スージー (sujiko) — Received Reviews
The reviewed activity that other translators made to this user's works. This activity includes writing corrections and comments to those translations.
04 May 2017 at 11:30
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27 Apr 2017 at 20:14
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26 Apr 2017 at 11:00
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Comment 分かりやすい日本語に訳されていると思います。 |
25 Apr 2017 at 21:03
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25 Apr 2017 at 12:16
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Comment 全体的に直訳的なので、もう少し自然なh日本語になるといいと思います。 |
23 Apr 2017 at 20:57
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18 Apr 2017 at 09:36
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25 Apr 2017 at 02:56
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28 Apr 2017 at 15:04
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Comment 素晴らしいと思います。 |
01 May 2017 at 18:21
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17 Apr 2017 at 19:43
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13 Apr 2017 at 07:49
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12 Apr 2017 at 18:40
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10 Apr 2017 at 02:35
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Comment 良いと思います。文頭wanted to take a secondはバッサリ切ってしまうか、感謝をお伝えするために筆を執りましたなどと意訳する方が自然かもしれません。 |
09 Apr 2017 at 15:55
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10 Apr 2017 at 19:37
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10 Apr 2017 at 18:39
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04 Apr 2017 at 22:10
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30 Mar 2017 at 19:12
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29 Mar 2017 at 14:31
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Comment Great! |
27 Mar 2017 at 11:14
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14 Apr 2017 at 15:37
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Comment 原文が理解しづらいのもあると思うのですが、日本語が不自然です。 |
23 Mar 2017 at 20:11
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Comment 少し直訳過ぎて不自然だと思います。 |
21 Mar 2017 at 21:02
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05 Apr 2017 at 17:36
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