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日本語

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英語

We will provide some non-alcoholic drinks,some snacks and donuts by class expense.We are also happy that you will bring something to eat and drink for sharing from your place!(going shopping is not required.)
Could I ask you to make progress of the presents exchange because presume there wont be so much time on the day?
Please remember your children may come to join with their present for exchanging on the day.

Thank you so much for arranging the date of this event.

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ctplers99はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/12/14 21:42:23

元の翻訳
We will provide some non-alcoholic drinks,some snacks and donuts by class expense.We are also happy that you will bring something to eat and drink for sharing from your place!(going shopping is not required.)
Could I ask you to make progress of the presents exchange because presume there wont be so much time on the day?
Please remember your children may come to join with their present for exchanging on the day.

Thank you so much for arranging the date of this event.

修正後
We will provide some non-alcoholic drinks,some snacks and donuts by class expense.We are also happy that you will bring something to eat and drink for sharing from your place!(going shopping is not required.)
Could I ask you to make progress of the presents exchange because presume there wont be so much time on the day?
Please remember your children come to join with their present for exchanging on the day.

Thank you so much for arranging the date of this event.