horikawam — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Parts and manuals are all set.
Part of the box is shaved off (reference is attached)
No significant damage on the figure, but partial plating shaved off and scratch are observed so please bid with your understanding.

Scissor which has used at the barber shop in Japan.
Length is about 18.5cm to 19.5cm.

Formal use Kimono with ornamental hairpin 10 pieces set
Wonderful ornamental hairpin with the complicated design
There are some damages due to aging so please bid with your understanding.

"Kokufu" is the highest level Bonsai exhibition held in Japan since 1934.
This is the rare document about its exhibition
This is must for Bonsai lovers.

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Parts and manuals are all set.
A part of the box is shaved off (reference is attached)
No significant damages on the figure, but partial plating shaved off and scratches are observed so please bid with your understanding.

Scissors which have been used at the barber shop in Japan.
Length is about 18.5cm to 19.5cm.

Formal use Kimono with ornamental hairpin 10 pieces set
Wonderful ornamental hairpin with the complicated design
There are some damages due to aging so please bid with your understanding.

"Kokufu" is the highest level Bonsai exhibition held in Japan since 1934.
This is the rare document about its exhibition
This is must for Bonsai lovers.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for answering me.
I just informed the tracking umber now, but
actual shipping was before getting the contact from you;
therefore, actual shipping and the update on the ebay had some time lag.
If you could have let me know a little earlier,
I could have stopped the shipping but
I apologize for your inconvenience this time.
Please understand this situation.

We cannot answer your request this time.

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Thank you very much for answering me.
I just informed the tracking number now, but
actual shipping was before getting the contact from you;
therefore, actual shipping and the update on the ebay had some time lag.
If you could have let me know a little earlier,
I could have stopped the shipping but
I apologize for your inconvenience this time.
Please understand this situation.

We cannot answer your request this time.

元の翻訳
I would like to make 50pcs of your company's product so could you please send us the quote which includes printing to this product (Mae Bells) and shipping to Japan.

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I would like to make 50pcs of your company's product, so could you please send us the quote which includes printing to this product (Mae Bells) and shipping to Japan.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for this but
The product you bought this time
has been shipped already with the tracking information.
I apologize for your inconvenience.
Thank you very much in advance.

Hello.
The product you bought this time has been shipped with the tracking information.
Shipping fee is $3 more expensive than shipping with SAL separately but
this is my favor for you since you ordered two products.
I feel good since you can get both products at the same time, too.
Please wait for a while until the arrival of the products.
Thank you very much for using our shop this time.

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Hello.
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for this but
the product you bought this time
has been shipped already with the tracking information.
I apologize for your inconvenience.
Thank you very much in advance.

Hello.
The product you bought this time has been shipped with the tracking information.
Shipping fee is $3 more expensive than shipping with SAL separately but
this is my favor for you since you ordered two products.
I feel good since you can get both products at the same time, too.
Please wait for a while until the arrival of the products.
Thank you very much for using our shop this time.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting us.

「*****」

Interpreting above English sentence was difficult for us so we could not really understand what you meant.
I am sending the picture of the measurement so hopefully the measurement you were asking about is in the picture....

Please let us know about it.

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Thank you very much for contacting us.

「*****」

To understand the English sentence above was difficult for us so we could not really understand where you meant.
I am sending the picture of the measurement so hopefully the measurement you were asking about is in the picture....

Please let us know about it.

元の翻訳
After our consideration, the chemical you introduced to us has A, which is specified as the poison by B law, so we cannot use it for the surface of the piping from the safety and environment standpoint.
Moreover, when we investigate with the measurement instrument C, by measuring D electrical potential, it measures the existence of Film indirectly so it is not measuring E electrical potential which predicts the starting of the corrosion and there is not correlation between electrical potential D and electrical potential E so it is not proper to use this measurement equipment for the criteria that predicts the starting of the corrosion.

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After our consideration, the chemical you introduced to us has A, which is specified as the poison by B law, so we cannot use it for the surface of the piping from the safety and environment standpoint.
Moreover, when we examined the measurement instrument C, by measuring D electrical potential, it measures the existence of Film indirectly so it is not measuring E electrical potential which predicts the starting of the corrosion and there is not correlation between electrical potential D and electrical potential E, so it is not proper to use this measurement equipment for the criteria that predicts the starting of the corrosion.

元の翻訳
I completely agree with you.
What is your idea, Mr. XX?
There are so many people around me who like the old logo.
Is it possible to take this offer that you create the old logo for Japan version in the future?

When I think about the WW's direction in the Japanese market, I would like to make it come true even though this offer might be tough. Because if they can handle our product, it would easier to promote WW in Japan so please consider about this offer.

We have already decided to have the exhibition at the DESIGN TOKYO, which is held in July in Tokyo and is one of the biggest exhibition in Japan.

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I completely agree with you.
What is your idea, Mr. XX?
There are so many people around me who like the old logo.
Is it possible to take this offer that you create the old logo for Japan version in the future?

When I think about the WW's direction in the Japanese market, I would like to make it comes true even though this offer might be tough. Because if they can handle our product, it would easier to promote WW in Japan so please consider about this offer.

We have already decided to have the exhibition at the DESIGN TOKYO, which is held in July in Tokyo and is one of the biggest exhibition in Japan.

元の翻訳
I have big news.
In fact, I had the sales conversation with 00 today and they said that they can sell our product as long as we can clear the certain condition.
00 is the top of the select shop in US and very famous store so I think Mr. XX knows it.
I am very surprised but as the condition, they like old type logo design and they would like us to add 00 logo at the top left. Plus, they want to change the aluminum black version into clip and screw. That is it. Do you think it is possible?
For the name insertion of 00, is WW logo printed? or is it shaved?

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I have big news.
That is, I had the sales conversation with 00 today and they said that they can sell our product if we can satisfy the certain condition.
00 is the top of the select shop in US and a very famous store, so I think Mr. XX knows it.
I am very surprised but as the condition, they the like old type logo design and they would like us to add the 00 logo at the top on the left. Plus, they want to change a clip and a screw of the aluminum black version into black. That is it. Do you think it is possible?
For the name insertion of 00, is WW logo printed? or is it shaved?

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は0-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

もし、あなたが下に敷いて袢纏を広げたら、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうなるのか知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

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こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は80-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

もし、あなたが下に敷いて袢纏を広げたら（畳まずに）、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうなるのか知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は0-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

もし、あなたが下に敷いて袢纏を広げたら、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうなるのか知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

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こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は80-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

袢纏の裾をを広げた場合、つまり折りたたんでいない状態では、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうかを知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は0-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

もし、あなたが下に敷いて袢纏を広げたら、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうなるのか知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

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こんにちは。

私はあなたのサイズM/Lのジャケットを購入したいと思っています。胸囲は80-104cm (31.5-41in.)、長さは82cm (32.25in)です。もう既に持っているジャケットと交換しようと思っています。

もし、あなたが下に敷いて袢纏を広げたら、幅はどれくらいですか？私は自分の持っているものと比較したらどうなるのか知りたいのです。

ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
このレビューの間、カスタマーのフィードバックと、最初から最後までに受け取ったクレームを含んだ、あなたのアカウントのパフォーマンスを評価します。私たちは、あなたから注文した購入者のフィードバックを同様に評価に使いますので、あなたのリスティングが取り除かれる前に、あなたが受け取った注文の全てを満たし続けることは重要です。
1. Amazon.comオーダー番号を伴って発送したトラッキングナンバー
2. 売買をしたページへのリンクを含むリテールもしくはオンラインセールのチャンネル
3. あなたの在庫情報を含む、あなたのビジネスの詳細説明
4. あなたがAmazon.comにて売ることを計画する在庫量と発送アイテムの状況

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このレビューの間、カスタマーのフィードバックと、A-to-z 保証クレームを含んだ、あなたのアカウントのパフォーマンスを評価します。当社は、レビューの一環としてあなたから注文した購入者のフィードバックを同様に評価に使いますので、あなたのリスティングが取り除かれる前に、あなたが受け取った注文の全てを満たし続けることは重要です。
1. Amazon.com注文番号を伴って発送した商品のトラッキングナンバー（追跡番号）
2. 販売ページへのリンクを含む現在のリテールもしくはオンライン販売のチャンネル
3. あなたの在庫情報を含む、あなたのビジネスの詳細説明
4. あなたがAmazon.comにて販売を計画している在庫量と発送商品の状況

元の翻訳
It seems that the shipment is not moved.
The delay of updating the tracking system is observed quite often with ISC LOS ANGELES CA (USPS) and the movement of the shipment on the USPS website sometimes looks slower than the actual shipment.
But, it is true that this shipment is a little slower than the actual shipping speed so could you please contact to USPS?

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It seems that the shipment is not moved.
The delay of updating the tracking system is observed quite often with ISC LOS ANGELES CA (USPS) and the movement of the shipment on the USPS website sometimes looks slower than the actual shipment.
But, it is true that this shipment is a little slower than the actual shipping speed so could you please contact USPS?

元の翻訳
Applicants must allow us to give all the rights for the usage.
9. You are not allowed to post to the other website except Niconico douga. If its existence was observed in the other website, the applicant will be disqualified.
10. If there is any violation of the rule, we will delete the file without notification and we will disqualify you.

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Applicants must allow us to give all the rights for the usage.
9. You are not allowed to post to the other websites except Niconico douga. If its existence was observed in the other websites, the applicant will be disqualified.
10. If there is any violation of the rule, we will delete the file without notification and we will disqualify you.

元の翻訳
今日、通関費用の請求書を貰いました。明日は税金を支払います。商品が届きましたらお知らせさせて頂きたいと思います。また、Ebayの評価にもさせて頂きたいと思います。

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今日、通関費用の請求書を貰いました。明日は税金を支払います。商品が届きましたらお知らせさせて頂きたいと思います。また、Ebayで評価を投稿させて頂きたいと思います。

元の翻訳
今日、通関費用の請求書を貰いました。明日は税金を支払います。商品が届きましたらお知らせさせて頂きたいと思います。また、Ebayの評価にもさせて頂きたいと思います。

修正後
今日、通関費用の請求書を貰いました。明日は税金を支払います。商品が届きましたらお知らせさせて頂きたいと思います。また、Ebayの評価もさせて頂きたいと思います。

元の翻訳
It was good.
An Elderly couple participated in a local tour. We were the the only two Japanese people in an english tour but there weren't any inconveniences. The tour included a tour of Pisa but we wanted to take our time for sightseeing at the leaning tower, so we refused a tour guide and did a different activity. Thanks to this we were able to slowly sight see.

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It was good.
We, an elderly couple, participated in a local tour. We were the only Japanese in an English tour, but there weren't any inconveniences. The tour included a tour of Pisa but we wanted to take our time for sightseeing at the leaning tower, so we informed the tour guide of our plan and did a different activity. Thanks to this we were able to slowly sightsee.

元の翻訳
We went the easy way.
It is possible to purchase train tickets and leaning tower admittance reservations online, but we heard that the schedule is disorganized. Upon arriving at Pisa station we proceeded to lose our way, and end up not meeting the leaning tower admittance hours so we participated in this instead. The guide's English was easy to understand, was very nice, and was a driver. We were very tired after sight-seeing in Florence by foot and even though this cost more than the individual train tickets and the admittance fee for the leaning tower, we thought it was very good.

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We went the easy way.
It is possible to purchase train tickets and Leaning Tower admittance reservations online, but we heard that the train schedule in Italy is disorganized. Upon arriving at Pisa station we proceeded to lose our way, and ended up not meeting the Leaning Tower admittance hours so we participated in this instead. The guide's English was easy to understand, was very nice, and so was a driver. We were very tired after sight-seeing in Florence by foot and even though this cost more than the individual train tickets and the admittance fee for the Leaning Tower, we thought it was very good.

元の翻訳
あなたがもうちょっと安い価格を提出する事に賛成しましたのに何故このゴールを支払いますか。ここで良い価格で商品が多過ぎると私が思われていて私の注文で良いビジネスになりません。あなたはEbayで何個もショップを経営しているのでもし返金して貰えたら、あなたのネットショップに対して持っている意見は変わる事だ出来ます。

あなたはEbayにもメールを送る事が出来ますが、Ebayのコミュニティーの中で私はたくさんの友達を持っていますので戦闘になる可能性があります。

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あなたがもうちょっと安い価格を提供する事に賛成しましたのに何故このゴールを支払いますか。ここで良い価格の商品が多過ぎると思いますし、あなたの商品を買って良い買い物をした気がしません。あなたはEbayでいくつかのショップを経営しているようですが、もし返金して貰えたら、あなたのネットショップに対する意見を変えることが出来ます。

あなたはEbayにメールを送る事も出来ますが、Ebayのコミュニティーの中で私はたくさんの友達を持っていてますので苦戦になると思います。

元の翻訳
I apologize for causing trouble to Amazon.com as well as the customer. In Our order management process, The ordered product from Amazon.com was confirmed with the ASIN on the amazon.co.jp sales page. This mistake occurred from Amazon.com selling the product as a set of 12 vs. Amazon.co.jp selling this product as one. From next time extra care will be taken when confirming products with Amazon.com’s sales page. This product will be taken off of Amazon.com.

修正後
I apologize for causing trouble to Amazon.com as well as the customer. In our order management process, the ordered product from Amazon.com was confirmed with the ASIN on the amazon.co.jp sales page. This mistake occurred from Amazon.com selling the product as a set of 12 vs. Amazon.co.jp selling it individually. From next time extra care will be taken when we confirm products with Amazon.com’s sales page. We will take off this product from Amazon.com.