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I'm sorry it was my mistake, I was supposed to send a congratulations email on the day of your purchase however I was not able to send it.
Please forgive me for my late correspondence.
Now to formally express my gratitude, Thank you very much for your purchase of two items.
Now, since both of these items are handmade by a different craftsman, it will take some time before they are able to be shipped. (Handling time is 15 business days)
Please kindly wait until the items have been shipped.
We will be sure that they are packaged correctly when they are shipped.
We will also inform you of the tracking number.
Thank you for your business.

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I'm sorry it was my mistake, I was supposed to send a thank you email on the day of your purchase however I was not able to send it.
Please forgive me for my late correspondence.
Now to formally express my gratitude, Thank you very much for your purchase of two items.
Now, since both of these items are handmade by a different craftsman, it will take some time before they are able to be shipped. (Handling time is 15 business days)
Please kindly wait until the items will be shipped.
We will be sure that they are packaged correctly when they are shipped.
We will also inform you of the tracking number.
Thank you for your business.

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レンズに関していくつか質問があります。（＄２００ということ以外に。）

以下はどのような意味なのでしょうか。

- いくつかのヘリコイドは重いです。適切に機能しますが。
- チリの混入があります。

見たところ、通常手作業でも使用できるみたいです。
もう少し、情報がほしいのですが。

AEプリズムはこの67iiにおいて正しく機能するのでしょうか？

何かと組み合わせて発送はできますか？

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レンズに関していくつか質問があります。（＄２００ということ以外に。）

以下はどのような意味なのでしょうか。

- いくつかのヘリコイドは比較的重いです。適切に機能しますが。
- チリの混入があります。

見たところ、通常手作業でも使用できるみたいです。
もう少し、情報がほしいのですが。

AEプリズムはこの67iiにおいて正しく機能するのでしょうか？

何かと組み合わせて発送はできますか？

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I have a question for you. The kid itself before the paint is very strong color I think but is it possible to make B kit skin color more white? Please actually paint it and give me Judy's opinion. Then, I could like to order two black hair and black eye toddler next month, too. If possible, could I think again about the kit except B? After careful thinking, it might end up B again. No, no, if you cannot change B kit, then I would think another one more kit. Thank you very much always for helping me about my request kindly.

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I have a question for you. The kit itself before painted is very strong color, I think; but is it possible to make the kit B skin color more white? Please actually paint it and give me Judy's opinion. Then, I would like to order two black hair and black eye toddler next month, too. If possible, could I think again about the kits except B? After careful thinking, it might end up with B again. You say 'No, no, if you cannot change the kit B', then I would consider one more kit. Thank you very much always for helping me about my request kindly.

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Good Day.

I am thinking about buying DANNER in Japan.
In that case, we are thinking of using your company as a stocking source.
I would like more information about your company's customers so please give me more information regarding the following points below.

・The largest age group which makes purchases
・The magazine which your customers subscribe to

Thank you for your help.

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Good Day.

I am thinking about selling DANNER in Japan.
In that case, we would like to ask your company as a stocking source.
I would like more information about your company's customers so please give me more information regarding the following points below.

・The largest age group which makes purchases
・The magazine which your customers subscribe to

Thank you for your help.

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I could understand what you meant.
If so, Magic Eyes, Japanese maker, is infringing the trademark you possessed. Shouldn't you request to Amazon about the elimination on the product page on Amazon?
As long as this product is being sold on Amazon, I believe that people who have this product have the sales right as well.

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I could understand what you meant.
If so, Magic Eyes, Japanese maker, is infringing the trademark you possessed. Shouldn't you request to Amazon about the elimination on the product page on Amazon?
As long as this product is being sold on Amazon, I believe that we who have this product have the sales right as well.

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Only telling them how to do it
There is much work you cannot describe with.
People who can use only proper words are very few.
Only half of whatever you tell them can be communicated.

Only showing them how to do it
Most of work is difficult to even mimic
If the person who has the experience does, then it might look just normal action, but if the person who does not have the experience, then it will not work like that and he/she will miss the important point.

One way is limited and the idea of person who is teaching will not be communicated fast and correctly. The effective combination of various method is necessary.

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Only telling them how to do it
There is much work you cannot describe with.
People who can use only proper words are very few.
Only half of whatever you tell them can be understood collectly.

Only showing them how to do it
Most of work is difficult to even imitate.
If the person who has the experience does, then it might look just normal action, but if the person who does not have the experience, then it will not work like that and he/she will miss the important point.

One way is limited and the idea of person who is teaching will not be communicated fast and correctly. The effective combination of various methods are necessary.

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We apologize for delayed shippment.

After the investigation, our shipment process had the issue so the product was returned to our company and was re-shipped.

We apologize for not contacting to you immediately.

We will refund the priority shipment fee.

Thank you very much in advance.

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We apologize for delayed shipment.

After the investigation, our shipment process had the issue so the product was returned to our company and was re-shipped.

We apologize for not contacting to you immediately.

We will refund the priority shipment fee.

Thank you very much in advance.

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Wish Olivia will be loved by everyone.
We will be thinking of you all the time and looking forward to seeing her from Japan.

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Wish Olivia will be loved by everyone.
We will be thinking of how you grow up all the time from Japan.

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Right now we are currently selling it, however we are not taking orders so we cannot process your order. In our company we do not have anyone who speaks English so we are only able to communicate by email. Please kindly answer my previous question about the racing suit. Then, please tell me if you are handling the Ducati suit that I have attached to this message. Please let me know how much it is. Since we would like to increase the number of items we handle on our company's website, I have many questions I would like to ask.

It might be quicker to talk with your younger brother who lives in Japan. Please let me know his phone number.

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Right now we are currently selling it, however, we cannot place an order since we haven't received an order. In our company we do not have anyone who speaks English so we are only able to communicate by email. Please kindly answer my previous question about the racing suit. Then, please tell me if you are handling the Ducati suit that I have attached to this message. Please let me know how much it is. Since we would like to increase the number of items we handle on our company's website, I have many questions I would like to ask.

It might be quicker to talk with your younger brother who lives in Japan. Please let me know his phone number.

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The conditions which leaders are required are below.

To have the future vision (purpose and future image)
To have the position (role) and its stance
To manage the direction and the goal to employee and its organization
To have unique strategy and skill and also has proper resource design
To have the challenge spirit and is not afraid of risk and is good at risk management
To be flexible to manage the unexpected situation and can deal with that kind of situation
To solve the conflict which was caused environmental factor with the new concept (idea)
To have the global network and has the good informational sensitivity
To always try to improve himself/herself and be better than others

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The conditions which leaders are required are below.

To have the future vision (purpose and future image)
To have the position (role) and its stance
To manage the direction and the goal to employee and its organization
To have unique strategy and skill and also has proper resource design
To have the challenge spirit and is not afraid of risk and is good at risk management
To be flexible to manage the unexpected situation and can deal with that kind of situation by changing direction
To solve the conflict which was caused by environmental factor with the new concept (idea)
To have the global network and has the good informational sensitivity
To always try to improve himself/herself and be better than others

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I am displaying the Mickey from Disneyland. I recommend displaying with a diorama. It is a limited item from Disneyland Japan. I am faithfully reproducing Disneyland Mickey. This item was bought by going to Disneyland during a limited period and placing an order. You are no longer able to purchase it, even in Japan is it an extraordinarily rare item. It is 12 inches. You can change the wrists. It is in working condition. The costume is well made and very luxurious. Included is a certificate of authenticity in Japanese from Disneyland.

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I am listing Mickey from Disneyland. I recommend that it is displayed with a diorama. It is a limited item from Disneyland Japan. I am faithfully reproducing Disneyland Mickey. This item was bought when I visited the Disneyland during a limited period and an order was placed then. You are no longer able to purchase it, even in Japan it is an extraordinarily rare item. It is 12 inches. You can change the wrists. It is in working condition. The costume is well-made and very luxurious. Included is a certificate of authenticity in Japanese from the Disneyland.

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1) アイテムと値段
1) もし１００個買えば、一つ６ドルでしょうか？
A: アイテムはセットで売られます。 (3つで１セット： 大、中、小)　どのサイズにご興味がおありか教えていただけますか？
2)配送と手配
購入後、日本までどれくらいの時間がかかるのでしょうか？すぐに手に入れたいので、速達で送付いただけますか？もし可能であれば、追加の料金がいくらになりますか？
A: 現在、中国新年休暇により、配送が停止しておりますのでご理解ください。あなたの求める期限がいつまでかご教示いただけますか？それが可能であるか確認しますので。
ご返事をお待ちしております。

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1) アイテムと値段
1) もし１００個買えば、一つ６ドルでしょうか？
A: アイテムはセットで売られます。 (3つで１セット： 大、中、小)　どのサイズにご興味がおありか教えていただけますか？
2)配送と送料
購入後、日本までどれくらいの時間がかかるのでしょうか？すぐに手に入れたいので、速達で送付いただけますか？もし可能であれば、追加の料金がいくらになりますか？
A: 現在、中国新年休暇により、配送が停止しておりますのでご理解ください。あなたの求める期限がいつまでかご教示いただけますか？それが可能であるか確認しますので。
ご返事をお待ちしております。

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Good day.
Below are the questions and concerns I have.
Thank you for your help.

・If I purchase 100 pieces wouldn't each piece be ●$ ?
・After the item has been purchased, about how long would it take to arrive to Japan?
・Since I would like the item ASAP, is there a possibility to deliver via express? （Express delivery）
If it is possible how much would the additional shipping fees be?
Also, how long would it take to be delivered to Japan?

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Good day.
Below are questions and concerns I have.
Thank you for your help.

・If I purchase 100 pieces, would each piece be ●$ ?
・After I place an order, about how many days would it take for the item to arrive in Japan?
・Since I would like the item ASAP, is there a possibility to deliver it by express mail? （Express mail）
If express mail delivery is possible, how much would the additional shipping fees be?
Also, how long would it take for the item to be delivered to Japan?

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First of all, At the beginning I tried three times to reply to your email. However, the messages I sent was rejected, so it did not reach you. (The first image is proof that I sent the messages)
Please understand that this is an issue that I cannot do anything about. Below is the message I am resending, so please confirm it. The second image is from when I sent that message.
I will wait for you to contact me.

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First of all, at the beginning I tried three times to reply to your email. However, the messages I sent were rejected, so it did not reach you. (The first image is proof that I sent the messages)
Please understand that this is an issue that I cannot do anything about. Below is the message I am resending, so please confirm it. The second image is from when I sent that message.
I will wait for you to contact me.

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A
32 pages in one week? My father's assistant should have the time....I wonder if they could do it? On the other hand, I feel it may add to their work.

B
"Hey, recently JOBA has been introduced to the workplace"
"Make an announcement!"

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A
32 pages in one week? My father's assistant should have that in time....I wonder if they could do it? On the other hand, I feel it may add to their work.

B
"Hey, recently JOBA has been introduced to the workplace"
"Make an announcement!"

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It is possible to ship on 2/18 but
we cannot guarantee the delivery date.
Plus, we need to obtain the product once
the order is confirmed.
If we use the tracking shipping, usually,
it takes from two weeks to around one month for the deliver.
If it is ok with you, I will post the product on the ebay.
Thank you very much in advance.

It is possible to ship three products.
If it is ok with you, I will post three products on the ebay.
Please respond to me if there is anything.
Thank you very much.

I understood.
I will post the product then.
Please confirm that you are ok with it, please order it.

If there is no inventory left,
I will contact to you.

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It is possible to ship on 2/18 but
we cannot guarantee the delivery date.
Plus, we need to obtain the product once
the order is confirmed.
If we use the tracking shipping, usually,
it takes from two weeks to around one month for the delivery.
If it is ok with you, I will post the product on the ebay.
Thank you very much in advance.

It is possible to ship three products.
If it is ok with you, I will post three products on the ebay.
Please respond to me.
Thank you very much.

I understood.
I will post the product then.
Please confirm that you are ok with it, and please order it.

If there is no inventory left,
I will contact you.

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Thank you very much for contacting us.
Yes, we should have confirmed as soon as it was delivered.
And the product was made 40 years ago so we understand that the quality was not guaranteed, either.
But there is no doubt about the issue of the volume so we will fix it.

We understand your request.
Only $100 is acceptable so please return it by PAYPAL.
Once we received the money, we will not put the negative feedback.

We will use the money for fixing it.
Thank you very much in advance.

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Thank you very much for contacting us.
Yes, we should have confirmed as soon as it was delivered.
And the product was made 40 years ago so we understand that the quality is not guaranteed, either.
But there is no doubt about the issue of the volume so we will have it fixed.

We understand your request.
Only $100 is acceptable so please return it by PAYPAL.
Once we received the money, we will not put a negative feedback.

We will use the money as a part of repair cost.
Thank you very much in advance.

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Just as could be expected of a teacher.
Thank you for understanding my weakness. This is very encouraging support to me. I am thankful for you daily. It has only been 3 months since I have come to Singapore. There are still many days spent where I have not gotten used to life here. It is also very difficult because there are not many Japanese speaking staff in my company. I am very thankful that you have given me a trigger to think about things besides work. Recently you seem very happy, and your smile is wonderful. This is also something that makes me happy, as I am thankful for your unexpected support.

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Just as could be expected of a teacher.
Thank you for understanding my weakness. It is very encouraging support for me. I am thankful for you every day. It has only been 3 months since I have come to Singapore. I am still not very used to life here. It is also very difficult because there are not many Japanese speaking staff at my company. I am very thankful that you have given me an opportunity to think about things besides work. Recently you seem very happy, and your smile is wonderful. This is also something that makes me happy, as I am thankful for your unexpected support.

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Billy Elliot

This was my second time seeing Billy Elliot. The first time my seats were far back so I wanted to see it closer and purchased seats closer to the front. We were appreciative of our seat's location in the middle of the 4th row from the front. This is my favorite movie's musical, the part of young Billy is wonderful. I am not very familiar with musicals, however I laughed and cried. It was a very happy time and at the end everyone enthusiastically applauded and gave a standing ovation. If I get to go to Britain again, this is a musical I would absolutely like to see again.

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Billy Elliot

This was my second time seeing Billy Elliot. The first time my seats were far back so I wanted to go again and sit closer, so I purchased seats closer to the front. I really liked my seat in the middle of the 4th row from the front. This is my favorite movie musical, and Billy's role as a young man is wonderful... I am not a big fan of musicals, but I laughed and cried. I was really happy at the end when everyone enthusiastically applauded and gave a standing ovation. If I get to go to Britain again, this is a musical I would absolutely like to see again.

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For questions regarding taxes, would you please ask an American tax office? I will leave it up to you.

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For questions regarding taxes, would you please ask the American tax office? Thank you.

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Since I was the kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to obtain it beautifully. Now I became adult, and it is getting achieved with the skill of the sculpture.
More than finishing the accessories, finding the stone at the beach is creative for me.
When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really the wonderful place.

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Since I was a kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to wear them beautifully. Now I became an adult, and I am starting to achieve [that dream] with the skill of the sculpture.
More than finishing the accessories, finding the stones at the beach is a creative activity for me.
When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really a wonderful place.

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I apologize for the late reply.
The product was shipped with the insurance.
I will send the investigation request again.
Could you please share the PDF you received?

And, you mentioned that you want the product as soon as possible
I will confirm my inventory and other sales people's inventory.
If there is the product, would you want me to ship it to you?
Or you want to get the money back?

Please let me know.

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I apologize for the late reply.
The product was shipped with the insurance.
I will send the investigation request again.
Could you please share the PDF you received?

And, you mentioned that you want the product as soon as possible.
I will confirm my inventory and the inventory of others in the same trade.
If there is the product, would you want me to ship it to you?
Or you want to get the money back?

Please let me know.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。どうやら荷物が盗まれたみたいです。私は、USPSから荷物を受け取ったかどうかとの手紙とPDF付きのEmailを受け取りました。あなたは保険をつけて送ったのでしょうか？そうだとすれば、クレームしなければなりませんね。
こんにちは。何も送られていません。何回か再発送等試してみましたが。。。どうしましょうか？私は早急にカメラが必要です。

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こんにちは。どうやら荷物が盗まれたみたいです。私は、USPSから荷物を受け取ったかどうかとの手紙とEmailをPDFで受け取りました。あなたは保険をつけて送ったのでしょうか？そうだとすれば、クレームしなければなりませんね。
こんにちは。何も送られていません。何回か再発送等試してみましたが。。。どうしましょうか？私は早急にカメラが必要です。