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評価: 61 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/09/02 11:14:49

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cielo_translation 61 2015年3月に英日翻訳でJTFほんやく検定3級を取得(翻訳士) 大学で...
日本語

なぜ商品を返品しなければいけないのですか?
また返品する際の送料は私が負担しなければいけないのですか?
送料は大変高額になります。
返品をしてさらに一部のご返金しかないのであれば私は大変大きな損害になります。
修理業者は輸送中の事故ではなく元々の不良と言ってました。
コンデンサーの液漏れ、断線、コンデンサーは焼き付いてました。
最初から壊れていたとしか思えないです。
全額返金が無理なのであれば一部ご返金下さい。
200ドルのご返金を希望します。
話が進まない場合はPAYPALに話をします。

英語

Why do I have to return the goods?
And why do I have to cover the return postage?
The postage will be quite expensive.
If I had to return the goods and receive only a partial refund, I will lose a lot of money.
According to the repair shop, it is a defective piece, rather than the damage being caused during transportation.
The condenser is leaking, the wire is disconnected, and the condenser is burnt.
I have to say it was damaged before you shipped it out.
If you cannot give me a full refund, please give me a partial refund.
I request that you pay back $200.00.
If there is no progress in the negotiation, I will talk to PayPal.

レビュー ( 1 )

acdcasic 60 こんにちは、遠藤です。日⇔英訳対応が可能なバイリンガルで、翻訳歴は5年です...
acdcasicはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/03 12:10:24

元の翻訳
Why do I have to return the goods?
And why do I have to cover the return postage?
The postage will be quite expensive.
If I had to return the goods and receive only a partial refund, I will lose a lot of money.
According to the repair shop, it is a defective piece, rather than the damage being caused during transportation.
The condenser is leaking, the wire is disconnected, and the condenser is burnt.
I have to say it was damaged before you shipped it out.
If you cannot give me a full refund, please give me a partial refund.
I request that you pay back $200.00.
If there is no progress in the negotiation, I will talk to PayPal.

修正後
Why do I have to return the goods?
And why do I have to cover the return postage?
The postage will be quite expensive.
If I had to return the goods and received only a partial refund, I would lose a lot of money.
According to the repair shop, it is a defective piece, rather than a damage in transit.
Capacitors leaked and burnt, and there is a broken wiring.
I have to say it was damaged before you shipped it out.
If you cannot give me a full refund, please give me a partial refund.
I request that you pay back $200.00.
If there is no progress in the negotiation, I will talk to PayPal.

condenserだとエアコン室外機みたいな熱交換器の部品をさし、電気のコンデンサはcapacitorです。disconnectだとプラグ抜けのような語感となるのでbrokenにしてみました。

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cielo_translation cielo_translation 2014/09/03 12:16:55

どうもありがとうございます。

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