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rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 14 Feb 2014 at 11:42
original 長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際とカスタマーサービスについてです。私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき確固たるステップを説明してください。以下のリンクに行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報が提供されています。お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。	corrected de maiil↵ 長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際に関する評価とカスタマーサービスについてです。私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき具体的なステップを説明してください。以下のリンクから行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報を参照してください。お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

14 Feb 2014 at 11:42

original
長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。

保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際とカスタマーサービスについてです。

私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき確固たるステップを説明してください。

以下のリンクに行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報が提供されています。

お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。
またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。

corrected
de maiil↵
長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。

保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際に関する評価とカスタマーサービスについてです。

私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき具体的なステップを説明してください。

以下のリンクから行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報を参照してください。

お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。
またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 12 Feb 2014 at 12:55
original 長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際とカスタマーサービスについてです。私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき確固たるステップを説明してください。以下のリンクに行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報が提供されています。お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。	corrected 長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際とカスタマーサービスについてです。私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき具体的なステップを説明してください。以下のリンクに行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報が提供されています。お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

12 Feb 2014 at 12:55

corrected
長らくお待たせして、申し訳ございません。

保留の件に焦点をあてて、今後の対応策を、再度書き直すべきだと思われます。得に、高い頻度で発生する注文不手際とカスタマーサービスについてです。

私どもが求めているスタンダードに達する為に、貴社が取るべき具体的なステップを説明してください。

以下のリンクに行動計画を作成するにあたっての、情報が提供されています。

お待たせいたしたことを再度お詫びするとともに、Ｂにご連絡いただいとことを感謝します。
またのご連絡を心待ちにしております。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 10 Feb 2014 at 14:07
Comment Grammar and tense mistakes

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Feb 2014 at 23:47
original I am afraid that the base guitars listed up in the origina pictures are all sold out. I am working with our dealer to put together the pictures of the base guitars that are currently availble. So please give us a moment. I will let you know as soon as I finish doing so. Please let us know your review once you play the guitar by sending us the email to our customer service. Here is the example.... I will try my best to find the guitar you want. As soon as I find out, I will send you an email.	corrected I am afraid that the bass guitars listed up in the original pictures are all sold out. I am working with the maker and dealer to put together the pictures of the bass guitars that are currently available. Please give us some time, I will let you know as soon as I hear from them. Please let us know your review once you play the guitar by sending us an email about our customer service. Here is an example.... I will try my best to find the guitar you want. As soon as I find a recommended one, I will send you an email.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

08 Feb 2014 at 23:47

original
I am afraid that the base guitars listed up in the origina pictures are all sold out.
I am working with our dealer to put together the pictures of the base guitars that are currently availble. So please give us a moment. I will let you know as soon as I finish doing so.

Please let us know your review once you play the guitar by sending us the email to our customer service. Here is the example....
I will try my best to find the guitar you want. As soon as I find out, I will send you an email.

corrected
I am afraid that the bass guitars listed up in the original pictures are all sold out.
I am working with the maker and dealer to put together the pictures of the bass guitars that are currently available. Please give us some time, I will let you know as soon as I hear from them.

Please let us know your review once you play the guitar by sending us an email about our customer service. Here is an example....
I will try my best to find the guitar you want. As soon as I find a recommended one, I will send you an email.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 06 Feb 2014 at 11:02
original I can offer all the parts for the silver guitar that you are requesting.↵ The price is $* including shipping. Guitar V itself is $A. The shipping is $B. Therefore my best offer is $C wihich is the total of $A and $B. This is the special our online shop price. You cannot get this price at e-mall. The normal price is $D. So that means you can get the discount by $E! To be honest with you, there is little profit for us. This is the special price for only you if you can give us the additinal orders. If you want to return the previously purchased guitar for repair, you will need to pay $** for the shipping cost to JP. Iwould not recommend you to do so.	corrected I can backorder all the parts you inquired for the silver guitar. The price will be at $* including shipping charge. My best offer is a total at $C including the Guitar V at $A with the shipping charge at $B. This is the special limited price of our online shop, so you cannot get it at e-mall. The standard selling price is at $D, so it is even discounted at $E! To be honest, we cannot make any profit out of this. This is the special price dedicated only for you since you could give us the additional order. Because you will be responsible for the return shipping charge about $**, we would not recommend you to return the guitar you previously purchased for the replacement.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

06 Feb 2014 at 11:02

original
I can offer all the parts for the silver guitar that you are requesting.↵
The price is $* including shipping.

Guitar V itself is $A. The shipping is $B. Therefore my best offer is $C wihich is the total of $A and $B.
This is the special our online shop price. You cannot get this price at e-mall.

The normal price is $D. So that means you can get the discount by $E!
To be honest with you, there is little profit for us.
This is the special price for only you if you can give us the additinal orders.

If you want to return the previously purchased guitar for repair, you will need to pay $** for the shipping cost to JP. Iwould not recommend you to do so.

corrected
I can backorder all the parts you inquired for the silver guitar. The price will be at $* including shipping charge.

My best offer is a total at $C including the Guitar V at $A with the shipping charge at $B.
This is the special limited price of our online shop, so you cannot get it at e-mall.

The standard selling price is at $D, so it is even discounted at $E!
To be honest, we cannot make any profit out of this.
This is the special price dedicated only for you since you could give us the additional order.

Because you will be responsible for the return shipping charge about $**, we would not recommend you to return the guitar you previously purchased for the replacement.

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