Jade Chong (crowley44) — Written Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★ Korean → English 31 Oct 2013 at 00:37
original We finished our internal review according to your business plan. However, unfortunately we concluded that we process further investment. The reasons are vary that we cannot process the investment and please consider that we make wrong decisions sometimes since we are also one of the customers. Please continue your business with your first faith and will of your business. We wish your healthful success in a distance.	corrected We have completed our internal review on the business plan that we have received. Unfortunately, we have conclude that we are unable to proceed with further investment. There are various reasons to why we are unable to proceed with our investments. As our company is one of your customers as well, we had considered that we may have made a wrong judgement. Because of this, it is our wish that your business will develop well encompassing your initial faith and will. Even from afar, we wish that your business will prosper and be in good health.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Korean → English

31 Oct 2013 at 00:37

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Chinese (Simplified) 07 Mar 2013 at 16:32
Comment 好像少了动词，建议：“运用才能可以取得游戏上的胜利，但拥有团队合作与智慧才能赢取冠军赛”（迈克尔·乔丹）元翻译太拗口了 - “我们可以获得比预期更好的结果”, "可以在全球范围上提高任何公司的团队合作。”

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Chinese (Simplified) 07 Mar 2013 at 16:16
Comment Very well translated!