翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 海外のセラーとの交渉文です。

日本語

ご提示してくれた価格では採算が取れないので購入はしません。

しかし、私はあなたから他にも仕入る商品があるかもしれません。
あなたの商品リストを教えてくれませんか？

ぜひ、よい取引をしましょう。

英語

I cannot make a profit off of the price you are suggesting to me, so I am not going to buy it.

However, there might be other items in your inventory I would like from you.
Could you please tell me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.

レビュー ( 2 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/10 01:14:26

元の翻訳
I cannot make a profit off of the price you are suggesting to me, so I am not going to buy it.

However, there might be other items in your inventory I would like from you.
Could you please tell me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.

修正後
I cannot make a profit off of the price you are suggesting to me, so I am not going to buy it.

However, there might be other items (in your inventory) I would like from you.
Could you please tell me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.

"in your inventory" was not actually included in the Japanese text, but this is still a good translation.

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/11 18:59:01

元の翻訳
I cannot make a profit off of the price you are suggesting to me, so I am not going to buy it.

However, there might be other items in your inventory I would like from you.
Could you please tell me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.

修正後
I cannot make a profit off of the price you are offering to me, so I am not going to purchase it.

However, there might be other items that I may be interested in purchasing from you.
Could you please provide me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.