cheng yu (fantasyc) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
yamahaya88102012さん、

つまり、このシステムは、B4の開かれたことがないのですか？それとも、使用された後、ボックスに封入されていますか？

yamahaya88102012さん

そして、どのような2つのゲームが付属していますか？

- crisnakeater90さん
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yamahaya88102012さん、

つまり、このシステムはまだ開けられていないのでしょうか。それとも、使用後、ボックスに封入されましたか？

yamahaya88102012さん

そして、付属の2つのゲームは何でしょうか？

- crisnakeater90さん
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元の翻訳
As you said, a promotion would be good when a new model comes out.
So would you agree to let us become an import agency for you in Japan? It would be easier to make presentation plan for press release or magazines, as well as get connected to various media. Please take this into consideration.

In addition, please tell me know the improvements of the new products and the wholesale price of them.
Samples would be even more helpful if you could send us.

Looking forward to your reply.

修正後
As you said, we should start a promotion campaign when a new model comes out.
So would you let us become an import agency for you in Japan? It would be easier to make presentation plan for press release or magazines, as well as get connected to various media. Please take this into consideration.

In addition, please tell me know the improved features of new products and their wholesale prices.
Samples would be even more helpful if you could send us.

I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the photo!
First, I'm glad that Mr. Luke McMillin is safe! !
Trouble happened on the way was a pity, really. However, during the race, being fifth with a unfamiliar machine is really awesome! !
I thought Mark got injured and had to give up .
I am unable to translate, but there are articles written somewhere about the reason of giving up :D

Because I can not send images of the body, so let me send a small picture of my radio-controlled machine :)
I am stuck now because bending the exhaust pipe is so difficult :D

修正後
Thank you for the photo!
First, I'm glad that Mr. Luke McMillin was safe! !
The trouble happened on the way was a pity, really. However, during the race, being fifth with an unfamiliar machine is really awesome! !
At first, I thought Mark had gotten injured and had to give up .
I was unable to translate, but there might be articles somewhere written about the reason of his giving up :D

Because I can not send images of the body yet, so let me send a small picture of my radio-controlled machine :)
I am stuck now because bending the exhaust pipe is so difficult :D