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Long time no see everyone! It's flower member!
It's finally summer isn't it!

I've watched lots of good summer cartoons, but my best recommendation is definitely○○!

●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was so imaginative!

The characters' bathing suits and muscles were so fine and they had such cool faces.

It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles....

I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa!

Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

修正後
Long time no see everyone! It's flower member!
It's finally summer isn't it!

I've watched lots of the first episodes of the summer animes, but my best recommendation is definitely○○!

●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was better than I imagined!

The characters' muscles were so fine in their bathing suits even though they had such cool faces.

It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles in anime....

I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa!

Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

元の翻訳
iPad2 keyboard attachment / Personal iPad3 case

When the iPad is in it's case, the screen can be freely operated vertically and horizontally, documents can be produced, animations can be viewed, various applications can be used simultaneously and the screen direction can be changed.

The screen angle can be adjusted to 3 levels because the keyboard allows this change according to one's viewpoint. You can easily charge it by simply connecting it to your computer or USB AC adaptor, and when the case is folded. So charging during use is possible. It's convenient to carry because the cable can be stowed away.

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iPad2 / iPad3 case with keyboard attachment

When the iPad is in its case, the screen can be freely operated vertically and horizontally, documents can be produced, animations can be viewed, and the screen direction can be changed.

The screen angle can be adjusted to three levels by sliding the keyboard forwaard. You can easily charge it by simply connecting it to your computer or USB AC adaptor, and when the case is folded. So charging during use is possible. It's convenient to carry because the cable can be stowed away.