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rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 22 Aug 2015 at 20:00
Comment Grammatical errors: e.g. "it shown", "There are uneven coating", "outline does not noticeable", "how the progress" and many others. Typo...

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 19 Aug 2015 at 17:56
Comment The quality of translation is very bad. No grammatical sense at all. At least some parts of the text seem like Google translation. Fo...

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 15 Aug 2015 at 21:00
original Hello. We are under investigation of the non delivery Item. I would like to ask you that have you got any contact from custom about your request for rapidly refund? It is the onus on clearing thru Customs is Buyers by eBay agreement. If it is applicable of embargo goods, please take the procedure of refund. We will refund deducting the service charge and our default practical sending fee. In case of loss or any cause that we admit that you are not responsible of, we will pay full refund. Please wait for survey response form. Thank you for your corporation.	corrected Hello. We are under investigation of the non delivery Item. "We are under investigation" > 我々が捜査されている、という意味になります。 non delivery item > undelivered item ↵ ↵ I would like to ask you that have you got any contact from custom about your request for rapidly refund? ??? 英文の意味が不明↵ It is the onus on clearing thru Customs is Buyers by eBay agreement. If it is applicable of embargo goods, please take the procedure of refund. We will refund deducting the service charge and our default practical sending fee. In case of loss or any cause that we admit that you are not responsible of, we will pay full refund. Please wait for survey response form. Thank you for your corporation. ↵ ↵ 細かい文法ミスや単語の選択ミスが多く、文章として外国人が↵ 読んで意味が不明な箇所も多く、ビジネスメールとしては厳し↵ いです。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

15 Aug 2015 at 21:00

original
Hello.
We are under investigation of the non delivery Item.

I would like to ask you that have you got any contact from custom about your request for rapidly refund?

It is the onus on clearing thru Customs is Buyers by eBay agreement.

If it is applicable of embargo goods, please take the procedure of refund.

We will refund deducting the service charge and our default practical sending fee.
In case of loss or any cause that we admit that you are not responsible of, we will pay full refund.
Please wait for survey response form.
Thank you for your corporation.

corrected
Hello.
We are under investigation of the non delivery Item.
"We are under investigation" > 我々が捜査されている、という意味になります。
non delivery item > undelivered item ↵
↵
I would like to ask you that have you got any contact from custom about your request for rapidly refund?
??? 英文の意味が不明↵

It is the onus on clearing thru Customs is Buyers by eBay agreement.

If it is applicable of embargo goods, please take the procedure of refund.

We will refund deducting the service charge and our default practical sending fee.
In case of loss or any cause that we admit that you are not responsible of, we will pay full refund.
Please wait for survey response form.
Thank you for your corporation. ↵
↵
細かい文法ミスや単語の選択ミスが多く、文章として外国人が↵
読んで意味が不明な箇所も多く、ビジネスメールとしては厳し↵
いです。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 24 Jul 2015 at 12:38
Comment 問題ありません

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 24 Jul 2015 at 12:37
Comment ここではAdviseは知らせるという意味です。最後の文章が訳されていません。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 15 Jul 2015 at 17:41
original I would like to refound US＄67 through paypal because there is a mistake about hood description. Can you accept this settlement? I will be waiting for your reply. Best Regards.	corrected I would like to refund US$67 that you paid through paypal because there was a mistake in the description of the hood. Can you accept this settlement? I look forward to your response. Best Regards.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 15 Jul 2015 at 17:37
Comment 文法ミス、不自然な表現・単語の選択が多々あります。一部の例： It seems to have already ships > It seems to have already been shipped commodity > item/product only ...

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2015 at 08:21
original Thank you for your inquiry. This product will be send by airmail, therefor there will be no tracking code. If you have any other questions please let us know by email. Please wait a while until your goods arrive.	corrected Thank you for your inquiry.↵ This product will be sent by airmail, therefore there is no tracking number.↵ If you have any other questions please let us know by email.↵ Please wait a while until your goods arrive.

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 13 May 2015 at 14:08
Comment 文法、スペルミス、単語の選択の間違いがあまりに多い。単数複数、動詞活用など、基礎的な間違いが多数。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 05 May 2015 at 08:48
original Is this your first travel in Japan? Many foringners come to Shirosaki recently. Shirosaki has 7 public bath house. I reccommend you "Go Sho No Yu","Iti No Yu"and"Kou No Yu".You must go there with Kevin while you are in Japan. How was Tokyo? Where did you go? They are YUKATA and SETTA.Defenitely It will good on you.Do you want to have them? I 'll present some for you this time. Can we go to HANANOYA? Or not? How long dose it take to Japan from U.S.? Aren't you tiered?	corrected Is this your first visit to Japan? Many foreigners come to Shirosaki recently. Shirosaki has 7 public bath houses. I recommend you "Go Sho No Yu","Iti No Yu"and"Kou No Yu". You must go there with Kevin while you are in Japan. How was Tokyo? Where else did you go? They are YUKATA and SETTA. Defenitely they will look good on you. Do you want them too? I'll get you as a gift next time. Do you want to go to HANANOYA now? What should we do? How long does it take to Japan from the U.S.? Aren't you tired?

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

05 May 2015 at 08:48

original
Is this your first travel in Japan?

Many foringners come to Shirosaki recently.
Shirosaki has 7 public bath house.
I reccommend you "Go Sho No Yu","Iti No Yu"and"Kou No Yu".You must go there with Kevin while you are in Japan.

How was Tokyo? Where did you go?

They are YUKATA and SETTA.Defenitely It will good on you.Do you want to have them? I 'll present some for you this time.

Can we go to HANANOYA? Or not?
How long dose it take to Japan from U.S.? Aren't you tiered?

corrected
Is this your first visit to Japan?

Many foreigners come to Shirosaki recently.
Shirosaki has 7 public bath houses.
I recommend you "Go Sho No Yu","Iti No Yu"and"Kou No Yu". You must go there with Kevin while you are in Japan.

How was Tokyo? Where else did you go?

They are YUKATA and SETTA. Defenitely they will look good on you. Do you want them too? I'll get you as a gift next time.

Do you want to go to HANANOYA now? What should we do?
How long does it take to Japan from the U.S.? Aren't you tired?

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 05 May 2015 at 01:50
Comment 問題ありません。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 May 2015 at 01:17
original Thank you for your message. I only accept the payment with PayPal. I do not understand the payment method other than that.	corrected Thank you for your message. I only accept the payment with PayPal. >I have only [used/dealt with] Paypal before.↵ I do not understand the payment method other than that. >I do not know about other methods.

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 05 May 2015 at 01:21
Comment 時制と文法から全くできていません。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 03 Apr 2015 at 01:37
Comment Toru > とおる・トオルくさい > ください The translations are too literal.

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 31 Mar 2015 at 08:48
Comment return labelとは返品用のラベルのことです。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 21 Mar 2015 at 02:02
Comment 問題ありません

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 24 Feb 2015 at 21:05
original Is it possible to delivery to China? I bought goods from here. If it is possible, can you tell me about delivery charges?	corrected Is it possible to have the goods I buy here delivered to China? If it is possible, can you tell me the delivery charge to Qingdao?

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 21 Feb 2015 at 05:45
Comment courier account no. は配送会社のアカウント番号を指しているので、訳として本来の意図が伝わっていません。 Thanks以下も、重要部分ではありませんが、きちんと訳すべきです。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 21 Feb 2015 at 01:48
Comment The translation is too literal. 私は良いです。>私は元気です。こんにちは！チエ、アンナも！> こんにちは！チエ、またアンナです！

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 10 Feb 2015 at 11:01
Comment 問題ありません。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 06 Feb 2015 at 00:29
original We need you regulate voltage of eight to twelve 3-watt LED to connect series circuit. In this case, do we need to pay an additional charge?	corrected We need you to adjust the voltage so that we can use eight to twelve 3-watt LEDs connected in series. In this case, do we need to pay an additional fee?

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 05 Feb 2015 at 00:13
Comment The translation doesn't make sense. The author is the seller, not the buyer. He is asking for help to the website (maybe Amazon or eBay)...

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 03 Feb 2015 at 08:56
Comment 最初の文章の解釈が間違っています。 GreetingsはHelloと同じ。以下の文とは関係ありません。配達日の1/21から数えて、まだ返品可能期間中のはずだということを言っています。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 04 Feb 2015 at 06:35
Comment 不自然な語彙の仕様や初歩的な文法ミスが多数（以下、例） associations > organizations which held > which was held five year > five years Abe ministry > Abe Cabine...

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 01 Feb 2015 at 03:45
original Since I was the kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to obtain it beautifully. Now I became adult, and it is getting achieved with the skill of the sculpture. More than finishing the accessories, finding the stone at the beach is creative for me. When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really the wonderful place.	corrected Since I was a kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to wear them beautifully. Now I became an adult, and I am starting to achieve [that dream] with the skill of the sculpture. More than finishing the accessories, finding the stones at the beach is a creative activity for me. When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really a wonderful place.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

01 Feb 2015 at 03:45

original
Since I was the kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to obtain it beautifully. Now I became adult, and it is getting achieved with the skill of the sculpture.
More than finishing the accessories, finding the stone at the beach is creative for me.
When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really the wonderful place.

corrected
Since I was a kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to wear them beautifully. Now I became an adult, and I am starting to achieve [that dream] with the skill of the sculpture.
More than finishing the accessories, finding the stones at the beach is a creative activity for me.
When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really a wonderful place.

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