長谷川　直子 (angel5) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I am going to explain to the seller about the broken parts of a figure.
Please give me a detailed picture of the broken parts so that I can explain to the seller.
I would also like a picture that shows the whole figure that is in the picture of a shipped box.

修正後
I am going to explain to the seller about the broken parts of a figure.
Please give me a detailed picture of the broken parts so that I can explain to the seller.
I would also like pictures of the shipping box and the whole figure placed in it.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry.
We send all items immediately, however sometimes certain circumstances make the delivery late.
I surely sent your item. However, I am very dissappointed that it has not reached you.
I will resend it right away. I will send it by EMS, so I think it arrives soon.
Could you please forgive me on this?

修正後
I am very sorry.
We send all items immediately, however sometimes certain circumstances make the delivery late.
I surely sent your item. However, I am very disappointed that it has not reached you.
I will send another one right away. I will send it by EMS, so I think it will arrive soon.
Please accept my apology.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.

I am collecting the data you requested, but it takes a lot of time as they are large in number.
I am sorry for the inconvenience, but please wait a little.

Also, I received an e-mail saying that this problem was resolved, but in fact, it is not resolved yet.
So please reopen the case.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.

I am collecting the data you requested, but it takes a lot of time as they are large in number.
It is supposed to be turned in to you tomorrow. I am sorry for the inconvenience, but please wait a little more.

Also, I received an e-mail saying that this problem was resolved, but in fact, it is not resolved yet.
So please reopen the case.

Thank you.