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元の翻訳
Hello. Did you check the email we sent on Tuesday? We would like to have your reply as soon as possible since our customer is waiting for it. The following is the copy of the email, for just in case you missed it.
As for Pillow Cover #9645
One of our customers who bought your "Reading Pillow" wants to have its Pillow Cover.
However, we were not able to find one on your website.
Did they go out of production by any chance?
In case they are going to arrive, when will they be?
And if they were discontinued and will not arrive again, could you let us know any substitutable products?
We are awaiting for your reply.
Thank you.

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Hello. Did you check the email we sent on Tuesday? We would like to have your reply as soon as possible since our customer is waiting for it. The following is the copy of the email, just in case you missed it.
Regarding Pillow Cover #9645
One of our customers who bought your "Reading Pillow" wants to have its Pillow Cover.
However, we were not able to find one on your website.
Did they go out of production by any chance?
In case they are going to arrive, when will that be?
And if they were discontinued and will not arrive again, could you let us know any substitutable products?
We are awaiting your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
1. How is the situation afterwards?

If we can continue with regards to the release, I would love to tell you my ideas regarding the release period, the design of the cover, and so on.

As for the compensation, is it okay to follow what I have proposed?

2. To go on a tour, we will need some savings. Therefore, I have began an online shop targeting overseas consumers called "A". It has gained quite a lot of popularity, and there are many music related customers, so I thought it could be great.

However, it is not well known yet overseas, so if you have any good advices, please let me know.

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1. How is the situation afterwards?

If we can continue with regards to the release, I would love to tell you my ideas regarding the release period, the design of the cover, and so on.

As for the compensation, is it okay to follow what I have proposed?

2. To go on a tour, we will need some savings. Therefore, I have begun an online shop targeting overseas consumers called "A". It has gained quite a lot of popularity, and there are many music related customers, so I thought it could be great.

However, it is not well known yet overseas, so if you have any good advice, please let me know.

元の翻訳
The packing of the product in the recent shipments have been changed as attachment 1.
Sometimes, we ship the product to our customers using the same package, and the simple vinyl package have been an issue for us. Thus, can you please return to the old thick plastic package that have a hard sheet inside, as attachment 2?

Regarding the order of last week, we don't mind the handling fee of 30 euros to be charged, so please proceed with the order with this quantity.

Besides, we could not find the images of the series below, so can you send images of them as much as possible?

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The packing of the product in the recent shipments have been changed as shown in attachment 1.
Sometimes, we ship the product to our customers using the same package, and the simple vinyl package has been an issue for us. Thus, can you please return to the old thick plastic package that has a hard sheet inside, as shown in attachment 2?

Regarding the order placed last weekend, we don't mind being charged the handling fee of 30 euros, so please proceed with the order with this quantity.

Also, we could not find the images belonging to the series below, so can you please send as many images from this series as possible?

元の翻訳
The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
I will send a previosu tracking number as a reference.
I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
We hate to say, but you have to pay for the shipping charge this time.
As I did in the last time, I wil let you know the tracking number after it is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

May we ask you a patience until you receive it?

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The item you purchased was returned to me.
It had been stored in UK, and was returned.
Just in case I will send the previous tracking number.
I will await your reply.

Thank you for contacting us.
Unfortunately you will need to pay the shipping charge this time.
As I did last time, I will let you know the tracking number after the item is sent.
The shipping charge is 25 dollars.

It may take a little bit of time to arrive so I respectfully ask your patience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
I apologize for the late response.

The web page you contacted us about has been deleted at 1:40pm on January 5th(Mon) Japan time.

Should you have any other inconvenience, please do not hesitate to contact us at any time.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
I apologize for the late response.

The web page you contacted us about has been deleted at 1:40pm on January 5th(Mon) Japan time.

Should you have any other issues, please do not hesitate to contact us at any time.

元の翻訳
I will ask you the question again. On which day in this month are you going to make a payment?
If you do not reply me, I will close this case tomorrow.
In that case, I hate to say, but it will be listed as "unpaid" at eBay.
I appreciate your understanding.

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I will ask you the question again. On which day in this month are you going to make a payment?
If you do not reply to me, I will close this case tomorrow.
In that case, I hate to say, but it will be listed as "unpaid" on eBay.
I appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Hello, Janice.
On ID inquiy, we are sorry to register repeatedly.
Please delete duplicated one.
Let us know which ID and address are remained.
I want to buy A's book. How can I purchase it?

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Hello, Janice.
I am sorry that I registered multiple ID's.
Thank you for deleting the duplicate ones.
Please let me know which ID and address is the remaining registered one.↵

I want to buy A's book. How can I purchase it?

元の翻訳
Ok.
I will order it with 45% off.
Can you tell me payment and shipment details?

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Ok.
I will order it at 45% off.
Can you tell me the payment and shipment details?

元の翻訳
Is it possible to order the items listed online after I receive an order from a customer?
I would like you to give me a 50 percent discount from the retail price
of the brand.
May I also ask you to send the item to my partner in Oregon?
If you some conditions regarding the item above, please let me know.

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Is it possible to order the items listed online after I receive an order from a customer?
I would like you to give me a 50 percent discount from the retail price
of the brand.
May I also ask you to send the item to my partner in Oregon?
If you have some conditions regarding the items above, please let me know.

元の翻訳
I'm grateful. Thank you.
I'm suppose to receive your reply regarding the order confirmation.
If it's decided, I will send the order forms to you on Friday.
As for the remaining merchandise, the deadline is still far to please conduct a full inspection.
Thanks for looking it up.

I'm sorry for the late reply.
It's about the translation of the video into Japanese.
Dubbing takes a lot of time so it might take up to December to finish.
I will notify you as soon as it's finish.

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I'm grateful. Thank you.
I'm supposed to receive your reply regarding the order confirmation.
If it's decided, I will send the order forms to you on Friday.
As for the remaining merchandise, there is no need to rush delivery so please conduct a full inspection.
Thanks for looking it up.

I'm sorry for the late reply.
It's about the translation of the video into Japanese.
Dubbing takes a lot of time so it might take up to December to finish.
I will notify you as soon as it's finished.

元の翻訳
Have you finished your confirmation?
Please reply me asap.
If you will not reply me within today, I will rely on ebay and PayPal to solve this problem.

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Have you finished your confirmation?
Please reply to me asap.
If you will not reply to me by today, I will rely on ebay and PayPal to solve this problem.