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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/06/14 19:35:39

ooneko
ooneko 52 外資系保険会社でアドミ業務に携わる中で10年にわたり英日、日英翻訳を担当い...
日本語

彼は天才的なプログラマーですが、学校内に電子機器が存在ないため、前半はあまり活躍できません!

ですが彼は物語が進むと活躍する場が増えてくるので、是非最終回まで見逃さないでください!

同人誌では、面倒見がいいOwada MondoやMakotoと一緒にいたり、2に出てくるキャラクターたちとも一緒に描かれています。

小動物のように愛らしい性格なので、漫画の中ではいじめられたり、泣かされたりすることが多いんですが、そこが可愛いんです…!

あー!早くChihiroをアニメで見たい!!

英語

Although he is a genuis programmer, he cannot make great jobs in the first half part of the story because there is no electronic device in the school.

But please keep watching untill the final episodedo since he appears more frequently as the story moves on.

In another story in a coterie magazine, he stays with Owada Mondo who is a caring person and Makoto, and also with other charactors appearing in 2.

Because he is very lovely like a small animal, he gets in trouble like being teased or being made cry in the cartoon, but this makes you feel more like he is sweet.

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!

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eezebird 61 カナダ生まれ・育ち・在住のeezebirdと申します。 クリエイティブ系...
eezebirdはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/12 08:09:07

元の翻訳
Although he is a genuis programmer, he cannot make great jobs in the first half part of the story because there is no electronic device in the school.

But please keep watching untill the final episodedo since he appears more frequently as the story moves on.

In another story in a coterie magazine, he stays with Owada Mondo who is a caring person and Makoto, and also with other charactors appearing in 2.

Because he is very lovely like a small animal, he gets in trouble like being teased or being made cry in the cartoon, but this makes you feel more like he is sweet.

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!

修正後
Although he is a programming genius, he cannot really play an active role in the first half of the story because there are no electronic devices in the school.

But please keep watching until the final episode because he appears more frequently as the story progresses.

In the fanzine, he stays with the caring Owada Mondo and Makoto, and is also depicted together with other characters that appear in 2.

Because he has a lovable personality similar to a small animal, he is often teased or made to cry in the comic, but that is what makes him cute!

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!

英語の綴りは少々間違いがありますが、文法の面では特に問題ないと思います。
文意を掴んでいて、全体的に良かったです。

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備考: 日本のアニメのキャラクターの紹介文です