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こちらが契約書になります。サインをし、初回の入金（私のペイパルアドレスは請求書に記載されております）をして頂けましたら、すぐに対応いたします。　よろしくお願いします。

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こちらが契約書になります。ご署名のうえ、初回の入金（私のペイパルアドレスは請求書に記載されております）をして頂けましたら、すぐに対応いたします。　よろしくお願いします。

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Thank you for contacting me.
Since I had made a shipment on January 18th through the air mail of Japan Postal Service (without tracking number), so the item was supposed to be delivered to you by January 28th. However, the fact that the item has not arrived yet is because the Post office may have lost them or the item may have been confiscated in the custom house. I am very sorry to bother you, but I will send the same item through the air mail (with tracking number) again. When I completed the sending procedure, I will inform you the tracking number. Please be sure to wait for a while.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Since I have shipped the item on January 18th through the air mail of Japan Postal Service (without tracking number), so the item was supposed to be delivered to you around January 28th. However, the fact that the item has not arrived yet is because the Post office may have lost them or the item may have been confiscated in the custom house. I am very sorry to bother you, but I will send the same item through the air mail (with tracking number) again. When I completed the shipment procedure, I will inform you of the tracking number. Please be sure to wait for a while.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I can explain my job only in Japanese.
Right now the translator is away, so I will assign you a job when he gets back,
Thank you in advance.
Thank you.

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Hello.
I can explain my job only in Japanese.
Right now the translator (interpreterのほうがBetterかと)is away, so I will assign you a job when he(なぜheなのでしょう？このように、その通訳の詳細が不明な場合、勝手に性別をきめるのはいかがなものかと思います。私はhe/she を使っています。) gets back,
Thank you in advance.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
We don't charge any shipping costs for your first sample purchase.
You can include up to 5 items in this sample purchase.

Payment is done through Paypal, and shipping once we receive a confirmation that the payment has been received.
We as a company want to know what kind of watch you are looking for.
Besides Casio, we also handle in Seiko, Citizen, Orient and more brands of watches.
If you specify the model number and the manufacturer, you can look up the wholesale prices.

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We don't charge any shipping costs for your first sample purchase.
You can include up to 5 items in this sample purchase.

We accept payment through Paypal, and we will shipp your orders once we confirm the receipt of payment.
We, as a company, want to know what kind of watch you are looking for.
Besides Casio, we also handle in Seiko, Citizen, Orient and more brands of watches.
If you specify the model number and the manufacturer, we can offer you the watch in wholesale prices.↵
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Best regards,

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The budget is around $200.00 at most. Please complete the work within this budget. We do not have specific image of the logo design so that we hope “trendy style” one considering the tone and the spelling of our name if possible. We like round-shape design, but it is all right for the lettering-taste design. Is it difficult to make as you like? If you can, we would like you to create 2 kinds of logo and we choose one or revise. How can we request officially? I would like to ask you soon.

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The budget is around $200.00 at most. Please complete the work within this budget. We do not have specific image of the logo design so that we hope “trendy style” one considering the tone and the spelling of our name if possible. We like round-shape design, but it is all right for the design with lettering-type. Is it difficult for you to work on it if we leave it all to you? If you can, we would like you to create 2 kinds of logo so that we can choose one or have it revised. How can we place official order? We would like to ask you soon.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Did you receive EL010148394JP yesterday?
I have mistakenly sent it to you.
Inside of it contains pentax TTL.

I will pay 10% of shipping and handling fee so can you send it back to me?↵
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I sincerely apologize.↵
I am also located in England.↵
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If needed, I will send you the recipient's address.

It would be great if you can help me out.

Please do not accept the item and return it to the EMS vendor that sent the item to you.

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Hello.
Did you receive EL010148394JP yesterday?
I have mistakenly sent it to you.
Inside of it contains pentax TTL.

I will pay you for the shipping as well as 10% handling charge, if you agreed to forward it to someone else who also lives in UK. Of course I will give you the forwarding address as well.↵
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I sincerely apologize.

It would be great if you can help me out.

Please do not accept the item and return it to the EMS vendor that sent the item to you.

元の翻訳
If I send your package by EMS today, it could reach you on 12th. With DHL, it could get to you faster, but apparently it is possible it might get stopped at customs. Would it be OK to use EMS?

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If I ship your package by EMS today, you might be able to receive in on the 12th. With DHL, it could get it to you faster, but apparently it is possible it might get stopped at customs. Would it be OK to use EMS?

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I took the procedures of Open Unpaid Item Case to ebay, because it's supposed to be paid on Monday, but I didn't get payment or messages. That's because 100$ bidding charges will not return to me without the steps if the trade misses out without your payment. The limit of the procedures had come, so I could not wait.
If you pay, Unpaid Item Case will be gone. I think it's long time but I will wait by 9th, because it takes even 3 weeks from bidding to payment.

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I took the procedures for Open Unpaid Item Case to ebay, because it's supposed to be paid on Monday, but I didn't get payment or messages. That's because $100 bidding charges will not be refunded to me without the steps if the trade misses out without your payment. The limit of the procedures had come, so I could not wait.
If you pay, Unpaid Item Case will be gone. I think it's long time but I will wait by 9th, because it takes even 3 weeks from bidding to payment.

元の翻訳
I have not been refunded $80.40 yet.
It has already passed 13 business days. ↵
Please send me the refund as soon as possible.

I have attached the conversation between the representative that was speaking to me regarding part of the refund of this order to this email below.

I have attached the contents from the email to this email below.

Thank you for making the cancellation.

I have not received an answer about part of the refund from the paid amount and the coupon code.

I have written 4 product reviews couple of days ago.

I have not recieved refunds from the order below.
It has passed 13 business days after the last time I have been contacted by the representative.

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You have not refunded me $80.40 yet.
It has already passed 13 business days, so please refund me the money as soon as possible.

I have attached the conversation between the representative that was speaking to me regarding part of the refund of this order to this email below.

I have attached the contents from the email to this email below.

Thank you for making the cancellation.

I have not received an answer regarding the part of the refund from the paid amount and the coupon code.

I have written 4 product reviews a couple of days ago.

I have not received refunds for the orders indicated below.
It has been 13 business days ever since the last time I have been contacted by the representative.

元の翻訳
I have attached a screenshot for you to look at.
I am not sure what part is necessary exactly, but is it alright like this?

The money that hasn't been added to Payoneer, is the amount that was withdrawn from my Paypal.
(Most of this is money has been made through ebay, but what you need is a picture of my Amazon account, right?)

I requested the money withdrawal from Paypal on the 27th of February. I would appreciate it if it could be added quickly.
Thank you very much.

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I have attached a screenshot for your perusal.
I am not sure what part is necessary exactly, but is it alright like this?

The money that hasn't been deposited to Payoneer, is the amount that was withdrawn from my Paypal.
(Most of this is money has been made through ebay, but what you need is a picture of my Amazon account, right?)

I requested the money withdrawal from Paypal on the 27th of February. I would appreciate it if you could deposit the money quickly.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
This figurehead comes in 4 sizes.
I currently have these in stock, but I can contact a wholesale store.
It may take a long time, but I can obtain them.
The prices I can give you are as follows: Product number 1 $O, #2 $0, #3 $0, and #4 $O.
Shipping is $O, no matter how many products you order.
Please let me know if you are interested.

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This figurehead comes in 4 sizes.
I currently do not have these in stock, but I can contact a wholesale store.
It may take a long time, but I can obtain them.
The prices I can give you are as follows: Product number 1 $O, #2 $0, #3 $0, and #4 $O.
Shipping is $O, no matter how many products you order.
Please let me know if you are interested.

元の翻訳
We are terribly sorry for causing you so much trouble because of our shop system's error. I hope you can forgive us. We will take preventive measures to make sure it never happens again.

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We are terribly sorry for causing you so much trouble because of the error wirh our system. I hope you can forgive us. We will take preventive measures to make sure it never happens again.

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I made this dish from scratch.
I eat my favorite meat sauce and tomato spaghetti with shaved Parmesan cheese.
It’s healthy and tasty as I substitute raw cream with soy milk.
Fried rice with fresh vegetables.
I try to eat healthy.
I try to cook at home as much as possible.
Homemade ramen
Meat stuffed peppers
Tsukemen
Dishes at my favorite restaurant
Easy and fast with a pressure cooker

Japan’s home cooking
Japan’s new-year cooking
A rice cake soup is fish, soy sauce based and has vegetables, fish, chicken, and rice cakes.

My favorite Japanese products
So easy to use, convenient
Japanese products are well made and hard to break

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I made this dish from scratch.
I eat my favorite meat sauce and tomato spaghetti with shaved Parmesan cheese.
It’s healthy and tasty as I substitute fresh cream with soy milk.
Fried rice with fresh vegetables.
I try to eat healthy.
I try to cook at home as much as possible.
Homemade ramen
Meat stuffed peppers
Tsukemen (dipping noodles)
Dishes at my favorite restaurant
Easy and fast cooking with a pressure cooker

Japan’s home cooking
Japan’s new-year cuisine
Zoni, or soup with rice cake is made of fish, soy sauce based broth with vegetables, fish, chicken, and rice cakes in it.

My favorite Japanese products
So easy to use, convenient
Japanese products are well made and hard to break

元の翻訳
For the items I imported last time, I paid the import taxes including those for missing items because of the quantity stated in the custom’s form.
This time, if you could state “discounted” on the invoice, I could save the payment of import taxes.
I am afraid request you, but would you state discount on the invoice even it is a provisional invoice.
In addition, I was wondering if you could state not itemized amount but a total amount only.

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For the items I imported last time, I paid the import taxes including those for missing items (↵
(ここ以下は本文にありませんbecause of the quantity stated in the custom’s form）.
This time, if you could state “discounted” on the invoice, I could save a little bit on the payment of import taxes.
I am afraid to request you, but would you change the items indicated on the current invoice to discount even it is a provisional invoice.
In addition, please indicate the total amount instead of itemized amount.

元の翻訳
We apologize to trouble you undeliverable parcel.

We confirmed and reported the status with the tracking number to each customer who does not receive package yet by the delivery delayed.
Also, we accept refund for the shipment that the delivery is behind in schedule substantially.

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We apologize you for troubling you regarding undeliverable parcel.

We verified the status of each package with the tracking number to each customer who does not receive package yet by the delivery delayed.
Also, we accept the request for the refund for the customers whose order delivery is substantially behind the schedule.

元の翻訳
Do you mean that we need a saleｓ agent?
Who should I contact so that we can buy Japanese beef?
I'd like you to tell me how to get an estimate and do business as we consider purchasing.

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Do you mean that we need a saleｓ agent?
Who should I contact Lin order for us to purchase Wagyu beef?
I'd like you to tell me how to get an estimate and do business as we consider purchasing.

元の翻訳
①Thank you for contacting us about tracking number. We appreciate you sincerely.
The correct item that we had already sent is at customs clearance in United kingdom.
You can track it on this website.
URL

Please wait for a while before it arrives. We apologize that it takes long time for delivery this time.
We apologize again.

② Honestly, it must be difficult to find it within the budget of ○○.
The number of left hand is very few, and we can hardly find an even used one on the market.

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①Thank you for contacting us about tracking number. We sincerely appreciate your cooperation.
The correct item that we had already sent is at customs clearance in United kingdom.
You can track the shipment status on this website:
URL

Please wait for a while before it arrives. We apologize for the time taking for the delivery.
We apologize again.

② Honestly, it must be difficult to find it within the budget of ○○.
The number of the item made for left hand is very few, and we can hardly find an even used one on the market.

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I purchased item A from a shop in US in February.
I live in Phillipines, so I sent item A to Philippines by air.
The amplifier of the item arrived so I used them, but there was an initial failure that the sound crackles even in small volumes.
Therefore, I want it to be repaired using your one-year warranty, but can it be fixed in the distributor in Philippines?
If it can be repaired, what type of documents are needed?
I will be waiting for your reply.

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I purchased item A from a shop in the US in February.
I live in Phillipines, so I had item A sent to the Philippines by air.
The amplifier of the item arrived so I used them, but there was an initial failure that the sound crackles even in small volumes.
Therefore, I want it to be repaired using your one-year warranty, but can it be fixed in the distributor in the Philippines?
If it can be repaired, what type of documents would I need?
I will be waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
When applying please write how fast can you make tools which can extract ASIN to refer. (e.g., 3000/hr)

Also, we can consult you about the reward, so if you are not satisfied with the amount of payment which I show, let me know your desired amount.
Those who have an experience to create such tools are preferable, but at first, I expect the applicants who can consult us with skype or email in detail before creating tools.

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It would help me if you can indicate how fast you can make tools for extracting ASIN, when you submit your application. (e.g., 3000/hr)

Also, the compensation will be negotiable, so, you may give me your figures before the commencement of your employment, in case you are not satisfied with the amount which I will give you.
although we prefer someone with experience of creating those tools are preferable, but at we are looking forward for hearing from someone whom we can discuss the details via Skype or email before the creation if the tool.

元の翻訳
甲は、雇用契約に関連し、乙が下記の行為をした場合、通告や給料を支払うことなく、乙を解雇する。
a) 意識的に適法かつ合理的な命令に従う義務を怠たる。
b) 正当で忠実な業務遂行に矛盾する不正行為を犯した。
c) 習慣的な業務怠慢
d) 不正行為や詐欺行為の犯罪を犯した。
e) 医師が業務に適正で無いと証明した。

乙が業務や名声を防ぐために必要と判断した場合は雇用契約を直ちに解除し、また乙は解雇される日までの給料や社会福祉の便益を受ける権利を有する。

上記を証として、下記に署名した両者はこの雇用契約を締結する。

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甲は、雇用契約に関連し、乙が下記の行為をした場合、通告や給料を支払うことなく、乙を解雇する。
a) 意識的に適法かつ合理的な命令に従う義務を怠たる。
b) 正当で忠実な業務遂行に矛盾する不正行為を犯した。
c) 習慣的な業務怠慢
d) 不正行為や詐欺行為の犯罪を犯した。
e) 医師が業務に適正で無いと証明した。

甲がその業務や名誉を守る（or 保護する）ために必要と判断した場合は雇用契約を直ちに解除し、また乙は解雇される日までの給料や社会福祉の便益を受ける権利を有する。

上記を証として、下記に署名した両者はこの雇用契約を締結する。