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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jun 2014 at 17:08
Comment 細かい表現を２，３、気をつければとても良い英訳になると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Aug 2014 at 00:43
original Thank you for visiting our store. We have just started up and are happy to serve you. We purchased most of our products in Japan. We pack our goods thoroughly and ship them quickly. If you are looking for anything, please feel free to ask us.	corrected Thank you for visiting our store. We have just started up and are happy to serve you. We purchased most of our products in Japan. ↵ We pack our goods thoroughly and ship them quickly. ↵ If you are looking for anything, please feel free to contact us.

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 11 Jun 2014 at 17:16
Comment 通貨の誤表記は致命的です。その他の文章全般も読んでいて不快感を覚えるほど誤訳が目立ちます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 10 Jun 2014 at 23:06
Comment 読みやすい文章になっていたとおもいます。ただ、この内容はダイソンを筆頭に新規事業の醍醐味をまとめたものなので、patentという要の単語を発明と訳してしまったのは痛恨のミスだと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 10 Jun 2014 at 22:53
Comment 細かい間違いがちょっと気になってしまいます。

rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English 11 Jun 2014 at 17:22
Comment 原文では「配達遅延が起きやすいようだ」という発生率が可能性として高いといっていますが、英訳のようにそれが「必ず起きる」とは言っていません。それから「アイテムは既に発送済み」と書いてあるので「これから送ります」的な表現は不適切です。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 10 Jun 2014 at 12:46
Comment 拡大印刷するか　という文言の対訳が抜けているように見えます。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 10 Jun 2014 at 12:45
Comment いいと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jun 2014 at 22:06
original Re-enter the same password. When you check this you'll receive new project information on Kickstarter. Move on to the next window after typing 'Sign me UP!' --Click 'Me' on the upper right corner. --Click 'Edit Settings' in the menu. --Select either Osaka, Sapporo, or Tokyo in 'Time zone' and click 'Save settings.' When you choose your location, the deadline for projects will be shown in the Japanese Standard Time. It's easier to recognise.	corrected Re-enter the same password. When you enter a tick, you'll receive new project information on Kickstarter. Move on to the next window after clicking 'Sign me UP!' --Click 'Me' on the upper right corner. --Click 'Edit Settings' from menu. --Select either Osaka, Sapporo, or Tokyo from 'Time zone' and click 'Save settings.' When you choose your location, the deadline for projects will be shown in the Japanese Standard Time. It's easier to recognise.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

11 Jun 2014 at 22:06

original
Re-enter the same password.
When you check this you'll receive new project information on Kickstarter.
Move on to the next window after typing 'Sign me UP!'
--Click 'Me' on the upper right corner.
--Click 'Edit Settings' in the menu.
--Select either Osaka, Sapporo, or Tokyo in 'Time zone' and click 'Save settings.'
When you choose your location, the deadline for projects will be shown in the Japanese Standard Time. It's easier to recognise.

corrected
Re-enter the same password.
When you enter a tick, you'll receive new project information on Kickstarter.
Move on to the next window after clicking 'Sign me UP!'
--Click 'Me' on the upper right corner.
--Click 'Edit Settings' from menu.
--Select either Osaka, Sapporo, or Tokyo from 'Time zone' and click 'Save settings.'
When you choose your location, the deadline for projects will be shown in the Japanese Standard Time. It's easier to recognise.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 10 Jun 2014 at 12:49
Comment 表現の簡潔さと正確さを見直すと良い文章になると思います。今のままだと読んでいても和文の意図が英訳にしっくりとこない感じがします。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jun 2014 at 18:21
Comment 2段落目は商品紹介の文言のようですので、よりパンチの効いた表現になるといいと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 09 Jun 2014 at 18:26
Comment ｆｕｎｃｔｉｏｎａｌｉｔｙという表現の使い方について、ちょっとクセのある訳し方のように見えます。最終文には和文から読みきれない意気込みのようなものが見え隠れしているのでそれをうまく英訳できるとより素晴らしい文章になると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jun 2014 at 18:30
Comment センスの良さを感じます。今回肝要と思われる最初の行の訳がちょっと迫力に欠けてしまっていて残念です。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jun 2014 at 12:37
Comment よりパンチの効いたシャープさがあるといいと思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 09 Jun 2014 at 00:59
Comment 間違いがいくつかあるとはいえ、必死な気持ちが伝わってくるいい文面は翻訳者のお人柄でしょうね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jun 2014 at 11:02
Comment 表現の工夫に気をつけてみると訳がより生き生きとしてくると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jun 2014 at 11:26
original My apologies. The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product. This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer CMS. It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul I will cancel the bid for you. It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose. My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.	corrected My apologies. The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product. This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer called CMS. It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul we will cancel the bid for you. It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose. My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

08 Jun 2014 at 11:26

original
My apologies.
The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product.
This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer CMS.
It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul I will cancel the bid for you.

It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose.

My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

corrected
My apologies.
The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product.
This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer called CMS.
It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul we will cancel the bid for you.

It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose.

My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jun 2014 at 11:06
Comment センスの良さを感じます。ブラッシュアップされた英訳を楽しみにしています。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 09 Jun 2014 at 01:11
Comment 語尾の統一と若干のＴｙｐｏを除けばよい文章だったと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jun 2014 at 13:03
Comment センスの良さを感じます。専門用語が適確に取り込めるようになるとよりよい文章になると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 20 Nov 2014 at 20:20
original I would like to purchase 50 pieces. Please send it to the following address. I would like to use Pay Pal for this payment. PayPal address: Please send me the invoice.	corrected I would like to purchase 50 pieces. Please send it to the following address. I would like to use Pay Pal for this payment. My PayPal address: Please send me the invoice.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 20 Nov 2014 at 20:19
original I'll buy 50. I'd like you to send to the following address: I use PayPal. PayPal address : Please send an invoice.	corrected I'll buy 50 pieces. Please ship to the following address: I use PayPal for my payment. My PayPal address : Please send an invoice to me.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 20 Nov 2014 at 20:18
original I'd like to have 50. Please send them following address. I'll pay for you by Paypal.↵ Address of PayPal: Please send me invoice.	corrected I'd like to purchase 50 pieces. Please send them to the following address. I'd like to use PayPal for my payment.↵ My PayPal address: Please send me an invoice.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 20 Nov 2014 at 20:17
original I will purchase 50. Please send it to the following address. I will pay through Paypal. My Paypal address: Please send me an invoice.	corrected I will purchase 50 pieces. Please send it to the following address. I will pay through Paypal. My Paypal address: Please send me an invoice.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 08 Jun 2014 at 13:06
Comment この手の翻訳依頼は捉えどころが難しく私もあまり手がだせないのですが、なかなかのチャレンジャーだと思います。

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