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日本語

こんにちは

いつも有り難うございます

この商品ですが、同じ用にワイヤーが取り外しできるような商品ですか？

商品URL

写真を添付します。写真の商品の型番は下記になります。少し古いモデルだと思います。
商品の詳細は以下になります。

至急調べてもらえないですか？

よろしくお願いします。

英語

Hello.

I would like to inquire about this product, can the wire be detached in the same way?

Product URL:

I have attached a photo. The model number is the following and I think it's one of the bit older items.
The product details are as below.

Would you be kind enough to let me know right away?

Thanks and regards,

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yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/04/08 09:42:40

元の翻訳
Hello.

I would like to inquire about this product, can the wire be detached in the same way?

Product URL:

I have attached a photo. The model number is the following and I think it's one of the bit older items.
The product details are as below.

Would you be kind enough to let me know right away?

Thanks and regards,

修正後
Hello.

I would like to inquire about this product. Can the wire be detached in the same way?

Product URL:

I have attached a photo. The model number is the following and I think it's one of the bit older items.
The product details are as below.

Would you be kind enough to let me know right away?

Thanks and regards,

[shintaro_t]

ご指摘いただき、改めて英文として不自然な文章になっていたことが分かりました。ありがとうございます。