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日本語

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英語

Please accept our sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused.
Our shipping department has failed to state the entire shipping address you specified.
We will reinforce the countermeasure for preventing such issues.

Additionally, thank you for notifying us as well as having received the package.
Kind reagrds.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/10 08:11:32

元の翻訳
Please accept our sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused.
Our shipping department has failed to state the entire shipping address you specified.
We will reinforce the countermeasure for preventing such issues.

Additionally, thank you for notifying us as well as having received the package.
Kind reagrds.

修正後
Please accept our sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused.
Our shipping department has failed to state the entire shipping address you specified.
We will reinforce the countermeasure for preventing such issues.

Additionally, thank you for notifying us as well as having received the package.
Kind regards.

And I prefer "enhance our auditing process" to "reinforce the countermeasure"

[tearz]

Thanks for your review as ever. The term audit seems like a common use in accounting and other major corporate activities (from MBA perspective). Perhaps can you come up with other practical expressions you could think of like something similar to "inspect"?

[[削除済みユーザ]]

"Audit" is the appropriate term here.