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Sorry for the inconveniences. I have refunded a full amount, so please check your paypal account.
Also, please agree on paypal's cancelation procedure. Thank you.

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We have refunded $30 to you, so please check your papal account.
Please leave a positive feedback on ebay.

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We sincerely apologize for not being able to send you a refund. It has been really busy for Christmas.
We will refund you the $28 you overpaid to us.

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Sorry for the inconvenience. I have refunded the full amount, so please check your Paypal account.
Also, please agree on Paypal's cancellation procedure. Thank you.

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We have refunded $30 to you, so please check your Paypal account.
Please leave positive feedback on eBay.

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We sincerely apologize for not being able to send you a refund. It has been really busy for Christmas.
We will refund you the $28 you overpaid to us.

元の翻訳
そのご注文を転送して頂けましたら、仮オーダーを作りオンラインで詳しい見積もりをご用意出来ます。

よろしければ送って頂いたご注文を再送信して頂けませんでしょうか？

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仕様のわかる注文を送って頂けますなら、仮注文書を作り、詳細がわかれば、オンラインで見積もりができるか調べます。

当方喜んで致しますので、オリジナルの注文書を送信して頂けませんでしょうか？

元の翻訳
そのご注文を転送して頂けましたら、仮オーダーを作りオンラインで詳しい見積もりをご用意出来ます。

よろしければ送って頂いたご注文を再送信して頂けませんでしょうか？

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そのご注文を転送して頂けましたら、仮オーダーを作りオンラインで詳細を調べて見積もりをご用意できるかどうか確認します。

よろしければそのご注文をこちらへ転送して頂けませんでしょうか？

元の翻訳
Since I wasn't sure how to purchase it really, I ended up purchasing it on ebay as usual.
Please pack it carefully to avoid any damages to the item and ship it to Japan.
I look forward to receiving it.

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Since I wasn't sure how to purchase it, I ended up purchasing it on ebay as usual.
Please pack it carefully to avoid any damage to the item when shipping it to Japan.
I look forward to receiving it.

元の翻訳
Could you please wait registering the items after the ones already been registered (1000 items)?
We are currently reviewing the pricing on the ones we requested to register as a draft.
(There are many of items that we will lose money on selling them or too expensive price ranged items.)

Once we finish reviewing the pricing, we will switch the draft to listing, and we would like to move on to the next list once those items are registered.

It will probably take some time since we want to review all items pricing.

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Could you please wait for a while before registering further items after the current list (1000 items)?
We are currently checking the price of the items on the brief copy we have registered .
(Either of these items were priced too low to make profits or too high to sell.)

Once we finish reviewing the price, we will switch the draft to the list, and we would like to move on to the next list once those items are registered.

It will probably take some time since we want to review do all the price reviewing.

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, the item has been lost by the Postal Office.
I have shipped it on September 3rd via Japan Postal Service's air mail.
It takes two weeks to get to Canada in general.
However, I will take a responsibility as a seller.
Since it's all sold out, I can't send the item to you again, so I will give you a refund.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

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Unfortunately, the item has been lost by the Postal Office.
I shipped it on September 3 via Japan Postal Service's air mail.
It takes two weeks to get to Canada in general.
However, I will take responsibility as a seller.
Since it's all sold out, I can't send the item to you again, so I will give you a refund.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Hello,

My name is 〇〇, I have ordered (Order No: 3160152) on September 20th.

Have you received my order?
Have you had any problems authorizing or charging my credit card?
Could you please let me know when this order will be shipped?

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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Hello,

My name is 〇〇. I have placed an order (Order No: 3160152) on September 20th.

Have you received my order?
Have you had any problems authorizing or charging my credit card?
Could you please let me know when the item will be shipped?

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
I will make a payment by tomorrow.
Would it be ok with you to put lower value on invoice and attach it?

Do you have other products in stock?
I would like to purchase the products listed below.

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I will make a payment by tomorrow.
Would it be alright if you lower the price a little bit and attach it to the invoice?

Do you still have other products in stock?
I would like to purchase the products listed below.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I have ordered this in different sizes, but I received the same sized ones.
Are they any different?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

Thanks,

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Hello,

I have ordered this in different sizes, but I received the same sized ones.
Are there any difference between them ?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

Thanks,

元の翻訳
We carelessly uploaded inappropriate products this time. We will make sure that we won't upload any inappropriate products again by managing products in the list. We also will be sure that we will temporally disable the listing once we upload it to double check that we don't list any inappropriate products. We are confident that we will not have the same problem by checking it twice.

I have experiences selling on ebay other than Amazon. We mainly sell Japanese products. We also sell toys and home electrical appliances on auction sites in Japan.

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We carelessly uploaded inappropriate products this time. We will make sure that we won't upload any inappropriate products again by managing products with a list. We will also temporarily disable the sales after we upload it and double check that we don't list any inappropriate products in the stock information. We are confident that we will not have the same problem by checking it twice.

I have experiences selling on ebay aside from Amazon. We mainly sell Japanese products. We also sell toys and home electrical appliances on auction sites in Japan.

元の翻訳
残念ながら、あなたの荷物の手続きをしている際、私たちの倉庫にて荷物の所在を確認する事ができませんでした。↵
只今、倉庫でのあなたの荷物を探しているところです。↵
私たちが調査をしている間に、あなたがこれらの商品に支払った金額が記載されたオーダーの請求書のコピーをEmailにてお送り下さい。↵
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もしあなたの荷物を発見出来なかった場合、即刻返金致します。

お返事お待ちしております。

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残念ながら、お客様の荷物の出荷手続きにおいて、弊社倉庫で該当する荷物の所在を確認する事ができませんでした。只今、倉庫でお客様の荷物を探しているところです。弊社が調査をしている間に、お客様がこれらの商品に支払われた金額が記載されたオーダーの請求書のコピーをEmailにてお送り下さい。お客様の荷物を発見出来なかった場合、即刻返金致します。

お返事お待ちしております。

元の翻訳
支援金額はスタートアップ企業の業界とステージによる。↵
設立して間もないシードステージにあるスタートアップ企業への支援も設立者に経験があれば支援することもある。

これにより、モバイル事業やIT企業より多くの資金がバイオテクノロジーやクリーンテクノロジー関連のスタートアップ企業へ投資される。

最初のKUVF基金は2007人に45億円の資金とともにはじまり、↵
昨年の8月までに18社の企業を支援してきた。↵
これらの企業の中の一つがAucfanで、東京近辺での市場価格比較のサイトで、今年上場した。

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支援金額はスタートアップ企業の業界とステージによる。設立して間もないシードステージにあるスタートアップ企業への支援も設立者に経験があれば支援することもある。

これにより、モバイルやITのスタートアップ企業より多くの資金が必要とされるバイオテクノロジーやクリーンテクノロジー関連の企業へも投資される。

最初のKUVF基金は2007年に45億円の資金とともにはじまり、今年8月現在、18社の企業を支援している。これらの企業の中の一つがAucfanで、東京を拠点とする市場価格比較のサイトで、今年上場した。

元の翻訳
I sincerely apologize for taking longer than we thought to be delivered and disappointed you while you were really looking forward to receiving the item.

It looks like it was delivered to your country in about 2-3 days, but it took some time to pass the customs.

I will add the comment below from now on to avoid confusion.

The estimate delivery time listed here doesn't include the time for customs' inspection.

We highly recommend you to choose EMS option if you are in hurry.
Please be advised that this is just an estimated time arrival.
Although it is slightly more expensive, it is faster and more comfortable.

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I sincerely apologize for taking longer than we thought to be delivered and disappointed you [parallelism] while you were really looking forward to receiving the item.

It seems to have arrived in your country in a few days, but it took some time to pass customs.

I will add the comment below from now on to avoid confusion:

The estimate delivery time listed here doesn't include the time for customs inspection.

We highly recommend that you choose EMS if you are in a hurry.
Please be advised that this is just an estimated arrival time.
Although it is slightly more expensive, it is faster and more comfortable [word choice].

元の翻訳
Hello,

Sorry for the delay to respond.
In the previous email, it looks like there were errors in letters, so I'm sending it over to you again.
Just in case you see some errors again, I have copied your website's URL below.

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Hello,

Sorry for the late reply.
In the previous email, it looks like there were errors in letters, so I'm sending it over to you again.
Just in case you see some errors again, I have copied your website's URL below.

元の翻訳
Please be advised that service may take between 7 to 10 business days once our service department receives it, but the turn around time may vary and it may take longer depends on the stock we have.
Also, we only do repair service at our facility in Japan at the moment. I hope you understand it.

Thank you for your support for Bandai products and please feel free to contact us if you have any suggestions or concerns.

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Please be aware that the service takes about 7 or 10 days once our service department receives the item, but it may also take longer due to the amount in our stock.
As for repair services in America, I am sorry to notify you that we only have repair services at our facility in Japan at this moment. I hope you could understand it.

Thank you for your support for Bandai products and please feel free to contact us if you have any suggestions or concerns.

元の翻訳
The repair cost will vary depends on what it needs to be repaired.
The cost could be free of charge, or 20% of the MSRP at the most.
We will enclose a postal transfer form in the package with repaired product if the repair cost occurs, so please make us a payment later on.

The return shipping of the repaired products to you from us will be on us.
Please take care of the shipping of the product for repair to us.

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The repair cost will vary based on what needs to be repaired.
The cost could be free of charge, or 20% of the MSRP at the most.
We will enclose a postal transfer form in the package with repaired product in case the repair cost occurs; if it occurs, please make a payment later on.

When we return the repaired item to you, we will cover return shipping charges of it.
However, please take care of the shipping charges of the item when you sent it to us.

元の翻訳
アップルは年内に2つ程新製品を発表し、数週間以内にそれらを発表する予定です。

Appleの動きに詳しい人々がAllThingsDに語った情報によると、アップルの次の招待者限定のイベントは10月22日木曜日に行われるそうです。このイベントの焦点となるのはiPad製品のバージョンアップと思われますが、新型Mac ProとOSX マーヴェリックの発表も同様に注目を浴びるであろうとのことです。

第5世代iPadはiPad miniの様に更に薄く、軽いデザインと改良されたカメラの搭載を期待されています。↵
Appleの新しい64ビットのA7チップで動作されるでしょう。↵
第2世代のiPad miniはレティナ・ディスプレイの搭載と、A7チップの内蔵が予想されます。

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Appleは年内に2つ程新製品を発表し、数週間以内にそれらを発表する予定です。

Appleの動きに詳しい人々がAllThingsDに語った情報によると、Appleの次の招待者限定のイベントは10月22日木曜日に行われるそうです。このイベントの焦点となるのはiPad製品のバージョンアップと思われますが、新型Mac ProとOSX マーヴェリックの発表も同様に注目を浴びるであろうとのことです。

第5世代iPadはiPad miniの様に、より薄く、軽いデザインで、改良されたカメラの搭載が期待されています。Appleの新しい64ビットのA7チップで動作するでしょう。第2世代のiPad miniはレティナ・ディスプレイの搭載と、A7チップの内蔵が予想されます。

元の翻訳
アップルの新型iPadが噂通り、最近発売されたiPhone5sに搭載されたタッチ式指紋認証機能を搭載しているかどうかは定かではありません。

情報元はこのイベントがどこで行われるかは教えてくれず、また、私も場所の特定には至っていません。
私は2012年にiPad miniの発表が行われたカリフォルニア州のサンノゼにあるカリフォルニア・シアターにて行われるであろうと推測しています。この場所と、クパティーノにあるアップルのタウンホール・オーディトリウムと、サンフランシスコのヤルバ・ブエナ・センターの2つが有力な候補でしょう。

注目に値する事実: 偶然にも、アップルの秋のイベントはノキアの新体制のイベントと、マイクロソフトの新しいSurface 2の小売店鋪での発表と重なります。

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アップルの新型iPadが噂通り、最近発売されたiPhone5sに搭載されたタッチ式指紋認証機能を搭載しているかどうかは定かではありません。

情報元はこのイベントがどこで行われるかは教えてくれず、また、私も場所の特定には至っていません。
私は2012年にiPad miniの発表が行われたカリフォルニア州のサンノゼにあるカリフォルニア・シアターにて行われることはないと推測しています。残される、クパティーノにあるアップルのタウンホール・オーディトリウムと、サンフランシスコのヤルバ・ブエナ・センターの2つが有力な候補でしょう。

注目に値する事実: 偶然にも、アップルの秋のイベントはアメリカで行われるノキアの新体制のイベントと、マイクロソフトの新しいSurface 2の小売店鋪での発表と重なります。↵
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Worth noting: The date of Apple’s fall event coincides with both Nokia’s Innovation Reinvented showcase, and the retail debut of Microsoft’s new Surface 2 in the United States.

元の翻訳
We feel it's better to have Japanese people at the booth for Japanese to feel more comfortable to visit the booth. We feel confident that this program will bring you a good result.

(We will adjust the schedule based on the number of the students and companies. The fee is included in Japantex Video's cost).

We hope to be able to assist you to place your products well in the market in Japan with our manpower and IT.
Please consider it and I look forward to hearing from you.

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We feel it's better to have Japanese people at the booth because that way we feel more comfortable to visit the booth. We feel confident that this program will bring you a good result.

(We will adjust the schedule based on the number of the students and companies. The fee is included in Japantex Video's cost).

We hope to be able to assist you to place your products well in the market of Japan with our manpower and IT.
Please consider it and I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I'm not looking to have a refund. I would like you to ship the remaining order as soon as possible.
I will close the case as soon as I receive the product I have not received yet.
I have discussed with the person at Paypal and we both agreed to it.
Could you please inform me when you can ship it again? Thanks.

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I'm not looking to have a refund. I would like you to ship the remaining order as soon as possible.
I will close the claim until I receive the product I have not received yet.
I have discussed with the person at Paypal and we both agreed to it.
Could you please inform me when you can ship it again? Thanks.

元の翻訳
Thanks for sending the product the other day.

I would like to ask you a question.
Would it be possible to get a trophy of the Yu-Gi-Oh!'s Asian tournament?

I know a person in Japan who is interested to purchase.↵

If it's possible for you to get it, could you please send a picture of it, and let me know the price you can offer.

Thanks for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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Thanks for sending the product the other day.

I would like to ask you a question.
Would it be possible to get a trophy of the Yu-Gi-Oh!'s Asian tournament?

I know a person in Japan who wants to purchase
If it's possible for you to get it, could you please send a picture of it, and let me know the price you can offer.

Thanks for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
Of course, I'd like to be a great business partner with you until your child grow up to be an adult.

Your job this time is fix the item that has been saved in the commerce and list it on ebay.

Please carefully read the shipping fee manual in the shipping folder, and fix the shipping description according to the manual.

Once I judge and feel confident that you understood the shipping description manual and listing the items, we'll move on to the next step.

Please check manual's page 7 to calculate the shipping fee.

** costs over $8 to ship.

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Of course, I'd like to be a great business partner with you until your child grows up to be an adult.

Your job this time is to fix the item that has been saved in the commerce and list it on ebay.

Please carefully read the shipping fee manual in the shipping folder, and fix the shipping description according to the manual.

Once I judge and feel confident that you understood the shipping description manual and listing the items, we'll move on to the next step.

Please check manual's page 7 to calculate the shipping fee.

** costs over $8 to ship.

元の翻訳
私たちはあなたがPPに関する異議を申し立てについてエスカレートさせたことに気づきました。
この問題を解決するのに何かアイデアはありますか？
この異議申し立ての件に関しては、調査待ちという状態になっています。↵
私はPPは返品する様にあなたに伝え、私たちはあなたに返金する様にと決定するであろうと恐れています。
なので、この件に関して相談し、異議申し立てを取り下げれる様ご協力頂ければ幸いです。

ところで、PPがもし返金の為に返品する様依頼をしたら、無視して頂き、あなたが返品しないとしばらくすると自動的にこの異議申し立ての件は終了すると思います。それでよろしいでしょうか？

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私たちはあなたがPPに関する異議申し立てについてエスカレートさせたことに気づきました。
この問題を解決するのに何かアイデアはありますか？
この異議申し立ての件は、調査待ちの状態になっていますので、PPがあなたには返品を求め、私たちにはあなたへの返金を求める決定をするであろうと恐れています。
なので、この件に関して相談し、異議申し立てを取り下げれる様ご協力頂ければ幸いです。

ところで、PPがもし返金の為に返品する様依頼をしたら、無視して頂き、あなたが返品しないとしばらくすると自動的にこの異議申し立ての件は終了すると思います。それでよろしいでしょうか？