しおとん (shioton) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 03 Mar 2014 at 13:51
original What I brought was a new OO I've told them about it and re-sending the missing items.	corrected What I bought was a new OO. I've told them about it and asked them to resend the missing items.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 18 Feb 2014 at 19:42
original I have sent you the item. It's still at the Post Ofiice. I checked the tracking number but it shows nothing yet. It will take sometime to be reflected the tracking state. You are requesting a refund to Paypal. Please cancel it. Even I send you a new one, the claim will remain. Please cancel the claim. I will refund you if the phone was damaged and unable to use. I trust you so I send you a new one. Therefore please send it back to me.	corrected I have sent you the item. It's still at the Post Ofiice. I checked the tracking number but it shows nothing yet. It will take some time to be reflected on the tracking status. You are requesting a refund from Paypal. Please cancel it. Even if I send you a new one, the claim will remain. Please cancel the claim. I will refund you if the phone was damaged and unable to be used. I'm trusting you so I have sent you a new one. Therefore please send it back to me.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

18 Feb 2014 at 19:42

original
I have sent you the item.
It's still at the Post Ofiice.
I checked the tracking number but it shows nothing yet.
It will take sometime to be reflected the tracking state.

You are requesting a refund to Paypal.
Please cancel it.

Even I send you a new one, the claim will remain.

Please cancel the claim.

I will refund you if the phone was damaged and unable to use.
I trust you so I send you a new one.
Therefore please send it back to me.

corrected
I have sent you the item.
It's still at the Post Ofiice.
I checked the tracking number but it shows nothing yet.
It will take some time to be reflected on the tracking status.

You are requesting a refund from Paypal.
Please cancel it.

Even if I send you a new one, the claim will remain.

Please cancel the claim.

I will refund you if the phone was damaged and unable to be used.
I'm trusting you so I have sent you a new one.
Therefore please send it back to me.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 17 Feb 2014 at 22:44
original いいえ　返金は望みません。　他のものを送ってください。　そうでなければフィードバックに悪い評価をしなければいけません。私のオーダーをキャンセルして下さい。　間違った記事を注文しました。　ごめんなさい、よろしく。 I've contacted to the copyright owner about following apologize. It's bout "I will never sell this brand" Currently, I'm waiting for reply. Thank you.	corrected いいえ　返金は望みません。　他のものを送ってください。　そうでなければフィードバックに悪い評価をしなければいけません。私のオーダーをキャンセルして下さい。　間違った品物を注文しました。　ごめんなさい、よろしく。 I've contacted to the copyright owner about following apologize. It's bout "I will never sell this brand" Currently, I'm waiting for reply. Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

17 Feb 2014 at 22:44

original
いいえ　返金は望みません。　他のものを送ってください。　そうでなければフィードバックに悪い評価をしなければいけません。
私のオーダーをキャンセルして下さい。　間違った記事を注文しました。　ごめんなさい、よろしく。

I've contacted to the copyright owner about following apologize.
It's bout "I will never sell this brand"
Currently, I'm waiting for reply.
Thank you.

corrected
いいえ　返金は望みません。　他のものを送ってください。　そうでなければフィードバックに悪い評価をしなければいけません。
私のオーダーをキャンセルして下さい。　間違った品物を注文しました。　ごめんなさい、よろしく。

I've contacted to the copyright owner about following apologize.
It's bout "I will never sell this brand"
Currently, I'm waiting for reply.
Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 20 Dec 2013 at 10:14
original #william I appreciate your quick response. I'd be glad if you can give me the tracking number after you send it. I will introduce your products to my costumers. #habit The return goods have delivered to there on 18th. Sorry to cause you trouble but please begin the process of refund when you get ready. Thank you.	corrected #william I appreciate your quick response. I'd be glad if you could give me the tracking number after you send it. I will introduce your products to my customers. #habit The return goods have been delivered to you on the 18th. Sorry for causing you the trouble but please proceed with a refund when you get ready. Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 09 Dec 2013 at 22:29
original Sorry for having trouble this time. There were not description about the condition of the booklet; however, I uploaded the picture so you could see and confirm its condition from it. Since you successfully bid the booklet with some luck, I'm thinking about giving you a refund of $20. How does that sound to you? I will accept the return of course, so please let me know your request.	corrected Sorry for this trouble caused. There was not a description about the condition of the booklet; however, I uploaded the picture so you could see and confirm its condition from it. Since you successfully bid the booklet with some luck, I'm thinking about giving you a refund of $20. How does that sound to you? I will accept the return, of course, so please let me know your request.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 09 Dec 2013 at 17:47
original Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased due to the System A. If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option. Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy. I will refund $114 before the shipment. Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it after the next day once you make the re-order. Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.	corrected Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased with system A. If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option. Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy. I will refund $114 to you before the shipment. Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it the next day after you make the re-order. Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

09 Dec 2013 at 17:47

original
Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased due to the System A.
If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option.
Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy.
I will refund $114 before the shipment.
Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it after the next day once you make the re-order.
Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

corrected
Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased with system A.
If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option.
Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy.
I will refund $114 to you before the shipment.
Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it the next day after you make the re-order.
Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 06 Dec 2013 at 23:38
original At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong. There is no mistake in my description. The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much. I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that. The product is dusty as I described in the description. He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she is suitable for her/him.	corrected At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong. There is no mistake in my description. The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much. I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that. The product is dusty as I described in the description. He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she thinks is suitable for her/him.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

06 Dec 2013 at 23:38

original
At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong.
There is no mistake in my description.
The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much.
I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that.
The product is dusty as I described in the description.
He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she is suitable for her/him.

corrected
At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong.
There is no mistake in my description.
The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much.
I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that.
The product is dusty as I described in the description.
He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she thinks is suitable for her/him.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 29 May 2013 at 03:26
Comment Though it conveys the meaning, a little more care is needed to avoid translating verbatim. For example : "The total will be around ten" ...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 22 May 2013 at 08:41
Comment 最後の段落が、自然さに欠けると感じました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 23 May 2013 at 16:05
Comment 素晴らしい翻訳です。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 21 May 2013 at 17:04
Comment 素晴らしい翻訳です。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 21 May 2013 at 14:54
Comment 人が着いたのか物が着いたのか、翻訳者お二人でそれぞれなので、どっちでも対応できますね。とてもお上手ですね。ほとんどネイティブですか？ただ、一番最後の文は違っていますね。お母さんの代わりに、「私の携帯」から～ですから。ここはお二人とも間違っちゃいましたね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 21 May 2013 at 13:37
Comment I think it's good.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 21 May 2013 at 11:08
Comment Nice touch adding "Hi" at the beginning.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 11 Sep 2014 at 07:23
original こんにちわ。私たちはアメリカ国内の住所あてのみ販売しております。もしペイパルやグーグルアカウントを持っていれば、私たちから購入することはできます。私どもの使用しているクレジットカード決済は海外のカード処理を致しません。ほしい商品と個数を教えていただけると見積もりをだして価格を修正します。よろしくお願いします。サムまさあき　さんど　様メールありがとうございます。私たちは沢山の日本の会社に売っています。そして貴方の会社にもこの機会に売りたいと思います。フロリダの貴社の貨物輸送業者あてに送ることもできます。どの商品を買うことに興味があるのかを教えてください。よろしくお願いしますカート	corrected こんにちは。私たちはアメリカ国内の住所あてのみ販売しております。もしペイパルやグーグルアカウントを持っていれば、私たちから購入することはできます。私どもの使用しているクレジットカード決済は海外のカード処理を致しません。ほしい商品と個数を教えていただけると見積もりをだして価格を修正します。よろしくお願いします。サムまさあき　さんど　様メールありがとうございます。私たちは沢山の日本の会社に売っています。そして貴方の会社にもこの機会に売りたいと思います。フロリダの貴社の貨物輸送業者あてに送ることもできます。どの商品を買うことに興味があるのかを教えてください。よろしくお願いしますカート

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

11 Sep 2014 at 07:23

original
こんにちわ。

私たちはアメリカ国内の住所あてのみ販売しております。もしペイパルやグーグルアカウントを持っていれば、私たちから購入することはできます。私どもの使用しているクレジットカード決済は海外のカード処理を致しません。ほしい商品と個数を教えていただけると見積もりをだして価格を修正します。

よろしくお願いします。
サム

まさあき　さんど　様

メールありがとうございます。私たちは沢山の日本の会社に売っています。そして貴方の会社にもこの機会に売りたいと思います。フロリダの貴社の貨物輸送業者あてに送ることもできます。どの商品を買うことに興味があるのかを教えてください。

よろしくお願いします
カート

corrected
こんにちは。

私たちはアメリカ国内の住所あてのみ販売しております。もしペイパルやグーグルアカウントを持っていれば、私たちから購入することはできます。私どもの使用しているクレジットカード決済は海外のカード処理を致しません。ほしい商品と個数を教えていただけると見積もりをだして価格を修正します。

よろしくお願いします。
サム

まさあき　さんど　様

メールありがとうございます。私たちは沢山の日本の会社に売っています。そして貴方の会社にもこの機会に売りたいと思います。フロリダの貴社の貨物輸送業者あてに送ることもできます。どの商品を買うことに興味があるのかを教えてください。

よろしくお願いします
カート

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 21 May 2013 at 20:06
Comment sending a sample -> samples 160007 a sample of correct size of the file box -> a correct sized sample of 160007, a file box above two i...

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