的場　知之 (camelotgarden) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello,

Thank you for contacting us.
If we send the item by Japan Post, Canada Post will deliver after it enters Canada.
We have sold this item to Canadian customers some times but no problem has occurred.
We are looking forward hearing from you.

修正後
Hello,

Thank you for contacting us.
If we send the item by Japan Post, Canada Post will deliver after it enters Canada.
We have previously sold this item to Canadian customers several times but we had no problem.
We are looking forward hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Dear Laura

Hello.I received the product today.
I will try it as soon as possible.

By the way, I have several questions to you.
1. To selling electric devices in Japan, you need to get PSE , the law regulating the safety of electric products.
Is this item certificated by PSE?
2. It takes 16 days to get the item after payment. How long will it take to get items if I order again?
The next order may be 12 items.
3. I would like you to reply me in English.

Looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

修正後
Dear Laura

Hello.I received the product today.
I will try it as soon as possible.

By the way, I have several questions to you.
1. To sell electric devices in Japan, you need to get approved of PSE, the law guaranteeing the safety of electric products.
Is this item certificated by PSE?
2. It took 16 days to get the item after payment. How long will it take to get items if I order again?
The next order may be 12 items.
3. I would like you to reply to me in English.

Looking forward to your reply. Thank you.