Samson Yee (atashi) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I have a call from Mr Takana, would you like to take it?
Thank you for waiting.

I am afraid he is not at his room at the moment.
May I send him / her come up to your room?
May I ask your name?
Would you like to have breakfast? It will be extra.
The elevator is over there.
The elevator is locked, you will need to put your card into the slot on the left and pull it back out once you get in. Once it's unlocked, just press the button of the floor you want to go to.↵

修正後
I have a call from Mr Takana, would you like to take it?
Thank you for waiting.

I am afraid he is not at his room at the moment.
May I send him / her come up to your room?
May I ask your name?
It will be added extra fee, but would you like to have breakfast?
The elevator is over there.
The elevator is locked, you will need to put your card into the slot on the left and pull it back out once you get in. Once it's unlocked, just press the button of the floor you want to go to.

元の翻訳
Good afternoon, this is..... 会社名

Thank you for kindly introducing me to your products at the trade show at Tokyo Big Sight. We are very much interested in buying some of your products.

Please could you send me the price list you showed me at the show?

Here is our ID if you'd like to talk over Google Hangout or Skype. Please let me know of your Skype / Google ID if you have one.

Thank you. We look forward to hearing from you.

修正後
Good afternoon, this is..... 会社名

Thank you for kindly introducing me to your products at the trade show at Tokyo Big Sight. We are very much interested in buying some of your products.

Please could you send me the price lists of what you showed me at the show?

Here is our ID if you'd like to talk over Google Hangout or Skype. Please let me know of your Skype / Google ID if you have one.

Thank you. We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Tooltip not showing on mouse-over
Tooltip not showing upon pressing the up or down key on the keyboard.
Are you sure you want to change the settings?
Backup set phrases when saving
Number of set phrases that can be saved in each group
Show "Memo" with the list of set phrases
Unhide screen when switching between tab and page
Show the main screen where the cursor is
Count words not in bytes by in the number of words
Set pointer on first row when shown on screen
Only show windows that matches the information input

修正後
Do not show the tooltip on mouse-over
Do not show the tooltip upon pressing the up or down key on the keyboard
Are you sure you want to change the settings?
Create a backup when saving the template
Number of templates that can be saved in each group
Show the list of templates in "Memo"-style
Show screen when switching between tab and page
Show the main screen where the cursor is
Save the path when copying files and folders↵
Count words not in bytes by in the number of characters
Set the cursor on first row when shown on screen
Only show windows that matches the input