chie mitsunaga (hummingchie) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I have checked the e-mail. I will attach the file to a reply soon. The second subject is that I placed a new order by e-mail (14 cameras). Please issue the code and password. I would be grateful if you can check for it because the e-mail was distinguished as spam the last time.

修正後
I have confirmed the e-mail. I will attach the file to my reply soon. On a different note I placed a new order by e-mail (14 cameras). Please issue the code and password. I would be grateful if you can check for it because the e-mail was classified as spam the last time.

元の翻訳
marcusさん
いいえ、どちらのコードなのかを知りたいんです。StiffとX-Flexのどちらですか？

TP-7xの"x"は名称の一部であって、flexではないです。高飛行のTP-7と低飛行のTP-7xがあり、TP-7xはコードが多いです。

そういう訳で、あなたが欲しいのはSとXのどちらのコードなのでしょうか？

また、こちらにはF7M2 LTD製のシャフトの在庫がありません。赤色でしたら在庫があるかもしれないので調べてみますが、ゴールドについては在庫切れです。

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marcusさん
いいえ、S、或いはXのどちらのフレックスをご希望ですか？

TP-7xの"x"は名称の一部であって、フレックスではないです。高い打球の打てるのTP-7と低い打球の打てるTP-7xがありまる。TP-7xはフレックスの種類が多いですが。

そういう訳で、お客様はSとXのどちらのフレックスをご希望ですか？

また、こちらにはF7M2 LTDのシャフトの在庫がありません。赤色でしたら在庫があるかもしれないので調べてみますが、ゴールドについては在庫切れです。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your continued support. This is Yamada from Japan.
I carefully searched for (the item No. *) but unfortunately could not find.
It would be grateful if you send it again by the next mail.
In these past months I have found insufficient quantity of item and wrong item numbers several times.
I always have a feeling that our business relationship is "up to your kindness."
I hope our good relationship will last as long as possible.

Please let me know the order status regarding the order No. *. I am sorry for the trouble.
When will the shipment be done?
I look forward to hearing from you.

修正後
Thank you for your continued support. This is Yamada from Japan.
I thoroughly searched for it but unfortunately could not find it (item no. 〇〇) .
Therefore I would be grateful if you could send it with the next delivery.
In these past months I have found insufficient item quantities and wrong item numbers several times.
I hold our business relationship in very high regard.
I would like to go on building on our good relationship for a long time into the future.

In regards to item no. 〇〇↵
Please let me know about the order status. I am sorry for the trouble.
When will the shipment be done?
I look forward to hearing from you.