Agnes Chen (agnesc) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
The letter that I had you send had a different number of pages than the one on the server. That being the case, the one on the server has been registered to A as the correct one.
Please deal with your side as well.

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The letter that you sent had a different number of pages with the one on the server. That being the case, the one on the server has been registered to A as the correct version.
Please deal accordingly for your side as well.

元の翻訳
The razor I sold is in brand new condition, and has not been sharpened a single time up until now.

Rest assured to know that in order to prevent rust, I wiped any moisture off completely.

The knife I sold is made with good-quality steel. Also, it is made in a small-scale workshop, and so the price is on the expensive side.

The knife I am selling hasn't been polished. It will be polished after the order has been made.

I think that the knife I am selling will bring you satisfaction. It is a very beautiful knife.

No matter how many knives you buy, they will be sent in the same package with postage fees of $21.

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The razor I sell is in brand new condition, and has not been sharpened a single time up until now.

Rest assured to know that in order to prevent rust, I wiped off any moisture completely.

The knife I sell is made with good-quality steel. Also, it is made in a small-scale workshop, and so the price is on the expensive side.

The knife I am selling hasn't been polished. It will be polished after the order has been made.

I think that the knife I am selling will bring you satisfaction. It is a very beautiful knife.

No matter how many knives you buy, they will be sent in the same package with postage fees of $21.

元の翻訳
If I have to choose one, I would say that I prefer big breasts.
I like people who are fun to be around.
How old are you?
What do you do for a living?
Do you have any Japanese friends? Where do they live?
My height is 178cm and I weigh 70kg, how about you?
What type of guy do you like?
How did you find me on LINE?

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If I have to choose one, I would say that I prefer big breasts.
I like people who are fun to be around.
How old are you?
What do you do for living?
Do you have any Japanese friends? Where do they live?
My height is 178cm and I weigh 70kg, how about you?
What type of guys do you like?
How did you find me on LINE?

元の翻訳
Regarding the returned goods from the customer.

As of right now, I have only been repaid $270.99 from the $905.54 cost of returned items from the customer, why is that? Right now, amongst the $905.54 worth of products, please let me know why some of the product payment is guaranteed by Amazon and some are not.

Regarding sales of products,↵
when I sell these kind of products, they must be put into a bag in which the contents cannot be seen. Is there a way for it to be done on Amazon's part? How much will that cost?

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Regarding the returned goods from the customer.

As of right now, I have only been repaid $270.99 from the $905.54 cost of returned items from the customer. Why is that? Right now, amongst the $905.54 worth of products, please let me know why some of the product payments are guaranteed by Amazon and some are not.

Regarding sales of products, when I sell these kind of products, they must be put into a bag in which the contents cannot be seen. Is there a way for it to be done on Amazon's part? How much will that cost?

元の翻訳
The latest news and newspaper articles, popular topics are collected all for easy, simple readability with the free news application, "kawara".
Since you can receive information about politics, economics, sports, entertainment, and even natural disasters, RSS readers are no longer necessary.

Regardless of if you are eating, putting on makeup, or empty-handed, you can browse the news with the included "skimming feature"!

With a terminally-specified region
Let's efficiently check the news of your own interest!
Skim with the icon tap
After tapping the icon, it will change to the skimming mode
Refresh
Terminally-specified region

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The latest news and newspaper articles, popular topics are collected all for easy, simple readability with the free news application, "kawara".
Since you can receive information about politics, economics, sports, entertainment, and even natural disasters, RSS readers are no longer necessary.

Regardless if you are eating, putting on makeup, or empty-handed, you can browse the news with the "skimming feature"!

With a terminally-specified region
Let's efficiently check the news of your own interest!
Skim with the icon tap
After tapping the icon, it will change to the skimming mode
Refresh
Terminally-specified region

元の翻訳
This is a question regarding UPS Account.
Hello, we are doing business with a company called ●● using UPS Account.
The other day, I was notified by ●● that the UPS Account was cancelled.

1. Why was the UPS Account cancelled? Please provide the reason.
2. How can we restore the UPS Account and be able to use it as before?

Our company is a Japanese company. We would like to deliver to the following address in America.

Our company's location in Japan
Please reply as soon as possible.

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This is a question regarding a UPS account.
Hello, we are doing business with a company called ●● using a UPS account.
The other day, I was notified by ●● that the UPS account was cancelled.

1. Why was the UPS Account cancelled? Please provide the reason.
2. How can we restore the UPS Account and be able to use it as before?

Our company is a Japanese company. We would like to deliver to the following address in America.

Our company's located in Japan.
Please reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I will refund all of it: the lens (including the shipping), the return postage, import tax.
However, please send a copy of the proof of import tax and return postage along with the item.

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I will refund all of it: the lens (including the shipping fee), the return postage, import tax.
However, please attach a copy of the proof of import tax and return postage along with the item.

元の翻訳
Firstly, regarding the "delivery label".

Please paste the delivery table on top of the bar code.
The delivery label must be pasted on each individual product.
Please make sure there all of them have a label pasted.
I am sending an example photo.

Secondly, regarding the "statement of delivery"
The statement of delivery must be inserted at the top of the box.
After that, the box will be closed.
Please make sure the printing is not misaligned.
I will send another example photo.

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Firstly, regarding the "delivery label".

Please paste the delivery label on top of the bar code.
The delivery label must be pasted on each individual product.
Please make sure there all of them have a label pasted.
I am sending an example photo.

Secondly, regarding the "statement of delivery"
The statement of delivery must be inserted at the top of the box.
After that, the box will be closed.
Please make sure the printing is not misaligned.
I will send another example photo.