.

Credit card number:

Thank you,

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Sorry. Since I am living in Japan and I can't speak English, I will give you the card details by email.

Credit card number:

Thank you,

元の翻訳
I'm really sorry, but I'm not good at speaking English because I'm Japanese. So, I send my card information by e-mail.

Credit card number :

Thank you

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I'm really sorry, but I'm not able to speak English because I'm living in Japanese. So, I send my card information by e-mail.

Credit card number :

Thank you

元の翻訳
As there are only a couple times in a year that the products exported from Japan to the United States are not delivered on time, it is unfortunate this time.

The inspection of the delivery may need to take 1-2 weeks.

As you seem to be in an urgent need of the product, we can deliver another product with the same condition to you.

We accept the return of the product which is not delivered to you on time.

As we use invoice of eBay to deliver the product, we will deliver the product as soon as we have confirmed your payment.

As the product that you have purchased this time is in stock, it is sold with an exceptionally low price.
We think it was a good purchase.

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As there are only a couple times in a year that the products being exported from Japan to the United States are not delivered on time, it is unfortunate this time.

The inspection of the delivery may need to take 1-2 weeks.

As you seem to be in an urgent need of the product, we can deliver another product with the same condition to you.

We accept the return of the product which is not delivered to you on time.

As we send an invoice by eBay to you, we will deliver the product as soon as we have confirmed your payment.

As the product that you have purchased this time is in stock, it was sold with an exceptionally low price.
We think it was a good purchase.

元の翻訳
As I haven't ride on yakatabune (houseboats) before, I really looked forward to my first experience of it!

It only took 5 minutes walk from train station to point of embarkation.
When I got on the yakatabune, A passionate and spirited woman, who was wearing a headband came to greeting us on board in Japanese and English!

We had beer and the cuisines smack our lips with relish. The continuous supply of tempura were just like they were freshly-fried on yakatabune!

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As I haven't ride on yakatabune (houseboats) before, I really looked forward to my first experience of it!

It only took a 5 minute - walk from the train station to the point of embarkation.
When I got on the yakatabune, A passionate and spirited women, who was wearing a headband came to greeting us on board in Japanese and English!

We had beer and the cuisines smack our lips with relish. The continuous supply of tempura were just like they were freshly-fried on yakatabune!

元の翻訳
I had not tried a covering tourist ship before,so I tried it with great expectation!

I walked from train station to the dock within 5 minutes safely.
When I boarded the ship,young ladies with headcloth showing fight came to welcome me.I was really moved when they were greeting to me with warming Japanese and English!

Soon I got my beer and had a great meal.It seemed that tempura was cooked all the time so I can eat that all along.

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I had not tried a covering tourist boat before,so I tried it with great expectation!

I walked from train station to the dock within 5 minutes safely.
When I boarded the ship,young ladies with headcloth showing fight came to welcome me.I was really moved when they were greeting to me with warming Japanese and English!

Soon I got my beer and had a great meal.It seemed that tempura was cooked all the time so I can eat that all along.

元の翻訳
I was with a baby and the staffs encountered in the street showed a lot of consideration for the children which made me feel happy.They guided me with great patience so that I could take the ride comfortably!!The Ebisuya left me a favorable impression!

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I was with a baby and the staff we met in the street showed a lot of consideration for the children, which made me feel happy.They guided me with great patience so that I could take the ride comfortably!! The Ebisuya left me a favorable impression!

元の翻訳
Though the sun was strong, while feeling the pleasant refreshing wind, wonderful moments rocking by jinrikisha (human-powered cart), it was four hours felt like a blink. Impressed by your sparkling sweat!! Thank you. We are grateful for your enthusiastic guide.

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Though the sunshine was strong, while feeling the pleasant refreshing wind, wonderful moments being rocked by jinrikisha (human-powered cart), it was four hours felt like a blink. Impressed by your sparkling sweat!! Thank you. We are grateful for your enthusiastic guide.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the delay in my response.
It seems box was be opened.
Do you want a full amount refund?
There is also provide $100 refund.
If you want it, i can refund $100 now.
And full amout refund must wait the product be arrived.
Please let me know your thoughts.

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I'm sorry for the delay in my response.
It seems the box had been opened.
Do you want a full amount refund?
I'm ready to refund you $100 refund.
If you want it, i can refund $100 immediately.
A full refund will be made after the arrival of the product.
Please let me know your thoughts.

元の翻訳
Next, I would like to discuss about defects.
I reported defective items by uploading them on YouTube,
After that, the volume of sale has increased and many defective items were found.
I have sold those products sent from you company to my customers as they were until this August.
However, we are checking all the products since August.
In addition, we are working to deal with the issue so that we can sell by replacing defective products found at checking process to normal products.

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Next, I would like to discuss about defects.
I reported defective items by uploading them on YouTube,
After that, the volume of sale has increased and many defective items were found.
I have sold those products sent from you company to my customers as they were until the August of this year.
However, we are checking all the products since August.
In addition, we are working to deal with the issue so that we can sell by replacing defective products found at checking process to normal products.

元の翻訳
Next, we want to ask about the defective item.
I uploaded the video of the defective item on YOUTUBE before.
After that, the sales rose and more defective items were found.
We have sold the products you sent to me in unchanged condition until this Aug.
But since Aug, we inspect all of them.
In addition, when we find the defective items, we are doing trouble-shooting operation to sell them as good items.

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Next, we want to ask about the defective items.
I uploaded the video of the defective item on YOUTUBE before.
After that, the sales rose and more defective items were found.
We had sold the products you sent to me without reparing until Aug of this year.
But since Aug, we inspect all of them.
In addition, when we find the defective items, we are doing trouble-shooting operation to sell them as good items.

元の翻訳
My foreign friend came to Japan. Although I couldn't come up with a good place at first, because it was cheaper than the standard price, so I decided on here. The result was superb!
My foreign friend enjoyed a lot and took tons of pictures.
While the additional order of bear didn't reach everybody( because of the lack of time and staff on hand), during the program, it might have been better to buy 2 bottles of bear before the program began.
But all in all it was wonderful!

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My foreign friend came to Japan. Although I couldn't come up with a good place at first, because it was cheaper than the standard price, so I decided on this place. The result was superb!
My foreign friend enjoyed a lot and took tons of pictures.
While the additional order of bear didn't reach everybody( because of the lack of time and staff on hand), during the program, it might have been better to buy 2 bottles of bear before the program began.
But all in all it was wonderful!

元の翻訳
I was moved by the very beautiful view. It's also close enough from Sapporo, so you can get there easily. You had better to go there on the first day you arrived at Sapporo.

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I was moved by the very beautiful view. It's also close enough from Sapporo, so you can get there easily. You had better go there on the first day you arrived at Sapporo.

元の翻訳
There are 2 files "141010_Sabroso_EN_subtitles_v2.txt" and "141010_Sabroso_EN_subtitles_DE_ES_FR_JP.txt", the source number on the file is only a little different, is the content identical?
Do these files need to be translated?
Are all the source texts comments from artists?
As I can not view the video, what king of expression would you like on the end
I ask for your assistance please.

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There are 2 files "141010_Sabroso_EN_subtitles_v2.txt" and "141010_Sabroso_EN_subtitles_DE_ES_FR_JP.txt", the source number on the file is only a little different, is the content identical?
Do these files need to be translated?
Are all the source texts comments from artists?
As I can not view the video, what kind of expression would you like on the end
I ask for your assistance please.